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Celestia's littler sister has kept a little secret from her for over one thousand years... Tonight is the night she shares a side of herself that Celestia was never sure that she had.

First Published
7th Apr 2012
Last Modified
7th Apr 2012
#1 · 137w, 5d ago · · ·

Oh wow I feel stupid. I was like hey I recognise picture i'm going to read it later. :derpyderp1: Gee I can be stupid sometimes :rainbowwild:

#2 · 137w, 5d ago · · ·

The two godesses lay there<<<< Spelling error

Cute story though :twilightsmile:

#3 · 137w, 5d ago · · ·

Very nice use of ambient sounds and music to create the mood. This is touching and does justice for Luna.  

#4 · 137w, 5d ago · · ·

>>420877 exactly what I thought when I read it.

#5 · 137w, 5d ago · · ·

Quite nice :D

#6 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

i liked the touch of adding the rainfall track; I've seen people link music to set the mood before, but the ambient sound adds to it really well.

liked the fic itself as well; ye olde English feels a bit forced, but other than that it's very enjoyable

#7 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

when i saw the cover art i was picturing a different scene where celestia is yelling "WAKE THE FUCK UP" for some odd reason

#8 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

hmmm.  how to describe it?   ah yes. D'awwwwwwwwwwww:rainbowkiss:

#9 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

That was so sweet. The music was a nice touch. :twilightsmile:

#10 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

>>421384 Even though that's like, the polar opposite of what I got out of it, that comment made me laugh. Hard. :rainbowlaugh: That would be hilarious.

#11 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

Very nice story, earns a favorite. :pinkiesmile:

I was listening to Davy Jones's Theme (Pirates of the Caribbean) and it went along with the poem perfectly. It was awesome.

#12 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

>>420848 Buckin' FEATURED, mother bucker! :ajsmug: After only like two hours! HHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGG /)

#13 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

FAIL! I forgot to add that last image! :ajbemused: There it is. :ajsleepy:

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#15 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

Manly tears is right. I was doing fine until Celly's poem:fluttercry:


#16 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

>>422056 :ajsmug: That poem was the most rushed part of the story, actually. :rainbowkiss: I wanted to get that posted SO bad, so I wrote it in like 3 minutes. :pinkiehappy: It seems the words that I write on a spur of inspiration work best. Thanks for confirming that :trollestia:

#17 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

This is really something that I thought the show could have gone into more; the relationship between the returned Luna and Celestia.  It was actually the inspiration for my own story, though I feel like that kinda gets lost in everything else that happens in it.  ^^;

I thought you did a beautiful job on this; I love the personifications of the Princesses, and you did a fantastic job of making me feel Luna's sadness and the love the two sisters have for each other.  Your poetry is beautiful- I'll admit that I have a soft spot for poetry, so having Luna and Celestia both write and recite was amazing for me.

A wonderful story all the way around; I look forward to seeing more of your work. ^_^


#18 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·


Take my thumb and favorite, you deserve them.

#19 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·



#20 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

>>422726 I told you not to rush that poem. :ajbemused: But even though you rushed it the poem came out great.

#21 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

>>422726 And woot new episode :pinkiehappy:

#22 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

>>422831 :ajsmug: Ah, but don't you see? I only do well when I rush... Like "When nopony's Looking..." I only had to edit one mistake, and that was after it got featured. Anyway, most of my PMs are about Celestia's poem. :twilightsmile:

Gotta write something else... :scootangel:

#23 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

>>422886 Go write :pinkiehappy: And i'm going skating soon so I won't be back for a couple of hours. See you later :twilightsmile:

#24 · 137w, 4d ago · · ·

I has a sadness nao. A cute sadness.

#25 · 136w, 3d ago · · ·


just beautiful

also dat sound effect, i'm bookmarking it. i love the rain almost as much as i love the night. it calms me. i like the sound effect.

#26 · 136w, 13h ago · · ·

The rainy mood and the elfin lied set the tone perfectly

#27 · 135w, 4d ago · · ·

That was beautifull[/bcan you like write like lunas diary or lunas poems that were in the book she was reding from

:fluttercry:u made me cry when celestia told luna her poem.

#28 · 135w, 4d ago · · ·

>>479429 :eeyup::twilightsmile: I cried when I wrote it... Just a little... :ajsmug:

#29 · 135w, 4d ago · · ·

>>479435 aww thats how you know iits true frm da :heart:

#30 · 134w, 5d ago · · ·

And I quote :unsuresweetie:: "Aww, that was such a sweet story."

A little sad, but heartwarming all the same. :twilightsmile: Thanks for sharing.

#31 · 134w, 5d ago · · ·

>>507614 :twilightsmile: 'Tis what I go for.

#32 · 133w, 4d ago · · ·

D'awww, sweet story <3

#33 · 131w, 5d ago · · ·

Now, that's the Celestia I like!:applecry:

#34 · 131w, 5d ago · · ·

>>611735 :pinkiesmile: I personally think Celly doesn't get enough love from this fandom. :eeyup:

#35 · 131w, 4d ago · · ·


I think it´s because her character is not well developed. We don´t really see, in the show, the stuff she does to keep things in order. What she really is like.

All we got was that she lost a fight that wasn´t really a fair one... It was like giving Sauron the Ring and expecting Aragorn to defeat him.

But I guess that will chage in Season 3.

#36 · 127w, 5d ago · · ·


#38 · 110w, 3d ago · · ·

Just got around to reading it... sorry about that...

Really good idea, and nicely written. I loved it! :ajsmug:

#39 · 110w, 3d ago · · ·

>>784533 Oh my god can you PLEASE give me a link to that avatar??!?! :fluttershysad::pinkiesmile:

#40 · 110w, 3d ago · · ·

>>1442004 :twilightsmile: Thank you... It got featured for like two hours, you know. :pinkiesmile:

Trying hella hard to pump out another story. It's been way too long. :twistnerd:

#41 · 106w, 14h ago · · ·

Gorgeous. :applecry:

#42 · 106w, 14h ago · · ·

>>1616440 :pinkiesad2: Stop it... You're making me want to write again. :twilightsmile: (Thank you...)

#45 · 84w, 17h ago · · ·

This had a good start but it started to flounder a little when it came to the interaction between the two. However the poem by Celestia at the end more than made up for it. It explored a thought that I've only seen in a few stories, that Luna is the only one that Celestia will always have.

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