Carrier has arrived.
Celestia's littler sister has kept a little secret from her for over one thousand years... Tonight is the night she shares a side of herself that Celestia was never sure that she had.
Oh wow I feel stupid. I was like hey I recognise picture i'm going to read it later. Gee I can be stupid sometimes
The two godesses lay there<<<< Spelling error
Cute story though
Very nice use of ambient sounds and music to create the mood. This is touching and does justice for Luna.
>>420877420877 exactly what I thought when I read it.
Quite nice :D
i liked the touch of adding the rainfall track; I've seen people link music to set the mood before, but the ambient sound adds to it really well.
liked the fic itself as well; ye olde English feels a bit forced, but other than that it's very enjoyable
when i saw the cover art i was picturing a different scene where celestia is yelling "WAKE THE FUCK UP" for some odd reason
hmmm. how to describe it? ah yes. D'awwwwwwwwwwww
That was so sweet. The music was a nice touch.
>>421384421384 Even though that's like, the polar opposite of what I got out of it, that comment made me laugh. Hard. That would be hilarious.
Very nice story, earns a favorite.
I was listening to Davy Jones's Theme (Pirates of the Caribbean) and it went along with the poem perfectly. It was awesome.
>>420848420848 Buckin' FEATURED, mother bucker! After only like two hours! HHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGG /)
FAIL! I forgot to add that last image! There it is.
That was beautiful
Manly tears is right. I was doing fine until Celly's poem
>>422056422056 That poem was the most rushed part of the story, actually. I wanted to get that posted SO bad, so I wrote it in like 3 minutes. It seems the words that I write on a spur of inspiration work best. Thanks for confirming that
This is really something that I thought the show could have gone into more; the relationship between the returned Luna and Celestia. It was actually the inspiration for my own story, though I feel like that kinda gets lost in everything else that happens in it. ^^;
I thought you did a beautiful job on this; I love the personifications of the Princesses, and you did a fantastic job of making me feel Luna's sadness and the love the two sisters have for each other. Your poetry is beautiful- I'll admit that I have a soft spot for poetry, so having Luna and Celestia both write and recite was amazing for me.
A wonderful story all the way around; I look forward to seeing more of your work. ^_^
Buckin B A YOU TEEFOOL.
Take my thumb and favorite, you deserve them.
>>422663422663 DAMN RIGHT THANK YOU! IM OVERREACTING BECAUSE I FINISHED THE NEW EPISODE LIKE 20 SECONDS AGO AND IM PUMPED 'D;FLGKETHJI3U94GJFDR
>>422726422726 I told you not to rush that poem. But even though you rushed it the poem came out great.
>>422726422726 And woot new episode
>>422831422831 Ah, but don't you see? I only do well when I rush... Like "When nopony's Looking..." I only had to edit one mistake, and that was after it got featured. Anyway, most of my PMs are about Celestia's poem.
Gotta write something else...
>>422886422886 Go write And i'm going skating soon so I won't be back for a couple of hours. See you later
I has a sadness nao. A cute sadness.
also dat sound effect, i'm bookmarking it. i love the rain almost as much as i love the night. it calms me. i like the sound effect.
The rainy mood and the elfin lied set the tone perfectly
That was beautifull[/bcan you like write like lunas diary or lunas poems that were in the book she was reding from
u made me cry when celestia told luna her poem.
>>479429479429 I cried when I wrote it... Just a little...
>>479435479435 aww thats how you know iits true frm da
And I quote : "Aww, that was such a sweet story."
A little sad, but heartwarming all the same. Thanks for sharing.
>>507614507614 'Tis what I go for.
D'awww, sweet story <3
Now, that's the Celestia I like!
>>611735611735 I personally think Celly doesn't get enough love from this fandom.
I think it´s because her character is not well developed. We don´t really see, in the show, the stuff she does to keep things in order. What she really is like.
All we got was that she lost a fight that wasn´t really a fair one... It was like giving Sauron the Ring and expecting Aragorn to defeat him.
But I guess that will chage in Season 3.
>>420857420857 YOUR AVATAR GAVE MY DIABETUS CANCER!
Just got around to reading it... sorry about that...
Really good idea, and nicely written. I loved it!
>>784533784533 Oh my god can you PLEASE give me a link to that avatar??!?!
>>14420041442004 Thank you... It got featured for like two hours, you know.
Trying hella hard to pump out another story. It's been way too long.
>>16164401616440 Stop it... You're making me want to write again. (Thank you...)
>>16165751616575 MOAR STORIES!!!!
>>16165821616582 Trying... lol
This had a good start but it started to flounder a little when it came to the interaction between the two. However the poem by Celestia at the end more than made up for it. It explored a thought that I've only seen in a few stories, that Luna is the only one that Celestia will always have.
>>24416182441618 Agreed. I wish I had been writing sincerely as opposed to attention whoring and social experimentation way back when I wrote these stories. They would've been much better.
>>420877420877 DON'T TELL ME YOU'RE DEAD, YOU MOTHER FUCKER
I see right through you buddy. Reply to some old comments and -bam!- people are reading your story again. A devious planned, and it worked.
As for your comment, I'm not sure what to say. If you believe you can make this story better then I say go for it.