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Yes. This was great. Not clop, not fetish-y. Just a new way to look at the world. I think Dash's reactions were perfect.
Sequel from Twilight's perspective will be great.
Wow...that was surprisingly good! I've read quite a few stories like this already, but this one definitely stands out. It doesn't feel hand-fisted or awkward. And I was skeptical about the TwiDash at first, but it was cute and didn't negatively affect the story, although it wasn't really necessary. 9.5 out of 10. Very nice story you have here, I hope it will be continued! Here's an idea...Dash and Twi go to the center together to relax, and they can have adorable puppy-dog love as fillies.
Twilight needs to have a turn.
It's really nice to see all of these amazing diaper/pony stories.
Keep it up, I would love to see more
Pwahaha, careful guys! There's an employment in this story!!
Sorry, my brain read that word on it's own and found it amusing, carry on. =P
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BEWARE, PONIES HAVE JOBS IN THIS STORY
Surprisingly very good, twidash is my least liked shippings, and I almost out it down because of it, but I kept reading, and I was very impressed. The second chapter is my favorite, because...
SO...MUCH...CUTE...DASH!!!!
The cooking scene was my favorite part, I can just imagine dash sitting on top of a counter, separating carrots and peas in an adorable diaper, it's just too cute.
Overall a surprise, and one I will be favoriteing now. Have a good day sir.
I can already see what's in store for Rainbow Dash. Too bad she skimmed over that document, and I'm pretty sure that tea is some kind of muscle relaxant or something.
Aw, how sweet. I wish something like this existed in real life, I'd gladly sign up as a repeat customer.
4254761 I second that idea. A Twilight sequel would be very nice. Heck, maybe even a series with the mane six, if it's not too much to ask of course.
You REALLY should've read the form all the way through dash
Need I say more?
4256086 YES!!!! Maybe, while in foal mode they'd think they're sisters or something like that.
I really enjoyed this Fic. Padded pony fics are so fun to read
If there's gunna be more, Definitely following you.
Great stuff dude
I'll be honest, I wasn't going to read this story, I haven't really read any stories at all recently and wasn't intending to. I didn't want to get my hopes up as a lot of stories like this recently I've gone to read have left me disappointed by lack of quality...
Let me just say this, this was FAR from disappointing. This was the first completed story, in a LONG TIME that I've read in this genre that has been genuinely good.
Most stories (I'm guilty of this too with my own.) Get carried away with certain aspects leaving behind other details, the story gets unbalanced and just horrible, this story however. I was pleasantly surprised when I started reading it. This story is undeniably one of the best stories I've seen come out recently.
Not only did you manage to perfectly balance all of the foalish elements, but the mental play... the way you handled Dash's state of mind, the way you captured the feelings... wow, just wow...
You, without a doubt, 100% without hesitation are getting a like, favorite, and follower. Do the world a favor, no matter what you do in life, always write, write about anything, because the words you have written, are eye candy. Words can't adequately describe my feelings right now.
You are truly a masterful writer.
Cute story, basic but cute.
This is a... well, let's call it a hobby, I will never ever understand. In some way I suppose I can understand why some people find some kind of peace in the idea of being cuddled as a baby. But why is there always such an obsession with diapers? What part of that childhood experience could possibly look attractive as an adult?
Oh well, I don't need to understand it, thankfully. Considering the type of story this is and the rating it has despite of that I decided to at least give it a chance. I also promised myself that at the very first sign of "cwute widdle babyspweak" I would be out of here. I hate it when people do that, what child has ever spoken like that, ever? Anyway, you didn't, so thanks for that.
The story itself is, disregarding the subject matter, ok. Not a lot of complaints on the technical side. There was nothing that stood out to me, but nothing that bothered me either (at least, when disregarding the subject matter, the idea of an adult pony treating another adult pony like that is just creepy).
So, no complaints, but nothing that would make me want to read it again either.
Alright, this was very good.
I agree (with my liver in my hand ready for consumption) that this is very good, and that you should go on.
Now, excuse me.
Your story just awoke the dead of my Catonian Party.
Short sweet and to the point. Definitely one of the better Padded Pony fics that grasps what's so important to a lot of us that want to be treated just like Dashie was. 10/10 would read again, kinda can't wait for a sequel where Twilight gets what's coming to her XD
Very adorable, hope to see more from you
I was almost afraid to read it, having so many issues with the premise- mental regression, TwiDash, the obvious similarities with "Twilight and Rarity goes to the Spa"- but Reading the comments I decided to let the bad feeling go and read it anyway.
It was a good idea on my part to do that.
The best about this fic is that you *somehow* managed to make regression not creepy, and I congratulate you for that.
I honestly did not think I was going to like this story, but you managed to surprise me with it, so I am looking forward to a sequel.
Dawww! I love it. ^^
I don't want to be a spoil sport, but I am pretty sure half of the groups this story has been put into... it doesn't belong in. Yeah I don't want to be that person... but I gotta say it.
Fairly sure this isn't a sad story.
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I dunno, I didn't add them to those. I only added to Padded Ponies, Adukt Foals, and My Little Fetish.
