Rookwood, a magically stunted unicorn, has the greatest wet dream he's ever had. Little does he know his adolescent fantasies may flood Equestria with nightmares.
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*looks at cover of story*
*looks at my profile pic*
"... umm... I guess I am now a story?"
oh dear, i do hope that his luck turns around soon
This just gets wierder and wierder.....
I'll still keep watching for updates though
I'm sure that in come country it's a greeting. You know, like a handshake.
"Howdy." *splurch*
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Look at the tags.
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So far I've only turned the weird meter up to 3. The knob goes to 11.
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Sorry about that, but the violation is actually a big part of the story line. Nightmare Moon isn't one for asking for consent before she does her thing.
And make no mistake, this is a story about Nightmare Moon.
So... Nightmares aplenty, and that means violations, because that is what makes it scary.
Sorry about that though. I was in the mood to write a horror story.
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Yeah, pretty much.
4223149 so his luck doesnt turn around soon, or doesnt turn around at all?
4223166 That would be spoiling it a bit, wouldn't it?
4223167 well in my opinion its not so much spoiling it as much as deciding wether or not i should continue to read this
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He is being plagued by Nightmare Moon. I mean, she isn't known for being sunshine and rainbows.
But yes, Rookwood will have his moments. Darkest before dawn, blah blah blah, yada yada yada.
And once those moments happen, they will mean more, having read what he's gone through.
4223192 now you're spoiling
well this guy cant catch a break can he....... damnit luna stop knocking him out they guy is terrified that is not helping!
4223192 Will his moment involve something that will bring him peace.
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It's already dark, why not go a shade darker?
Well... I decided to start reading this.
Chapter 1: WTF?
Chapter 2: Starts to make sense
Chapter 3: Now I'm confused
Chapter 4: Now I'm scared
Chapter 5: I love this story!
Celestia did not honestly tell Luna to calm her tits?!?! That was golden!
4500347 “Sister. Calm, Thy. Teats.”
I'm still laughing
How can such a serious story be so funny with lines like
and
Is it bad that most of this chapter I was laughing?
No cringe yet, eyebrow raise is here, but no cringe...
I'm done. There is an unrealistic amount of abuse being piled upon an adolescent with very little experience, and he's simply thrust into the world one day and is expected to deal with it like an adult would; I mean sure, he apparantly has strange piwers, but Luna just going ape-shit and making him bleed on the floor, then having him get back up and forgive her is NOT something a young person would do. I honestly don't understand why he hasn't tried running away from this madness.
Princesses are being quite difficult. They never explained anything to him. Are they above the law? Pretty sure Equestrian system has strict guidelines against separating a pony from the land of the living against their will or without consent.
Speaking of consent, if Celestia had any evidence to prove a case against MC, then she would be able to bring him in on charges. No evidence, no case, no charges; yet she keeps treating him as if he’s guilty.
He may have been underage being without a cutie mark at the time… which would lay blame on Luna…