This story is a sequel to Heated
It's been three weeks since Fluttershy had her "problem" and they are now a happy wife and husband. But one day, Fluttershy isn't acting normal. And she has unusual symptoms of an unknown illness: cravings, mood-swings, dizziness, morning sickness. It's almost like she's.....
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I know it's short. It isn't going to be too long but I felt Heated needed a sequel. Thanks for all the positive feed back on the first story, I hope you guys enjoy this as much as Heated.
Thanks!
-not the real VAV
awesome storyline...deserves a sticker because i love stickers.
TWINS!!!!
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4185553 Yay! I feel my self esteem rising!
I'd like to thank everyone who favorite this story! I'm really glad people are liking this. Makes me feel good.
I can't wait to see Mac's reaction. *faints*
Don't you just love it when Big Mac look after Fluttershy's well being, not to mention her kissing him?
Oh, I hope it's what I think it is!
Yay! Fluttershy and Big Mac are gonna have a baby!
It's really cute when the mom-to-be touches her belly... Just to know the baby's in there.
I'm sorry I haven't written any new chapters! And that the only chapters posted are really short! I plan on having (hopefully) either two chapters posted by Wednesday, or at least one longer chapter by Wedmesday. Thanks! People are still liking and favoriting everyday (Fluttershy squee).
I'm bored...
Can you tell?
Aw... This is just too cute! They're both gonna be parents!
That was cute. I can't wait for the mood swings, but knowing make we would just smile thinking of the foal.
MMMMOOOOAAAARRRRR
It's been a while since I've felt true diabeetus. You gave me diabeetus! And I love it!!!
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You guys are going to give me an overinflated ego!
Nice chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Best of luck.
This is probably my favorite chapter so far. I took Fluttershy, the cutest pony in my opinion, shoved her in a cute bag, threw some fluff and adorableness in, and shook it. Of course she's alright, I'd never be able to live with myself if i hurt her but you get the point.
I've been studying where the story might go and I've realized something: four (short) chapters in and we havented made a dent on what I've got planned. Be prepared for A LOT of chapters in the future!
Thanks
-not the real VAV
4205207 Havented? Really? What an idiot...*huff* I DO BELIEVE YOU MEAN "HAVEN'T"
*Convulsing with D'AAAAWWWWWS*
4204348 Aw...
I gotta say, Fluttershy's so adorable. Especially when her impregnated belly is being touched.
Angel, you're so hilarious!
A little edit I've made for you:
4205626 thanks. I had picked up on that after I published it but it was late at night for me and I just wanted to go to bed
4207003 That's okay.
Thanks for the chapter. Best of luck with the next one.
As a word of advice, you should start trying to release two or so chapters in one for bigger word counts. There's an unspoken rule/guideline to have not only the initial submission be over 1000 words but each chapter, too. Don't sacrifice quantity for speed.
I think Big Mac and Angel will get along just fine.
This is too cute, you know that?
I wonder how the girls would react to the news. I know Apple Bloom and Applejack will be psyched in the knowledge that they're gonna be Aunties. Since Dashie is like a sister to Fluttershy, consider her an Auntie, too.
A couple of edits I've made:
4210548 thanks for the advice.
4212103 thanks! Edits are always helpful
4213125 You're very welcome!
Best of luck with the next chapter. I hope the plot twist really spices up the story.
Man... Fluttershy sure has her mood swings, doesn't she?
For a moment, I thought Twilight was gonna go happy mad and give Fluttershy a big hug. But I guess that's Pinkie Pie's department.
Nice to see you, Thunderlane. Haven't heard from you in a while.
Big Mac's right. Fluttershy is cute!
I can't wait to see the others' reactions, particularly A.J. and Dashie's.
4232254 oh trust me...it will *maniacal laugh* just kidding though it is a shock
4232607 YE BOI! Time to get to work
4233589 You better not do anything to that foal or I will unless the wrath of Pinkie Pie on your story and her saying "Cherrychanga, or Chimcherry."
4233605 Oh god no! It's a really exciting surprise, not sad
Can't wwwaaaiiittt!!!
4233595 Take your time. No rush.
cute chapter.
Nice chapter. I can't wait for,,,, Wait, everyone knows now, except for Rainbow. I wonder what she is going to do?
Well that was another great chapter. I think I now know the surprise. I can't wait to read that chapter.
4250090 Thanks. I kind of feel bad making you guys wait a while. I don't know for sure how long it'll take but hopefully it will be soon. I'm going to have to do more research on mare pregnancy I want to be as accurate as possible. Though it'll be worth the wait, I promise.
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Good job figuring that out so fast, Fluttershy. It usually takes someone else telling the character for them to put two and two together.
Canary Mare, the new superhero! With her canary powers of flight, she swoops in and saves the day! Also, she sings.
4250180 You really can't forget about that singing power. Nor that beautiful modeling power: "AMAZIN! Zo beautiful! Vonderful, dahling. Vonderful!
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*thought
Angel is a cunning, far-seeing rabbit. Where other rabbits would look at a carrot and think 'food,' Angel sees more. He sees past the obvious uses for the orange veggie; to him, the carrot is: 'ammo for getting others to give me even more food.'
Truly, his wisdom is an inspiration to us all.
4250303 Ha ha! Looks like we see Angel alike...that deviously genius rabbit is quite the thinker...
That Angel can be pretty picky.
Aw... How adorable! Big Mac's kissing his sleepy, pregnant wife and making lunch for her.
Pinkie, you can be so funny at times!
How can anypony forget Gilda?
Pinkie makes the cutest hugs! I remember when she and Rarity hugged Fluttershy at the end of "Putting Your Hoof Down."
Stop being so suspicious, A.J.! You know better than to misjudge your brother.
Sometimes, Granny Smith can be a bit senile.
Aw... Apple Bloom's reaction to the news Fluttershy's pregnancy was just too cute! She and Applejack will make fine aunties one day.
Oh, did you see how Fluttershy and Big Mac respond to Apple Bloom's question? So sweet!