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Yes I know, the comment wasn't directed at you. Lol. The group info thing told me who added most of them to most of the groups... he did it to one of my stories too... *cough* you know who you are. *cough*
4256752 When they're not creepy or disturbing that is. Which is most of the time (in terms of cuteness).
Aww, Rainbow was so cute in this story, her reactions fitted her character perfectly. This is above and beyond the so called 'fetish fuel'. This stands alone as a very adorable story.
Sequel? :3
I had originally passed this over. I';m glad I read it now. There's a few awkward wordings and this isn't something I'd write, personally. But I can see how you were inspired, and I like what you made. ^_^
Cutest thing I have ever read.
No, wait, that's the cutest thing I've ever read.
No, no, I meant that's the cutest... thing.... can't.... overload....!!
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Faved for the "Prettiest Little Wonderbolt Scene" and so much more.
Amusing Alliterations Yay! How about:
Mild Manny's Mansion of Merely Meh, or
Nelly's Not-so-Neat Nook of Narcolepsy, or
(going with a rhyme instead...)
Plain Mane Jane's 'Tons-of-an-Unfun-Nun' Hut
I love word games!
4266273 Yes totally want sequel
Adorable, well-written and not a single error that I spotted! Awesome stuff and I look forward to more.
4257323 I know exactly what you mean about that kind of speech... It makes no sense whatsoever. No-one talks like that, except maybe if those with a severely damaged jaw or mental speech impediments. And well done for not screaming at the author for writing something you don't like! Hopefully that doesn't sound condescending- around here it's a sincere compliment, unfortunately.
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Hah. Hey, it was my decision to read it, wasn't it? Its not as if it wasn't clear what the story was about before I started. And sometimes its worth it stepping out of your comfort zone a bit, you might find stories you'd never thought you'd enjoy.
Do more stories like this. Do it with some of the other members of the Mane 6. Especially Rarity and Fluttershy.
Where to begin... Okay. Once I saw in the TwiDash forums what kind of story this was, I backed off without a second thought. I don't do well with stories about a pony taking advantage of another who doesn't know any better - which is what I thought this was going to be judging by the warning label - and clop in general - which, since you called it fetishy, I assumed it would be. Now that I've finally overcome my block and gathered the courage to read it, I have to say that I'm surprised, satisfied, and positively glowing with d'aww!
'Dashie's Relaxation' is one of the sweetest things I've read in ages, poni or not. I think I found reading it just as relaxing as Dashie found living it. You nailed the characterization of filly Dashie and turned her thoughts into a believable and immersive story; Sweet Dreams was absolutely wonderful; and I only noticed two errors, both of which were very early on!
Oh, and you've also made me rethink everything about the stories I avoid. I know I have a block or two here and there, and I'm determined to figure out why. So thanks for that, haha.
Anyway, congratulations. I'm going to like and fave this one, and I want to apologize again for judging the story by its cover. I'm glad most who saw this were braver than I was, because this story deserves the warm reception it received. Thanks for sharing, Readan!
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Wow! I'm glad you gave it a shot, and really glad you enjoyed it! No apologies necessary, I wasn't offended in the least, and you were nothing but friendly and polite with how you were responding in that topic
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Do you have any plans to further explore these characters? While I agree with the majority in that a sequel with Twiley and Dashie would be absolutely adorable (and I do have some questions I'd like answered about Rainbow's past), I think the story stands on its own very well. I'd say if a sequel doesn't come easily, don't force it.
I'm glad to hear it.
4309305 I'd love to see you make more and more stories of this relaxation centre. With some other ponies this time. Maybe with do one big story of Sweet's Relaxation Centre with a pony you think of first and then ask us for requests. That's what I did and am still doing on one of my stories.
4304925 Indeed. We all thank you for your maturity.
...oh....my.....celestia that was......PERFECT!!!!!!!
I can sooooo picture this. I will say this with honesty of a pinkie pie cupcake promise......BEST STORY ON THIS SITE SO FAR!!!. i love the detail the connection between sweet and dashie and all of that i am upthumbing, and favoriting. BIG HEARTS
"Let your worries fade. None of them matter here".
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" sing her a gentle lullaby. The combination of her tiredness, the level of comfort she was feeling, and the enchanting melody was too much for her, and she soon drifted off into a peaceful slumber."
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decent
4256070 I would as well, Age-Regression stories and episodes really grab my attention and keep me watching.
Wonderful story. ^-^
Bassline: Why are you so excited?
Melody: It happened again! Somepony used my name in a story!
Bassline: Are you going to act this way every time this happens?
Melody: You just don't know what it's like. Nopony ever says 'bassline' in stories.
This has overloaded our ability to detect cuteness, so we're kind of unable to respond as we should. Kinda like when you eat something really sweet, and your taste buds are dulled for the next hour or so.
The only thing that would make this story better, in our opinion, is more Twilight. We're big Twidashers though, so there's a bit of bias there.
Would it be possible to request a sequel with scootaloo? That'd be soooo cute!!!
This was a really adorable story! It was an enjoyable read as it was well written with many cute details and emotions. I liked and favorited it! A possible sequel perhaps?
why is it mature rated? I would think teen would be more than enough.
I also think a sequel involving Twilight would be very nice.