Because you're just another monster, like they were!
You know, I think I'd really like to see the character struggle a bit more with that little fact. Good guys don't threaten to mulch children, not even implicitly. Whatever she has done, at least she's not a brutal, unapologetic mass murderer.
6851288 I'm gonna just assume he figured out how to use the blue angelic flame, either that or AB wasn't as bad as he thought. But still, dick move bro, making us think she was gone.
6851365 Not really, this time he just had too much to handle and didn't have time to fanboy. Plus, if you'll notice, I dropped the comedy tag so you can expect a lot less goofy crap like that. 6851336 His feelings about the insults and general response to the sight of him will be addressed later.
6851427 I was talking more about the general facts of what he does. He seems distinctly too uncaring about the fact that he's pretty much mindlessly butchering his way across the land and threatening others with violence and death over the pettiest of things. For all the circumstances of his situation, he's still supposed to be human - and most humans who are not psychopaths have some fundamental sense of proportionate retribution. He doesn't and it makes him seem like more of a monster than the people he fights at times.
6720222 I got the defibrillator ready! Ok, I turn this on; this goes here and that goes... there. Huh, I wonder what this button d--" Slumps to the floor
6874747 Yeah, it's short for now and the next chapter won't be here till next week. Thanks for the read, of course saying it's better than the movies ain't saying much.
6882863 sorry bout that I was tired at the time and that was the best I could come up with its good though its hard to fined a balance between the two sides when it comes to crossovers but you seem to have found that razors edge
It's basically "You're carrying my sister, therefore she must be dead and/or you must have hurt her so I'm going to take my anger out on you instead of either checking her or taking my anger out on the ones actually responsible because I care more about making myself briefly feel better than I do about avenging my sister or seeing to her well-being." He really should lecture Applejack about that. For the good of her soul. I mean, she outright would have murdered anyone else purely to feel better for a little bit and to feel like she did something. That right there is not a justifiable reason for murder. For being damned straight to Hell, oh yes most definitely that is enough.
Great job mate, I look forward to reading more of your work.
Dammit, stop playing my heart like a violin!
You know, I think I'd really like to see the character struggle a bit more with that little fact. Good guys don't threaten to mulch children, not even implicitly. Whatever she has done, at least she's not a brutal, unapologetic mass murderer.
6851288 I'm gonna just assume he figured out how to use the blue angelic flame, either that or AB wasn't as bad as he thought. But still, dick move bro, making us think she was gone.
Aww. That's sad enough to make this grown man cry.
6851288 That was my plan going in. Just don't feel bad about it, I teared up myself while I was writing it.
6851365 Not really, this time he just had too much to handle and didn't have time to fanboy. Plus, if you'll notice, I dropped the comedy tag so you can expect a lot less goofy crap like that.
6851336 His feelings about the insults and general response to the sight of him will be addressed later.
6851427
I was talking more about the general facts of what he does. He seems distinctly too uncaring about the fact that he's pretty much mindlessly butchering his way across the land and threatening others with violence and death over the pettiest of things. For all the circumstances of his situation, he's still supposed to be human - and most humans who are not psychopaths have some fundamental sense of proportionate retribution. He doesn't and it makes him seem like more of a monster than the people he fights at times.
6851445 No comment, I don't wanna ruin any potential plot points that may or may not be in the works.
6851497
Fair enough.
6851362 Is that a good thing or a bad thing?
6852284 If that got you... well... you ain't seen nothin yet.
*respirator noise*
the feels are strong with this one.
Why is Applebloom alive? Did he turn her into an undead? Or did 'the being that sent him there' had mercy on him?
6859439 Is "both" a valid answer?
Should be 'He stopped...' I think. According to the sentence structure it was: past tense, past tense, present tense, past tense.
Also: "...but you are not going to get this little filly, not while I draw breathe.
You have an extra 'e'. When you breathe, you draw breath.
6860516 Thanks, can't believe I didn't catch that when I was proofing.
That. Was. Close. Wow.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!
6861197 No prob, I check something of my own 6 times and I still find things sometimes.
6720222 I got the defibrillator ready! Ok, I turn this on; this goes here and that goes... there. Huh, I wonder what this button d--" Slumps to the floor
Well shoot have the day off and was going to bing read this but its only been les then 2 hours and I have burned through it all now I must wait.
6874747 Yeah, it's short for now and the next chapter won't be here till next week. Thanks for the read, of course saying it's better than the movies ain't saying much.
6882863 sorry bout that I was tired at the time and that was the best I could come up with its good though its hard to fined a balance between the two sides when it comes to crossovers but you seem to have found that razors edge
Wait...he never killed Peach Cobbler, did he?
It's basically "You're carrying my sister, therefore she must be dead and/or you must have hurt her so I'm going to take my anger out on you instead of either checking her or taking my anger out on the ones actually responsible because I care more about making myself briefly feel better than I do about avenging my sister or seeing to her well-being." He really should lecture Applejack about that. For the good of her soul. I mean, she outright would have murdered anyone else purely to feel better for a little bit and to feel like she did something. That right there is not a justifiable reason for murder. For being damned straight to Hell, oh yes most definitely that is enough.
6931043
He broke her neck after executing her husband.