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Violet Sky


I'm totally not a mutant changeling.

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Comment posted by little big pony deleted Apr 5th, 2014

not bad but feels it needs more build up

4187486 i agree it is good but needs more build up

You typed right at the start of the fic instead of write and wrote common instead of c'mon. :twistnerd:

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Patience. Believe it or not, I haven't put the build in yet. Besides, Its not called 'That awkward moment...' for nothing. This chapter is only the beginning, but you people thinking that this is the build itself makes me feel like my job was done almost perfectly. :moustache:

4188398 I don't give a shit about build up! Just make'm fuck! :flutterrage:

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That's inevitable in my fictions. :derpytongue2:

4189209 (giggle) I know. :twilightsheepish: Sometimes I can get a hold of my inner fangirl. :scootangel:

"And then sex! The end!" XD

Can you please give the source of the picture?

Definitely different but not bad at all. Alright, I'll follow this.

Just a thought, but I don't think Discord would have a set gender or sexuality. Discord is an it.

I think the actual name for stallion Luna is Artimis?

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... Shit... Well'p... Too late to do anything now, cuz I'm too lazy to do it.

4198111 Yay I know what thats like:ajsleepy:

4198250 True, but "he" is also the living embodiment of CHAOS and as such I don't think "he" would have a set gender or sexuality.

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You're trying to apply logic to chaos? How cute. :moustache:

4189209 Actually she's always hanging around and sometimes making me try to make other stories ship characters. :applejackconfused:

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Well there's the power of Ctrl+F.

Extremely Entertaining to say the least

4197911. Artemis is the correct spelling.

And it's a girls name.

4200450 That is the name everyone's given him

4197911 There are no "actual" boy names, just fan names. Which means any writer can name them anything they want in their fics. Although I also prefer Artemis, lol.:twilightsmile:

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Would you ponies leave me alone about the name? Jeeze, for one I forgot what it was and two, Eris and Solaris are one thing. Artemis... To tell you the truth, I don't like that name. :ajbemused: In my opinion (If anypony cares) his name is Prince Lunar.

4202793 Funny, that's what I thought Which means any writer can name them anything they want in their fics. meant.:ajbemused:

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I was just continuing the convo. Don't be such a smart ass. I didn't mean anything by that. :fluttershyouch:

4188398 I know a good way you can execute this story, "And then they banged... and it was hot... THE END!"

*Cue fast rolling credits, with silly music*

At least Eris can recognize she has a crush and does something about it.

update now please I I am begging

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Apologies, dear reader, but I have other matters to attend to and it makes progress slow.

Just a progress update, I'm half way through the clop scene. I will try to get as much of it done as possible within the time I have in the afternoons, but don't expect anything instant. I really hate being rushed. Thank you. :pinkiehappy:

sorry for rushing and thank you

Her moans grew louder and more intense at Luna's Strong, yet gentle pounding, slowly driving her towards the edge.

Typo, but yes, awesome work there. :pinkiehappy:

I'm curious as to what their child would look like. They could have a dragon baby, because hey, chaos.
...That's not gonna happen right? :twilightoops:

And that is the reason the night is the best time to show your love.

The whole thing about Solaris loving Queen Umbra was something I honestly made up to spice up the story line. If I get enough people saying I should, I may put a bonus chapter or a prequel to this fic showing a romance between the two. What do you guys think?

That needs more than that. That needs a story! My god I want some of that!

awesome thumbs up good story I like it please stay tuned

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