War. That was what the Imperium was about. I was sick of it. An Astartes, Sick of war.
All I wanted to do was leave.
(Cover art is Temporary until I find a fitting one.)
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not bad, not bad at all.
Consider me intrigued
Thumbs up/down withheld until more chapters, but for now you have my interested and have been placed on my "read later" list.
Really got so far keep it up.
A sacrifice? really???
Wait if that filly is Derpy, then where's the character box to show Derpy is in this chapter?
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not bad
Its rushed but not bad
*cough* heretic *cough*
Turning a space marine into a gardian of a young derpy. I like this combonation. I look forward to the next chapter.
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*Cough* get over it *Cough*
4239360 Only a heretic wouldn't be opposed to a story written about a heretic, heretic.
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bring it on, Loyalist
4239537 Yeah, like Abbadon's gonna get anything done, 60% of his crusades don't get past Cadia, traitor scum. Knowing you, you probably worship Slaanesh anyways.
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Please, we all know youd lick the ass of the 'Emperor' clean if he asked you
4239586 Well considering you flow Slannesh, I'm sure you do this on a regular basis
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Ah, ah, ah. I never said that. You did. Just like the loyalist dogs to always assume the worst and come out guns blazing
4239616 Well you're making a story about a space marine being a protector of a small xenos horse so...
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And the loyalists want the small, so called xenos, horse dead, when actually, they are part of terran mythology and therefore part of Holy Terra itself, and you wanted it dead, so who's the real heretic?
4239746 If you saw a bunch of primitive iguana creatures that had psychic properties and wings, would you not smite it? It is still a xenos, regardless of it's relation to Holy Terra, and besides it is well known that Slaanesh's chosen creature is the horse as well as any tentacle-related creature, heretic. Plus I never said I wanted to kill it, hypocrite.
I can in fact confirm you hold allegiance to none of the other chaos gods and I'll tell you why.
You cannot worship Khorne because neither he nor his followers kill the weak and defenseless, and you have. After all, you butchered this story.
You could not hold allegiance to Tzeench as you obviously lack the capacity to make a plot, to any degree. This is evidenced by the fact that you had not realized I would disprove your statement, additionally, you would not have given me evidence as to what chaos god you venerate.
You could never worship Nurgle as you made a story about, well- A Luna Wolf cherishing a small xenos horse.
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I never said I worship the Chaos gods. I am simply a separatist who believes thst all things should be united in peace, except the tyranids, as they are from outside the gslaxy and are the true xenos
4239845 A seperatist? You disgust me, heretic, go join the Tau.
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That's a good idea.
Thanks for the help!
This story does seem promising. I have never heard about a Space Marine who is sick and tired of war so I'm assuming that is why there are dislikes. Still I await the next chapter.
Whens the next chapter!? I cant wait!
I shall await the next chapter!
"An open mind is like a fortress with its gates unbarred and unguarded."
-Imperium Thought of the Day
"It is not the Horror of War that troubles me, but the Unseen Horrors of Peace. "
-Imperium Thought of the Day"
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4239935 Besides, you called me a loyalist dog, only something a chaos worshipper would say. You're either bipolar or a making a bad attempt at tricking me
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Maybe I am trying to trick you? Or is that the trick? Its really tricky.
Now if you don't like the story, don't read it
It is interesting that you have a peaceful space marine character, that never-the-less seems believable to the warhammer universe.
Long waits for short chapters? Aw man, you're killing me.
Come on bro. Really
Long wait for a short chapter that ends on a cut off sentence. What gives?
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Finals week. School, and family stuff. Im sorry man
Best way to deal with a angry teacher!
im loving this so far. Keep it up.
I dont mind the short chapters and long waits myself.
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this is nice its not like other stories in which it has this overarching story and some big evil to defeat or goal to accomplish its just a space marine who wants peace raising derpy its simple and that makes it really good
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yeah....right. I know man
Um... Excuse me sir, and I don't mean to be rude, but will this be updated any time in the near
grimdarkfuture?4433147
Maybe. Its finals week at my school and they're killing me. ...sorry bro
cool story would want to see what will happen
cute. i enjoy stories with overpowered foster parents that aren't native to Equestria.
i know whats going to happen
i dont know much about war hammer other that its a board game i migh have some homework now
p.s fuck you,you gave me home work XD
lol worlds shortest chapter if i was a judge i would give a 10000000000000/10
4366592
Yes... dealt using an angry space marine, not an Angry Marine, as that would be filled with more F-bombs