Rookwood, a magically stunted unicorn, has the greatest wet dream he's ever had. Little does he know his adolescent fantasies may flood Equestria with nightmares.
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Damn, Celestia is pretty OOC here.
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At the moment, yes. Think about it from her perspective.
Don't worry, she'll calm down and become a bit more of her usual sunny self.
Actually, I do wonder how Celestia might react character wise during these sorts of events. There's nothing to go on.
4217067 It's like someone hits you in the face with a pie, and you laugh it off and is generally fine with it, but your friend is hopping mad and wants to start a fight.
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Somepony just shagged her sister. In a questionable way.
So yes, I wrote Celestia overreacting a bit. She's going to do it again later, being the fretting big sister.
I'm liking this so far! I mean, at first, I was all
"He has descended to mere clop."
But then I read it. So now, I'm like:
"A fascinating development!"
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More developments coming... And coming... And COMING!
OK I do not know if I have read your stories before but this is an AWESOME concept and I would love to see more added to this story in the future XD
Also Celestia seems to fit the role of the tyrant as I have seen her as quite well, I just hope Luna can keep Rookwood safe, and whole, (mind you in Character for this) I am sure I would keep him safe after all he is the father of mine princess's foal, even if I wanted to be the one in that position
great to see it continuing! my follow promise shall stand ;)
also if i was luna i would have never let Celestia into that conversation to begin with i mean they're sisters she should know how Celestia would overreact and taken steps to avoid it she may not have known that the colt would look like but she knew he was young and after a dream like that being summoned to see literal godesses would make pmuch anypony scared shitless. but i digress it was a good chapter and i look forward to more soon can this be done? ;)
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Oh, just wait. Celestia will calm down.
She's having a sisterly mother hen moment.
A little formatting issues and strange placement of plot points, but otherwise fine my friend, continue the shadows.
4218266 ohh no i understand why shes like that that was not in question. i was juts saying i would think luna might handle her better is all. ;) it was not meant to be a criticism just an observation i tend to do that aplenty....... well plz do continue.
You have pecked my interest so.
I shall follow where this go.
Good luck
4217099 Being an older sister, I would probably react the same way as Celestia at first. Also, great story so far, you have piqued my interest
Poor Celly needs to get laid... badly.
PFT! He, hehe, hahahahahahahaha! Ohhhhhh, that fantastic. I haven't even read paragraph 3 yet.
*reads*
*chuckles silently to self*
Omg. I laughed for like 5 min before I stopped. Good show Rockwood
Ok, I think i see why past me stopped reading this.
Ok, So, let's see.
-1: Luna' s fart. It was entirely unnecessary and threw me way off.
-2: Celestia being so hostile. It's OOC. Celestial is the calm one, Luna is the other. Not vice versa. However, considering there is an AU tag, this can be excused. It still throws me off though.
And this is another mark on the 'Why Luna's Dream Powers Are Terrifying' board. Because seriously, getting charged with assault or outright rape because of a dream, even an extraordinary one?
Calm down, Celestia. Holy cow.