As drew carrey once said:

MORE MORE MORE!

Edit: I think it would be more terrifying if he was a human, seeing how they've never seen humans or their skeletons, or flaming skeletons wearing leather jackets and jeans

I'm interested to see where this goes.

Oh, a crossover fic? Yeah, psh, whatever, I don't really-

Wait, it's about Ghost Rider?

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GIMMIE MORE I LOVE TEH GHOST RIDERZ

Man I was waiting for a ghost rider fic for so long

I would have writen it myself but yeah i suck at writing

You started out really strong with this one you should definetly continue this

Its well paced and a great prolouge

Though Im not so sure if he should be a pony its your fic so you can do whatever you want but id imagine him better as a human

Still im a bit worried that Ghost Rider might go soft in Equestria

He is an Anti Hero after all he kills the guilty the most painful way possible

But im wondering how innocent are Equestrias citizens and their rulers?

It's a good idea and i think that you should continue, but please for the sake that of all that is good in the world don;t make him into a pony, it's been done way too many times before, besides i have to agree with Jagun,: imagine celestias face when he walks up to her in rider form.

Oh my god... this could be awesome.

MOOOOAR

Need more now

Sincerely the doctor

Here is a great picture of Ghost Rider as a pony.

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PLEASE MAKE MOAR just the prolouge has earned you 5/5 moustaches NICE! btw, human form would be better

GHOST FUCKING RIDER IN MY PONIES?

MOTHER OF GO-

...Anyway, back from that few minutes of drooling. *Clear throat*

Not bad for a prologue. Was wondering if you had any plans on how long an actual chapter is going to be.

On the matter of ponifying... I really cannot say. Leaving him as a human is sure to scare the other ponies...

...But it doesn't really give a chance for Johnny to accept (or possibly, be accepted in) this new world.

...Plus, a flaming skeletal pony would probably be far, far scarier to the inhabitants of little ol' Equestria than some burning skeletal primate.

It could really lead to confusion too. It's possible that they'd assume that every human is capable of turning themselves into weapons of mass destr- Sorry, "Justice".

Anyway, great work so far. Keep it up. Looking forward to the next chapter!

So he died as a human ... Continue

Yes, just...fucking yes.

Wow! I did NOT expect this much of a response in only an hour! I am thankful for all the comments you guys have given to the story.

Oh shit, Ghost Rider/Mlp crossover? you have broken the epic barrier! Please keep going!

I am intrerested in where this might lead. It is a fresh concept, and I haven't seen any Ghost Rider cross overs yet(surprisingly). Do continue.

Compare. Which is more terrifying?

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>>Jagun

If only I had a more decent or more realistic picture of a ponified Ghost Rider, then I would be able to compare them better.

Man, I log off for only an hour, then I come back and see even more notifications that are unread. I am DEFINITELY continuing this story.

>>404933404933

Everything this guy said. Especially the drool parts and the reaction.

In a paraphrase from Darth Vader, "The Potential is strong with this one".

you should you wonderful writer you

How about you have him as a pony while nit in his ghost rider form, and have him in his human form while being the spirit if vengeance? Honestly I can't see the ghost rider giving off the same fear as a pony version of himself. Furthermore, It could be the perfect disguise. If a human shiwed up and suddenly this flaming skull version shiws up, who do you think they'm turn to? Pony + ghost rider = dies not compute. Lastly, and this is the big thing, isn't the ghost RIDER suppose to RIDE something. I just can't see a pony driving a motorcycle or any vehicle with hoofs. Anyway great first chapter, keep goin and stay golden^^

>>405255405255

...No. Don't compare a budget Special Effect CGI version of Ghost Rider with an amature-made pony version.

If you are going to compare it, compare it with the other ghost rider's ride, the fiery horse. Remember him?

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This looks good so far... i see he has his chain with him. BUT WHAT SHALL HE RIDE?!?! OH NOEZ! ..... serriously though. Good job. You dont happen to  have a pic of what he looks like do ya? Pony form I mean.

Serriously though. Blueblood. In story. Quick. Panic attack.

............ damn i should of seen the second movie...

>>410783410783

Sorry man, I don't have a picture of him in pony form. I can't draw. Maybe someone will hopefully make me a picture.

Since most ponies in Equestria are good, except maybe the high society snobs, you'll be surprised who I'll bring into the story.

Thanks for complementing on my story!

