When five Mercenaries get pulled into Equestria by a teleportation spell, their arrival awakens an ancient evil hellbent on destroying the peacefull kingdom.
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Aspiring Weapon designer, and has a soft spot for ponies.
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It's a good start.
See, 'm not averse to a Pinkie x Oc, but when it's in the description that worries me.
A Thompson? Really?
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45.caliber Thompson, it also gets better.
Luke has a BAR
Elijah has twin German broom handle pistols
Hayden has a M1911
3239541 wait is this ww2? Because you had a AUG BAR. If that's the case then my apologies
3239626
Actually, they use them because they love their guns, and have a mix of ww2 and modern day weapons, but thier armor is custom 2 inch steel plate, well Elijah's is, the rest is about a quarter inch.
3239701 if Elijah is a sniper, shouldn't he gave the lightest armor for maneuverability?
3239796
He's a 6'6 hulking psychotic giant! He can rip things apart with his bare hands if he wants too!
His rifle is a Grizzly big 50.
I see why you would ask that. and you are really smart for asking that.
He wears heavy armor because, well......he can.
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You have my interest please proceed with the story.
more
3252125
Certainly.
Apples, you say?
3254018
Yes, apples.....As many apples as you can eat.
Just so you know, your title is miss-spelled
awesome
W.T.F
Good, he's not dead.
3287255
I can't kill him.........yet.
more
need more 
I think I might be the only one to say this, but while reading this chapter, I thought Rarity was anthro/EG human... My bad...
Jesus fucking Christ
4049438
What? What do you mean?
4049438
Though the reaction is appreciated.
i didnt like the accusation and the possibility that he may die but this is what makes a good story drama and suspense
4049597
Yep, makes a real good story. though I would like to know how I portrayed the filly?
4049487 the chapter what happened to that mare
4049614 a little predictable but then again not only is it a filly but she was with a stranger her mother is dead and she needed a father figure probably so she chose the thing that saved her life
4049649
But what about what happened to the guy who did it?
He was still alive afterwards.
And I can get gruesome.
4049688
that's what I based it off of.
4049725 im confused based it off what exactly it should probably be obvious but i can be really dim at times
4049721 have him suffer the slowest most agonizing death that you can think of or in heavys case I promise you pain without end!
4049782
Read near the end of the chapter. the dude pinned to the wall is the rapist!
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Based off your assumption.
But man, What Elijah did to that guy who raped the mare. Damn, thats a bad way to go huh?
4049839 personally i feel it was deserved
4049843
I do too. But talk about painful. I mean getting your skull ripped out and being castrated, blinded and crucified with your ribs after being gutted?
Ow
4049833 Ik I wanted it to be worse
4085553
Well, he's still alive, so...I have an idea
4087070 good make it bucking happen
I thought Elijah was a female sniper not some giant Russian guy like the heavy from TF2. But good story all around.