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Scootaloo realizes the intricacies and stress of love firsthoof when she discovers that both Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom are interested in her.
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What, you release your stories completed?! Also, that title pic! Pure gold!
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I do because I'm not sure when I'll have time to work on them. So if I took over a month to finish a chapter, everyone would be mad. If they don't know the story exists then they can't get mad. See what I'm getting at? Also yes, I'm very glad I just so happened to come across that pic.
4194909 yeah, I see where you're comin' from, although that would make it exceedingly hard to do an audience interactive story. Ya know, the kind where we submit OCs. From what I've seen that kinda story isn't your wavelength, still, I see where you're comin' from. I'll put this in read later for the weekdays. Hope it'll be good.
I am in love with this story
it's adorable and just plain outright relatable.......I like that 
4194909 You're a frickin' GENIUS!
Also, I luv the stories!
4195148 You've had your two best friends have a crush on you before?
No it happened to one of my friends though, only one guy was an ass
You seem to be in the process of throwing small scootaloo under a large bus.
Headline:scootaloo was hit by a bus.there is hope with New medical procedures she can make a full recovery.
Great story. I'm glad the Crusaiders are freinds again. Its just not the same without them.
That picture though.
4197546 She's just like OnO
I like this story. Only part that gets me is the feeling that the event were a bit more mature than their age, or what i think their ages are about, would usually include in their actions. Hopefully i got my point across. Lol
4197624 OMG UR PROFILE PIC!!!!!!!:O
Nice story but just a small nitpick.
It should be "whom" not "who".
Don't see Rainbow actually helping in many stories, its very refreshing.
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Pokemon u know the eeveelutions oh sao is also a good anime
4207520 eeyup
4202259 "whom" is old-style english, "who" is the commonly agreed apon modern alternative.... so NO
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Wow. So much wrong in that sentence that I would hazard a guess you're 14 and have never been exposed to English grammar.
Who is the subjective pronoun. Whom is the objective pronoun. They're not the same thing. I don't care if know nothings such as yourself believe it to be the modern alternative. It's wrong. And until the Oxford dictionary changes the meaning and the terms become accepted as being the same thing, you should really not open your mouth and make a bigger fool out of yourself than you already have.
4255342 it doesn't matter if who is a subjective pronoun or objective pronoun, the fact is that THE USEAGE OF A WORD WITHIIN SOCIETY IS WHAT DECIDES IT'S MEANING, that is just how language works and new words come into existance, it is also how the meaning of words can change over time, due to who being used as a replacement for whom in allmost all circumstances that would mean that YOUR DICTIONARY IS WRONG.
Also your personal attack of calling me 14 is nothing more than ad hominum, where you do not even have slightest bit of data to back up said claim that you, not only that but PERSONAL ATTACKS DO NOT AFFECT THE VALIDITY OF THE OPPONENTS ARGUEMENT, plus I am 21.
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It is the title of a story. If it was actually part of the story, then yes, I would have used whom, not who. It is proper English. As for the title, I can name it whatever I please, and it does not have to be grammatically correct. The reason why I used who is because it was dialog rather than narrative, as if someone was asking. Now, in today's world of English speaking, you rarely ever hear someone who actually says whom. Even the most devout English teacher or professor uses who, unless they are teaching a lesson involving whom. I feel like I'm a teacher trying to break up a fight between two elementary school students. Yes, you may have much more scholarly things to argue about than children, but your pointless and fact-less comebacks about the dictionary being wrong, or one of you being younger and less knowledgable than the other are, I'm sorry, pretty stupid. Now stop.
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First of all calm your tits. I can almost feel your anger and frustration seething through your use of the Royal Canterlot Voice. You might want to consider toning it down a bit so you don't look so crazy. I mean you're getting bent out of shape over somebody teaching you proper grammar.
You're free to use whichever version you want, but you personally don't control the language and where it's heading. Whom is still a perfectly cromulent word and it's not my fault that the education system where you are failed you. Any English teacher that uses "who" instead of "whom" has no right to teach English simply because it's wrong grammatically speaking. I should know, I actually taught English for a couple years before moving onto writing.
And I know you wanted to use big words there but it's not an "ad hominem". It was a personal observation based on your reaction. Usually the only people you see that lose it like that are 14 year olds and girls. 14 year old girls are the worst for that. So would it be safe to think of you as a person of the female gender? I hope so because that's how I see you. But this has gone on longer that it should have. I made a stray observation. In fact I think I called it a minor nitpick, you lost your shit over it and here we are.
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As said originally it was a minor nitpick which had to get blown out of proportion by some person who thinks they know how things work. I'm not denying that it's fallen out of use but it's not by any means archaic or ancient. It's not like the usage of "you" which replaced "thou" or something regional like the use of "y'all". It is still in use and it's still grammatically sound to use. Maybe in 50 or 100 years it will have been replaced by who as both objective or subjective pronoun but until that day there is nothing wrong in using it.
