Rookwood, a magically stunted unicorn, has the greatest wet dream he's ever had. Little does he know his adolescent fantasies may flood Equestria with nightmares.
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is it bad if i thought this chapter was awesome in a way most people wouldn't think so? . . .
Wow. That. THAT, was dark. A kind of dark that leaves one to wonder if there ever was light to begin with. Not as dark as Violet's chapter earlier, but you hit that ballpark.
Sheeeit, now I can't read 'dark' or 'grim/dark' tagged stories without subconsciously comparing them to this. This one's gotta be the darkest story to date, for me. (For reference, that's saying something, after 1700 stories read on Fimfiction)
Damn good job, kudz.
That says it so much better than I could. It's another great chapter, and I love the fact that Rookwood has taken to his job so well. He's seen horror, terror, and all manner of death. He's witnessed the worst of the worst and has come accordingly. Truly Rookwood is... an "Angel to some, Demon to others".
i think you broke me because i found this funny
A duplicate "you" in that sentence, but that's all I picked up. A good chapter, if somewhat unnerving. *Shudders involuntarily*
Papercuts.... no. No.
No. Just no.
I steeled myself to get through this.
I advice a calm and happy chapter for the next one, in exchange for this horrifying... thing.
Papercuts...
-Zeph
I have to admit, I've seen some things during my time as a soldier in the US Army. I didn't have nearly as strong of a reactions to any of that, as reading about getting a papercut on the dick
I must say, I am generally into the more sappy feely happy romance novels, but damn, this a REALLY good story. I never thought I would be into tragedy. Guess I learned something new about myself today.
Interesting story so far. Still waiting on the horror to start though.
......congratulations, this chapter has earned this story a favorite and follow from me.
(Well, this story, "Confusing Apocalypse", and its predecessor, but I'm trying to be concise.)
.....I am not certain what this says about me, to be perfectly honest.
Paper cuts? Rookwood is fucking Evil.
Damn that was intense. I had a blast reading this story, here's hoping your muse of darkness does not leave you till the end(hopefully not a grimdark end, those are just icky).
And yet I read on...
Eyes.... not the eyes....
I skipped that part.
That... was... PERFECT! Fulfills my sense of anger and hate!
4336332 Thank you, I think...
That was a nightmare? Wow, his position is awesome
5060838 i agree n.n
No testicle torture or the use of vinegar and salt being rubbed into the wounds? Aww!