Rookwood, a magically stunted unicorn, has the greatest wet dream he's ever had. Little does he know his adolescent fantasies may flood Equestria with nightmares.
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Not a bad chapter. It went by a tad quickly though...
...but that is what action does to a story.
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Yeah, it has a fast pace. I noticed it too.
Almost a thousand words longer than most updates as well.
I went through and padded it a bit, it went through several rewrites and revisions.
The first version was a bit shorter, would have been a disappointing read methinks.
Do I have to post the video link?
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Already posted... Check my blog!
4335512 Well played. I wonder if you can squeeze in any Fear Factory references as well, that might be up your alley.
"Somepony really should spend more time cleaning this place up."
Well. Now we need a spin off about Hell's janitor. His name is Clementine. He sweeps up the body parts with a broom held in his mouth. The broom is very splintery. Also, Hades refuses to buy a coffee machine for the break room. Poor Clem.
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Actually, I had a notion to have a pony with two little boots as a cutie mark who occasionally cleaned the place up, but then I decided that nopony would probably get the reference.
He went to pony hell for being a horse fornicator.
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The horse was appointed as a priest and was going to be a consul. Caligula is supposed to have reserved his banging for his sisters, the wives of other men and likely a slew of random passersby.
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I should have known better. I will have to include "Little Boots" at some point.
Well, this was interesting.
I wish Luna could have save those ponies from that horrible death of being burned alive... oh well.
A very certain 'pony' needs to suffer for yet another thousand of years, not my problem.
However. Luna's foal seems to reach the last period of developing, when will she born?
Hm.
-Zeph
thanks for the update!!
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Not the last stage of development, just far enough along so that movement can began to be felt.
More about the wicker pony and the dead is coming soonish.
Luna was quite some distance away, there was very little she might have done.
The wicker pony was supposed to provide illumination to keep Rookwood away.
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Yeah, I figured its ungraceful nature already... how would a creation of burning death keep the incarnation of Death away? Who was that brilliant moron that made this idea?
Anyway. What about the lunar pegasi mares? I mean, they are larger than the males? How and why? Also, they returned to a barbaric, vicious state, does that mean they act like, for example, the real life vikings? I would love to see one show up and meet with a lunar pegasi mare, fight, then join in carnal love... eheheheh.
Welp.I might have an over-working imagination, but my questions are still valid.
-Zeph
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Gibbous Moon was terrified of Rookwood's coming. He wasn't thinking straight. And he doesn't know about Rookwood the Reaper, only Rookwood as a challenger for the mantle of Lord of Nightmares.
The lunar pegasi are carnivorous. During the battle, they went into blood lust. There was snacking on the pony dead in their frenzied excitement. More in time.
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Hm. This answers little of my unasked and asked questions, but will do for now.
May the next chapter truly relieve me of my doubt.
So... upload it quick, please.
-Zeph
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Think about how robbed poor Hades must have felt. Master of the Undead Realms. Tens of thousands of years old. Undead draconequus.
Is Gibbous Moon all that terrified to see him?
Not particularly.
Paper cuts!
BAM! Hades suddenly begins to realise he has competition in the undead popularity contest.
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This sounded more ominous than I think it is supposed to.
I hope you are not hinting that Hades will see an actual competitor in Rookwood's undead person.
My cursed quality of finding and understanding all the possibilities, tells me that this might actually end with Rookwood being tortured again thanks to a misunderstanding, or, take Hades' place on the long run. Tell me I'm wrong.
-Zeph
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No, nothing like that.
But it will escalate a bit, Hades' feeling the need to show off a bit and strut his stuff. Professional rivalry.
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Oh thank goodness!
Hades is a draconequus afterall...
Hm. This brings up even more questions. Goddamnit.
Nice, really nice.
Ah crud... the worst...possible...thing happened, i caught up with all chapters of an unfinished story.
Aaah, just caught up and now I can't wait for the next chapter...
I will be honest, first few chapters kinda had me ready to go....But the underlying potential drove me to continue and I regret nothing but not finding this beautiful dark read sooner. It has the right amount of sex and the dark humor as well as gore. So well in fact I can see why Luna became aroused multiple times. You sir/mam have created the most beautiful and dark Story on this site save for Cupcakes. Great Fucking Job and I cant' wait for more.
4387146 why do your words feel so inspiring?