• Member Since 10th Mar, 2013
  • offline last seen Feb 24th, 2017

Uncle Knot


I write my stories on my ten minute breaks at work, read them like a detective

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If you ask Applejack where do apples come from? She would tell you apple trees. And if you asked her what is in an apple? She would tell you ... what? So what is in the box that the tree of Harmony gave to Twilight?

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This is a very difficult story to follow. It switches between characters and scenes so quickly, I feel like I'm getting whiplash just from reading it. I strongly recommend you try slowing things down. Take a little time to flesh out a single plot point before you start jumping over to a new one.

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