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Discord: The Beggining

Chapters (3)

Chapter 1 · 21st Feb 2012 · 352 words
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Chapter 2 · 21st Feb 2012 · 360 words
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The release · 21st Feb 2012 · 91 words
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Leoheartxx2 #1 · Feb 21st, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

errr.....a little grammer mistakes here and spelling also...but ovarall still understandable...

but isnt ur story a bit too short? 300+ word doesnt really bring you far nor tell the readers what is going on....so expand the story

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RagingBrony19983 #2 · Feb 21st, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

242611 I know there are some mistakes it was the middle of the night when I wrote it and I didn't have much time to finish but there is going to be more than one chapter. I never do 1 chapter stories.

Leoheartxx2 #3 · Feb 22nd, 2012 · · · The release ·

243893
ok sure thing....just make it longer...my only request from you....i waana enjoy reading good story...

Private Pansy #4 · Feb 28th, 2012 · · · The release ·

this was so sad poor dissy

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