Rainbow Dash has finally given up on the wonder bolts but once the shadow bolts rise and want her to join will she finally give in. Mystery appears in it. If you don't know who Mystery is I suggest reading my fic mystery but you don't have to.
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Hrm.. Heavy is mildly interested. liked/tracked, Keep the updates coming, Also, First.
Heavy Claims First. Now we play the waiting game...
A Wandering Wizard claims Second.
Love how the story is developing.
391106 Thank you
and an inanimate object claims non-author third.
Hrrrm. Not your best chapter. But Okay.
rd's going for the loner-badass vibe over here. let's see what happens.
too bad i'm not in this story like i am in my story
420019 maybe you'll come in later on. I was actually thinking about it but I didn't know you when i was writing this story, or at least I had forgotten you.
that okay but would you add me later in the story please
420039 I'll try to find a way
:D
oh BTW this story is really good keep up the good work
420063 I do have some idea though
420066 thank you
you a very welcome
420102 just helping but it's you're welcome. Just helping.
that's ok because i'm a little tired so my spelling is going to suck
420167 It's okay
hmmm...
Slipstream approves this
Slipstream also requests improvement
do not disapoint Slipstream
Great plot, but you need to get a prereader. I see a ton of mistakes
A bit fast paced
Star Fire or Wind Fire?
Please continue. Anytime Dash turns dark I want to finish it.