I just transferred to Canterlot High School last fall, apparently just before I transferred there was some major magical event involving a girl with flame-colored hair, her name is Sunset Shimmer and I've seen her around school a few times. She doesn't seem all that bad...In fact, she's really rather beautiful. And I want to get to know her better.
Author's Note: This is a romance fic set in the Equestria Girls universe, if you don't like Equestria Girls stuff. Leave now.
An Equestria Girls fanfic? This is pretty interesting.
This story is the shit. Been wanting to read a fanfic about sunset shimmer for a while.
And I was about to pour on my usual charm.
"So...Um...Nice weather we're having, eh?" I said...Like I said, full of charm..
That is exactly me.
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Glad you enjoyed it!
Ooh, this reminds me of a fanfic is been planning. Goddamnit, too many ideas.
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Dude. Trust me, I know how you feel, I've got like 3 other fanfic ideas in my head, this one has been in planning for awhile.
4251190 I have about six, and only three of them are in development.
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I have one fic that's in suspended development on my stories page that hasn't been published yet cause not enough words. And two that aren't MLP fics.
4251226 *nods slowly* it's hard being a fanfic writer.
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Yes indeed.
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I'll write more later.
4251291 NO! more now lol, I'm so funny I forgot to laugh at myself
seriously though nice story though I like it so far its unique and shows hey im not the only one who at least enjoyed EG at least a little I cant wait for the future
4251190 I'm liking I'm liking.
Sunset Shimmer's is one of those characters that i think Fan Fic can do wonders on her. I know that I want to pare her up with the 11th Doctor myself. (Whether or not romantic things happens is will...still a ongoing debate in my head.) Keep up the good work.
4251283 Oy! Ya stealin' my gig?!
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I thought I was the only EqG Fan around for awhile.
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Nice. I think Sunset Shimmer is my favorite villainess of all time and I agree that fan fics can do wonders for her, especially with her reformation.
Lol I mistaked this for another story I read.
4251371 possible just need the right writers and the fan base could take a liking to her even if she doesn't play a role in the new EG (not saying she doesn't but ya know) I may write my own fanfic on her now see what you got me doing
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We must strengthen our army! The world must be filled with Equestria Girls fics!
wait im confused it says you posted chapter 2 but I don't see it (im new here so if that's normal plz) but yeah show me da chapter
4251458 and yes we need more we shall prevail!!!!
show me your war face!
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I did have two chapters. But I combined Chapter 2 with Chapter 1.
When it was released, most people seemed to have hated Equestria Girls. I really liked it though, and I'm happy to see that someone else seems to have enjoyed it just as much as I did!
Here, have a brohoof and a mustache. /)
Have you heard about the sequel to Equestria Girls called Rainbow Rocks? I can't wait for it to come out!!
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I was skeptical at first. But Equestria Girls became my second most favorite animated movie of all time.
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Yes. I am pumped for Rainbow Rocks!
4251458 I'm with you on that one! I'm actually working on an Equestria girls fic right now! I'm glad to know that there's more people out there who love Equestria girls as much as I do!
4251540 Rainbow Rock looks cool shows hope for my favorite pony Vinyl getting a decent role and a voice
4251540 Gave your first chapter a read. I like it!
I feel like this story so far describes how my boyfriend felt before he asked me out. Super-duper shy and wanting to say something all the time, but school gets in the way of even thinking about making a move.
That must have been really stressful for him....
....Sorry, did I make this too personal? If it made you uncomfortable, it wasn't my intention. Just thought I would share what your story so far reminds me of with you.
....It sucks that Rainbow Rocks doesn't come out until the fall or something like that. Random Fun Fact of the Day: Equestria Girls came out the day after my birthday! Thanks, Hasbro, for the late birthday present!
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I would like them to keep Vinyl mute, but I think she'll get a bigger role.
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That's sweet. :) I wouldn't know since I've never had a girlfriend.
But nah, this wasn't awkward. It's cool.
And it's awesome EqG came out right after your birthday.
4251599 I think that's a good idea I mean nobody really fits the description on how I think vinyl's voice should sound like Nowacking's voice is just too tom-boyish
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Nowacking is pretty much how I imagine Vinyl's voice.
4251599 Aww. Yeah, I never thought anyone was going to like me like me either. The way life can throw you in for a loop....
Anyway, I can't wait for another chapter on this story of yours. I just realized this is the first EqG story I've read.
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I go out of my way to make people not like me...Hence why I'm in therapy. Anyway, y'all didn't come here for my life story.
I look forward to writing more of this fic!
4251636 Me too! Good luck with it!
Here is a mustache of encouragement. ->
:)
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Thank you. :)
4251665 You're most welcome, my friend. ^-^
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^_^
I like it. Could use a bit of tweaking grammar wise... but what fic doesn't.
Not really a fan of Equestrian Girls, but I like how you're starting this. I take it that the main character's identity not being revealed is a plot point. Is that coming up later or at the end?
Well no matter, this is a pretty good first chapter and I look forward to where you take this.
4253173 What'd'cha say m8? That's it! I'mma shank ya!
4251961 "Hi, I'm Barry Scott, and this is NEW Cillitt Bang Grease & Floor!"
Now this I'm keeping a eye on. Lets see how this plays out.
This is interesting. More, please.
There were a few grammar mistakes, but I don't let that decide if I like the story or not. I do like this, and I hope it is updated soon.
Pretty good so far.
Please continue when you have the chance.
Hey, you took my advice, and now your on the popular stories list, the side bar at least. It still is better than me so, congratulations
Finally, another liker of Sunny!
This story already got me hooked, you better continue this buddy, 'cause it'll reach far.
This isn't too bad, keep going i say, I wanna see where this goes!
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You butter be bready to back that threat up.