Chapter 6
Fangalla and Flutterbat walked around the market to get their fruit.
"How many apples should we get?" Fangalla asked. "Flutterbat?" She looked over to where the bat pony was standing. "Where did she go?" Fangalla wondered out loud. She looked over to see Flutterbat sitting. "Flutterbat! Get over here!" Fangalla demanded. Flutterbat turned around. She had a mouse in her mouth.
"What are you doing with that?" Fangalla asked.
Flutterbat spit out the mouse. "What? It taste good." she said.
"What do you mean?" the bat queen asked.
"The blood." Flutterbat answered. "The blood taste good."
Fangalla gasped. She started to fly back to the castle spire. Flutterbat shrugged and went to finish the grocery shopping.
Fangalla went to her room. She looked through the books on her shelf. She pulled out a book titled "Bat Pony Behavior". She flipped through the pages.
"Aw, here it is." she said as she looked at the page. "If a bat pony starts to drink blood, they will soon start to pass down fruit." Fangalla read. "After that, they could betray the bats by drinking their blood." Fangalla dropped the book.
"I must stop her." Fangalla said.
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"Ready?" Twilight asked.
"Yes." Rainbow Dash answered. She ran into the cage door. "Ow." she said as she hit her head.
"Well, there's plan B." Twilight said. She stuck her horn through the bars. She lit her horn. The others' doors started to open,
"Wait, I thought your cage was magic proof?" Applejack questioned.
"The cage is magic proof." Twilight said. "Not the outside."
The other ponies opened Twilight's cage. "Let's go." Twilight ordered.
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4252297 It might take a while for chapters to come out. I'll do my best!
Could benefit from some small fixes and grammar updates, but you show a good sense of what you're doing, even though everything's very... succinct.
Still, I love the premise. Flutter-royalty just seems funny. 
Lol YAY TWO chapters!!!!!!anyway grammar problems and length other then that GOOD STORY!!!
I love this story and the whole concept of a bat kingdom but, it's a bit too fast paced for me to Really catch up... Otherwise it's great!
4270920 I agree and disagree. I agree that it's way too fast paced and the concept is great but, the execution is what is also lacking RainbowSkunk could have written this much better.