Now I will offer both of you the last word should you so choose. I made my point and that's all that matters in the end. So go nuts.
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You blew it out of proportion just as much, and you referring to the other person as a female is just completely shallow. You're making assumptions which you have no basis for and created a stereotype about the female gender. One of the things this fandom is supposed to be about is breaking stereotypes. It may be mainly based on male stereotypes, but that doesn't mean stereotyping girls is right. You're also creating stereotypes about age, which is of course, another thing this fandom is changing. Age doesn't necessarily imply how much knowledge someone else has. I'm starting to want to agree with the other side of the argument just because you're acting unnecessarily dickish at this point. I won't though because this argument is just pointless
4258058 first of all the use of royal cantalot voice is to emphathise a point, second "proper" grammer is actually decided by the majority due to how language works and as such "who" can actually be used in both situations, I am angry because you fail to take into account how language evolves over time and how the meaning of a word is decided not by those who write the dictionaries but by those who use the word. As who is used both objectively AND subjectively within modern culture (thus determining the meaning of the word) your attempt to say that people cannot use that word in this context is foolish at best.
In other words Mr. I-Don't-Know-How-Languages-Evolve-Over-Time-And-I-Am-Acting-As-A-Grammer-Nazi-Despite-The-Meaning-Of-The-Word-"Who"-Evolving-Based-On-How-It-Is-Used-Therefore-Makeing-My-Claim-About-Grammer-Incorrect, the proper grammer for things IN ANY LANGUAGE is not based on a set of arbitrary rules set by your grammer school teacher but it is instead based on an arbitrary set of rules decided by the general population that uses the language.
As such "who" is proper grammer due to everyone but a very small minority useing it in this particular context, "whom" stopped being the go-to objective version of "who" a VERY LONG TIME AGO when people decided to use "who" to mean the same thing instead(a common occurence within language, where people use an abbreviation for the same thing- it often pisses off grammer nazis like you as you foolishly call it "bad grammer" dispite it's grammatical rules being determined by those who use it).
Honestly, I've been looking a sort of fic with this premise for a while now, and congratulations on being one of the only ones to write it. That said, it was corny and cliche'd as all hell, and that's saying something coming from a show like Friendship is Magic. It was almost painful to read.
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It was supposed to be. It's kind of funny that you're part of a fandom like this if you can't handle something cute.
I knew you had the power to get three stories in a row! Now if you excuse me, I need to re-write the first chapter of a story I recently took down. Ugh, why did I take the piss out of snooker?
-Lightning
This is what I mean when I say love is pointless. It's confusing, heartless, cruel, and cold. There are two forms of love. Aphrodite/Venus, and Cupid/Eros. Love in this case is both. A mixture of ice and steel and fire.
This story ended off on a rather balanced note, not bad.
I can't lie, this hit me right in the feels for some odd reason...
Just to point it out, this chapter was just a bit weak...
Not to be a hater or anything
good start can't wait to see what will happen next
hopefully the cliche doesn't happen of the 2 finding out she is dating them both
So, the plan is to gather them for a more easy apologize? Seems about right.
Oh Scootaloo... Why did you do that!!??
Havent read it but i all ready love it also i have a ship idea scoots and babs
4197072 my thoughts excatly
Just finished reading this one, and I've gotta say: I'm not one for ScootaBloom, but this is probably one of the best stories I've read on the site so far. The characters are all handled excellently (Rainbow Dash especially), and it all felt very realistic. Scootaloo's thought process is completely understandable, especially for someone her age. Same applies to Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle. Also, the ending is absolutely perfect. Again here we witness the realism. Most authors would take the easy way out and either have Scoots choose one of the Crusaders to be her partner... or both. Here, however, we get a happy ending without shoveled on romance. This is what I like to see. Definitely deserving of that feature.
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Wow, well, I'm certainly glad you enjoyed it so much. For the most part, I do try my hardest to keep all the ponies as in character as I can in my stories, no matter what the situation. So it's nice to see that you noticed. As for the ending, I tend to do a lot of romance stories and on this one I wanted to try something a bit different ending-wise. I'm glad you liked it as well.
Bad Rainbow Dash! BAD! Polyamory for the win, Scoots!
(we really need a Princess Cadence Emoticon...)
Ah, if only...
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The great thing about this situation is that all three of them are friends already!
You know what I don't know how to feel about this story I like it but I kind of wish it ended differently. Actually if there was a sequel to this story and it was about scootaloo's feelings towards her friends I would be very interested on how that would work. I feel like this sequel if there was one could play off the fact that scootaloo fell in love with both of her friends and she doesn't know how to deal with it. It would have to be after they get their cutie marks and their teenagers so you could probably make it so scootaloo has been conflicted for years or something.
In case you need an opinion in the future, I prefer ScootaBloom over ScootaBelle XD