>>410834410834 Alright.... guess time! One of the ponies with one episode from Canterlot, Photo Finish, Blueblood, Nightmare Moon, Discord, or Trixie. Thats all i got.

Still interesting. I haven't spotted any mistakes or anything, but I'm not usually on the look out for those. Anyway, do continue with this, while it might not be the best story I've ever read, it's far from the worst, and it has a very interesting concept. I am very interested to see just where this goes.

>>410848410848

Sorry, I cannot deny or confirm your guesses. You're gonna have to wait for the chapters to come.

But like I said, you might be surprised who I might bring in and what will happen to Johnny when he's around them.

>>410988410988 Ok... but whats he gonna ride?! Big Mac? (no homo)

Good Job, but is better Ghost Stallion

MORE!

Now that I think, Johnny Blaze doesn´t hears like a odd name for a pony, like Trixie Lulamon or Lyra Heartstings, specially for the Blaze part.

Ps: By the way its true, it wouldn´t have any sense that a human with hells power apper in Equestria, but now i imagine a combination between Red Dead Redemption Undead Nightmare horse of apocalipse. You know War and Pestilence (if you played the game)

Very good. Hoping you continue and im looking very forward to this, so im tracking

>>410783410783

If you're looking for something to picture, try and imagine a smaller version of the western Ghost Rider's ride. Remember him? The fiery stallion?

And, wow.

I feel quite honored to be mentioned . Glad I could help.

Still though, nice to see how Johnny put two and two together instead of freaking out.

What else... Oh, right. I'll be honest, I haven't watched the second movie, so if possible, could you fill in blanks when characters/events of it are mentioned? That'd be great.

Great work here, really looking forward to the next chapter!

Youre right Urdeth does have a good point

Wont be as scary for us but it will be terrifying for the ponies when they see The Rider

So yeah keep it up man

I enjoyed chapter two very much. I've always been a fan of Ghost Rider, and other macabre things like that and I feel you have a good voice for it.

That said, the flow of the chapter, I feel, was interrupted by the Johnny waking up believing he was simply on pain meds and hallucinating, then describing how much pain he was in despite the meds (he believes he has), then going directly into how he remembers his last breath in life and how this is all completely real. A suggestion to fix it might be to simply delete the pain meds and halucination bit and just leaving the last breath he took, or transition it by saying something along the lines of, "must be halucinating on pain meds to see a rainbow winged horse, no wait I feel too much pain for that, now I remember I took my last breath after crashing *insert how this is some second chance or something* and continue like the story is"

*please don't hate me, just wanting to help *

>>411503411503 Yes, but every ghost rider rides somthing! .......... maybe we can get him a skateboard....

>>412326412326

What about his fiery wings? I guess they serve some purpose...

Then again, if a motorcycle fit for a pony appeared for Johnny, that'd be awesome as fuck.

>>412401412401 AWW HELL YEA! ............ or mabye... what if he got a train? a crazy train to be more specific.

>>412403412403

Has anyone thought about something a little more...alive.

What about a hellfire summoned dragon, or a manticore? A demon dragon sounds cool to me.

>>412431412431 ...... Im pretty sure suggesting a flaming skeletal dragon or manticore is the mark of a great fanfic author. That or madness. Oh well same thing.

>>412431412431

...I will love you forever (And ever) if you include Johnny fucking Blaze riding a goddamn molten dragon in this story.

>>406705406705 Well, i have to agree with you there, demon horse you scary

>>412431412431 hmmm, ok i guess he is pony then, DEMON DRAGON WOULD BE AWSOME but my only question is were the heck is he gonna get a dragon, and spike is too small and too young for him to be a candidate.

>>419031419031

I said 'hellfire summoned dragon' earlier. Now, I haven't read the comics or anything, so I have to go on what the internet has on Johnny Blaze's/Ghost Rider's powers.

>>419101419101 Basically, anything that he rides turns into something to suit him, and i mean anything. I never heard of him having any summoning powers though.

>>419147419147

Well, if what I read is correct, the Ghost Rider could summon his signature hellcycle through his hellfire powers(throwing fireballs and using his chain weapon).

But really, it shouldn't matter, since everything he rides changes with him, like in the second movie(not giving spoilers). Like, even though Spike is a baby dragon, can you imagine what the rider could do if he used his hellfire powers on Spike?

