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Schnitzel hated his lot in life, but carried on every day, knowing tomorrow could always be better, provided Chowder didn't eat all the food again or set the kitchen on fire.
Then he woke up in a magical place after accidentally inhaling too much Pizazz.
(I loved this show, by the way. Also, I know the way he's spelled in the picture is different from how I've spelled it, but come on; his name is based on a real food.)
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all of my yes!
i loved this show.
Well... I must say I am eager to see this continued... You never fail to impress me my friend and I hope you never stop doing so.
Perfect-o!
I remember this show, and I still miss it.
Great beginning! 
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You know what you should do?
Name all the chapters random sequences of "Radda", topped off with one word that defines the chapter.
Radda radda radda!
3605644 You've just given me a great idea...
3605663
Love it.
+1 additional laugh
I'd put in a page break after he blacks out (maybe more buildup to it, as well). As for your cooking montage, it seems like a bit of a cheap way of handling the transition. Maybe you could actually have them get to the bakery and get ready to start making their 'smoothie' before transitioning (again with a page break (I like those)).
As for the crusaders, they seemed a bit quick to go parading this creature around town. I could see them trusting it instantly, but I personally think the whole scene happened a bit too fast. There was also a general lack of reaction from the populace, though it's not as if you didn't address that fact.
Despite those bumps, I feel you could make this into a decent story. I'm looking forward to see where you go with this.
This fic has potential. Consider it followed
Ooh the nostalgia
YES! He found freedom... or did he?
Oh damn, still, it's nice to see our favorite culinary rock creature in a more colorful world but then again being with the CMC, he now knows, there are others who are way worse than CHOWDER. Dun dun dunnnnn.
OH MY FUCKING G-D YES!
YES!
3605834 Well, I looked it over, and have given it some more "finishing touches" to include some of the things you said. You know, few people actually comment like this on my stories in so clear and concise a form. I wish more did; how else am I to improve if people just say "great" or "keep it up"?
just don't spend to much time on this dude
I haven't even started reading and all I want to say is 'WHAT DA FUCK THIS LOOKS AWSOME!"
Just.... yes, all my yes.
What's Applejack doing there? And why is she wearing her sisters bow?
Came for the Schnitzel, stayed for the insanity. Seriously, this is awesome. Now, I expect even more insanity.
Good job.
3606956
Trust me, I know exactly what you mean.
Radda Radda, radadarda Radda!
Radda.
If this manages to capture the pure lunacy of "Chowder" and the slap-stick of Pony, this will be hilarious.
thank you so much!
3607209 Whoops! Started thinking about the next chapter already!
That poor schmuck had the misfortune to meet the CMCs... I feel his pain.
Loved Schnitzel, so much depth and personality from one creature who could say one word.
When did the show go off the air, I lost track of it.
If Rarity turns out to be like that weird fat lady from the show (can't remember her name...) that would be hilarious. (I remember that one episode when she made Schnitzle her man-slave, and made him clean her pool while wearing only a tiger print speedo... I can't forget it... *sobs*)
3608840
You mean Endive?
3608840
Endive! A very bitter green.
Spoiler!
Schnitzel ends up with her in the end
You wonderful motherfucker!
Faved and advertised in my blog!
i love the story still
but did you really have to make twilight like this?
doing things with spike? and a clopfic section in the library?
sorry if i nit pick this stuff. just felt weird to me.
3609702 This is supposed to be just plain weird and zany. Other characters won't be this far gone, but I just felt like it. If enough people don't like it, I'll change it.
Hah!
This does match the zaniness of Chowder.
The reflex scene was also hilarious, but one tiny nitpick.
Did you mean to say are you not from Equestria?
Schnitzel is the last person I'd expect to flip the bird, but it was just as surprising as it was funny!
We need more burple nurples
>>>To think, she had had her whole day planned out doing experiments with Spike on the properties of reptilian mating rituals,>>>
Dash would wish to observe... and perhaps participate as a volunteer... for science, of course! Totally not hot dragon-pony sexx0rz.
>>>only to find out the Cutie Mark Crusaders had brought in some unknown creature and tried cooking (it).>>>
With that one little addition, the entire sentence takes on a gruesome new meaning! "CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS CANNIBALS!!! YAY!!!"
>>>None of the inns, so far as I can remember, have any spare rooms, what with that convention in town,” >>>
And, lo, Empress Celestia sent forth word to all the cities that all Equestria was too be taxed (to pay for her bloated cake budget). The Schnitzel went forth to Ponyville to be taxed. And Schnitzel was heavy with child, but there was no room in the inn. So after Fluttershy gave him a place in the manger at her cottage, and 3 days of excrutiating labor, Schnitzel gave birth to his firstborn son, Tom the Boulder (holy hell that had to hurt!).
Then 3 CMC's from the East came bearing gifts to Sedimentary Savorior; a hoof-full of bits, burnt orange juice, and tree sap.
(Scchnitzel reads, "Radda RADDA?!!"
)
Well, it's seasonally appropriate anyways!
3609794 Whoops again! Thank you for pointing that out. Here, have some mustache:
3607041 And may I ask, why is that? I'm been driving myself crazy trying to keep up with both college and my writing. I would hope you'd all understand that writing is my hobby, not my life.
I did enjoy Chowder while it lasted...
Maybe this could be worth a read.
ROFL DUDE ROFL but all in all please just let this be a side project it is good but your others have more meat and what not
You have my attention.
Also, your joke with Mrs. Cake is funny, but a little awkward. I think it'd be better if you put it as "filling out tax returns and ordering more insulin for Pinkie."
Pervert Twi is best twi
Radda Radda Radda!
3611228 Done and done.
Oh my god, this is twelve different kinds of great.