The Pink Mile

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Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #1 · Apr 17th, 2014 · · · Monday Morning ·

"shaking her hooves with a pistol in her hands." Hooves or hands? Otherwise it's a good fanfic.

SolidStone

SolidStone #2 · Apr 17th, 2014 · · · Tuesday Afternoon ·

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sorry, although I'm trying to keep focus, some little mistakes get by.
If you catch any others let me know so I can fix them.

I want this to be my creme de la creme of my works.

Willsons

Willsons #3 · Apr 17th, 2014 · · · Tuesday Afternoon ·

I assume you are the original writer of this and didn't just take it from 4chan, because I remember reading this over there.

SolidStone

SolidStone #4 · Apr 17th, 2014 · · · Tuesday Afternoon ·

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Indeed I am. I'll be there on /mlp tonight at 2000 EST to write on Tuesday Afternoon and some of Tuesday Evening.

That's my thing with FimFiction, I do my writing on /mlp, then I use FIMfiction as my archive that people can go back and catch up on the reading. However some works will only be done on FimFiction due to the sheer length of it.

My Big Horse will be finished on FIMfiction.
One or Two Novellas will be finished on FIMfiction and then posted to /mlp.
I plan on giving both sites attention, but keeping /mlp as my main writing station.

SolidStone

SolidStone #5 · Apr 17th, 2014 · · · Tuesday Afternoon ·

So out of curiousity, how many of you are just downvoting because this is in my related works section from that other terrible piece of fiction?

Read before you vote, up or down.

Inclinedtoserve

Inclinedtoserve #6 · Apr 18th, 2014 · · · Tuesday Afternoon ·

If you butcher this work of art I am not gonna read your stories again.

But I think an adaptation of the stories in night shift or nightmares and dreamscape would be cool.

Maybe you could do the dark tower.

SolidStone

SolidStone #7 · Apr 18th, 2014 · · · Tuesday Afternoon ·

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Well... the main points remain the same, however I'm taking a bit of take of a curious turn as I write this. Its almost focusing on character building on environment building. The morning and evening shifts are always about The Mile, and that doesn't change. The afternoon, and midnight interludes are always about environment outside The Mile, so some people won't be too thrilled, however I write it, someone is going to be upset for either going too far, or not going far enough.

somecallmeanthony