Rookwood, a magically stunted unicorn, has the greatest wet dream he's ever had. Little does he know his adolescent fantasies may flood Equestria with nightmares.
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Wait so failing counts as a sin what a bunch of cunts these reapers are.
Wasn't expecting him to take most of the dead as his army and messengers, otherwise the story is still going strong imo, most people underestimate what a small amount of back story can do from what I've seen.
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I don't think anybody was expecting that to be honest, speaking from a Reaper perspective.
It reads fine, don't hurt yourself over it. It gets the story across and if you still don't like it, you can rewrite it in do time.
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The first draft was over 5k words, and dealt with the trials of the fallen lunar guards.
Like, almost all of them.
And the burning dead had a lot more content.
And then I realised, the trials were almost all the same. Serve? Yes. Good. Next. Serve? Yes. Good. Next.
So... SLASHY SLASHY!
And that delayed the chapter as I sat on it for a few days, seeing how I felt about the changes.
As for my feelings... Meh.
And yes, Rolling Bones was the guard that visited Tartarus with Luna earlier in the story.
He kept gambling.
And ended up in Pair o' dice.
**Snerk**
4393823 I think you made a good decision on your part.
Hmmm...
Spoilers within the story, interesting...
I wonder, what will be the next thing?
A vision of the future?
-Zeph
as always my friend you bring the good that hides in the dark to the light so people know about it!
Wish others could see that!
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Aw, thank you.
I aim to please. I hope you aimed for the toilet bowl.
Great fic. Although some parts are a bit icky, I dint have much trouble reading.
Until you take out needles. Im very much not gonna read any kind of needle torture. And im afraid I just gave you an idea
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I have such sights to show you!
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At least you will leave my eyes intact then
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Well, one of them anyway.
This is getting more interesting every chapter.
I really like Hades.
I think... Hades deserves a round of applause for his awesomeness
I love hades XD not sure I like the idea that his first foal will be so problematic though. We'll see though