>>419166419166 Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...... Probably turning him into a massive beast with flames for his spikes on his head and back, deep black claws that would scare even celestia, and a head with eyes glowing with the fires of justice and vengeance and teeth like polished ivory. oh and his hide would be like his scales.

>>419195419195

Exactly!

>>419218419218 Ok, I am expecting spike to be like a little side kick that can kill gods. but otherwise keep writing, you got da skills.

>>419258419258

Uh, well, I hate to spoil this, but Spike won't be a sidekick to The Rider. He's more like "What, he was the only thing there for me to change with me so that I could (Restricted)". He's like something that Blaze will use in a pinch situation. Besides, do you think Twilight or the other Mane 6 would like the idea of a hell-spawn demon using his hellish powers on a baby dragon?

Hope I'm not bothering you with these comments.

>>419305419305nah it's cool, but after seeing him do that i think they would be more than scared and angrie of ghostie.

>>419327419327

Yep, they'll be pretty scared of him after what will happen that'll reveal The Rider to them.

It's going to be GOOD!

Well, stay tuned in and all that jazz.

>>419342419342 I most certainly will.

KISS ME NOW!!!

>>459399459399......<_< >_>.....Ok............there ya go.....

I am intrigued.

do want more

>>459519459519 yay

>>459645459645....This never happened......

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>>459650459650 lol

This was a badass chapter

Cant wait for more

Awesome! Keep up the great work!

i'm lovin it

Lovin it man, keep it up. The riders whole act there is deffinatley an interesting concept.

Dude this is definately interesting. Please keep it going.

I love it. Ghostrider has always been one of my favorite Marvel characters and it'll certainly be interesting to see how he interacts with the Equestrians. Also, Ghostrider/MLP crossover, definitely points for originality!

cool man

moar

moar foar everybods

hey, It's been like forever since u last updated this story, is it dead, or are u just taking a really long time to write the 4th chapter? Cuz it's a really good fic, I enjoy it, and I would hope that u would keep continuing it. So please update this soon.

This no update in weeks I am sad.

>>838926838926

>>842994842994

I'm sorry for such a delay, but I got writer's block around the time I finished the latest chapter (this story is a first, so I have to make my own trail), and I had summer school 'til the end of June. I'm still working on the chapter, but I feel as though I'm missing something. But don't worry, the story is not dead, just suspended. I'll try to get the next chapter out.

Moar!

sweet a ghost rider fic now all we need is a spawn fic then we are good to go

P.s keep up the good work

Y U NO CONTNUE?

Oh hell yes

Oh my god dude pls finish this story i love this

More please if it's ok with you

If you do not give us moar. I will do this.

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Keep it up, this is really good, and I look forward to seeing him punish the injust in Equestria, shouldn't be too hard.

MORE!

>>410834410834 if you want comedy.

blue blood vs ghost rider in badassery

Heh. Jerks. It's for the best, anyways. Whatever Johnny does to them, they're better off than they'd be if the Doctor had caught them...

Classic fight scene at beginning of story to advance plot. Not very original but you have my attention.

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MOAR

.......... WHAT ARE YOU DOING READING THIS?! GET BACK TO WORK FOOL!!!

Also, the Rider needs to take the Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000 for a test run....

there fucked

no one and i mean NO ONE makes durpy cry

they are so screwed

....while i am excited for the inevitable and epic fight, why did you thow the Mane 6 in alongside him?

He  could've said that he needed some air or something. It would've put a lot more tension if they don't know who he truly is yet. Of course, you may have your own plans, but having the mane 6 find out about his abilities so  soon makes it seem rushed.

Still can't wait for the epic next chapter

No OnE mAkEs DiTzY cRy!

I just LOVE having a twisted voice like that. It pierces my enemies with fear.

Something powerful and angry, Luna?

...

I wasn't aware the Hulk was in this story! :D I kid, I kid. :P

dude fucken awesome ghost rider about to kick some ass and luna finally meets the spirit of vengeance fucken awesome butt how is it going to work out the pennace stare are the stallion going to have there eyes scorched

>>14340341434034I do believe her name is spelled Derpynot durpy

Have some Ice cream

Anyways, shit is about to go down and those stallions are fucked. Keep up the good work and release the next chapter as soon as you can I will be watching from the shadows

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Yes, you indeed are a terrible person. I hate cliffhangers with a passion.

Yes, you indeed are a terrible person. I hate cliffhangers with a passion.