Long hiatus. Unsure on when I will continue, although I am seriously considering re-writing due to the fact that I wrote this many years ago and the whole story could really use a good cleanup or reset. I will post updates once I get down to it but for now it'll stay in a hiatus.
It´s a snowy day in Ardennes; An American officer and his soldiers were keeping watch when a German attack commences. It´s the beginning of the 'Battle of the Bulge'. The battle goes on, he is soon taken out by a tank´s shot that fell close to his position. The moment he wakes up, the officer finds out that he is no longer in Ardennes anymore.... soon he learns something else... It is no longer Earth.
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A German soldier advances against the americans as soon as he hears the order of attack. Explosions engulf all around as a tank explodes, making him lose consciousness. When he finally wakes up, he finds an angry American officer pointing at him, the sun high up in the sky, and everything green all around. That´s when the question arises on his mind... Where is he???
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Edited by D4SH3R
I´m searching for pre-readers of my future chapters. If interested, please send me a PM
I´m working on music for the story. I´ll try ot make a song for each important event or chapter that happens on it. Here´s the main theme, if you guys are interested to listen to it:
Im faving because I like the premise
Such a painfully large number of spelling and Grammar errors in the summary alone, I shudder to think of what the actual story looks like.
4172120 sorry for that. Jeje, I'm still getting better on my English. Aaand also I wrote it today as the idea snapped inside my head soooo... Well, you can guess... Shoot!! I really wrote some pretty bad ones now that I read it.
4172129 Well, I guess it is a great deal more understandable if English isn't you first language. Allow me to assist.
In the title:
Of a German and Amercian Soldiers in Equestria
2 mistakes:
1. Misspelled American
2. The 'a' implies singular while the word 'soldiers' implies plural, you need to pick one.
In the summary:
An American officer and his soldiers where keeping watch on a snowy day in the Ardennes when a German attack commences beginning the “Battle of the Bulge”. As the battle goes on, he is taken out by a tank´s close shot. As he wakes up, he finds that he is no longer in Ardennes anymore.... and soon he learns he is no longer on Earth.
7 mistakes:
1. 'where keeping watch' should be 'were keeping watch'
2. The first sentence is an awkward run on sentence.
3. I'm pretty sure the " " around Battle of the Bulge should be ' '
4. It is generally considered bad form to begin a sentence with 'As' and is even worse to start two in a row that way.
5. 'no longer in Ardennes' should be 'no longer in the Ardennes'
6. You used the word 'he' five times in the last sentence, which is not technically wrong, but rather redundant.
7. The biggest problem is that the summary is rather boring to read, like a grocery list, it needs some spice.
4172216 thanks a lot. I didn't knew about some things you said there. I'll see about it as soon as I can.
Nice to see another ww2 enthusiast writing mlp stories keep it up
4174801 Yes! I made a whole investigation in the Battle of the Bulge in order to make this first chapter
It was a little difficult to decide which battle throughout WWII I should use 
You like WWII history?
4174817 I love the Second World War. I know a bit about the tanks but my real knowledge is in the aircraft of the era
4174828 I´ve been making a lot of personall studies about everything. Aricraft are my favorite part of it right after the battleships
I´ve not met any WWII enthusiast in here before 
4174845 yeah I really got into tanks after I started playing World of Tanks. But ww2 aviation is my true passion.
4174869 Jajaja, I also did with WoT!
Also in WoW about aircraft
4174883 I also play War Thunder for my planes. Very close to getting a Tempest and I am so excited to get it. Tempest is my fav British plane.
4174893 I stopped playing some time ago
It got erased from my computer and I still have not reinstalled it. I like a lot the british line, but I somehow go more for the germans and the americans.
4174915 yeah my German and Russian lines are lacking but my Americans almost have the jets.
4174918 Maybe once I install it again we could play someday? I probably lost some practice though...
4174945 ok but my schedule is a little messed up. I have a link to my youtube channel on my page if you want to take a look
4175043 Yes! Of course
4179788 thanks!
4180856 I'm trying to make it as realistic as possible. That means that yes, their weapons are pretty strong and they are trained soldiers, so they stand a good chance against anything Equestria might throw at them.
4181408 Thanks!
4183558 Mmm... I uploaded the next chapter yesterday, but I wasn´t convinced so I took it down. I´m not sure how to give the ide of the next chapter.
I´m looking for editors or pre-readers to know opinions about it. Are you interested?
4185102 awesome!!! What do you want to help me with, reading or editing??
4185370 Mmm... with a reading is okay
So, should I send you via PM the next chapter?
4185559 Okay! Let me just finish some fixes I´m making it and I´ll send it to you right away. I won´t take me longer than half an hour.
Thanks a lot!
I like it, I hope the next chapter is as good as this one!
4195484 Thanks! I'll do my best.
I have to read this simply because my immature side actually wet itself a little at "Battle of the Bulge".
but still he knew if there wasn´t any prove of it,
Replace the "prove with proof."
When is the next chapter?
4195793 ohhh, thanks, I'll change that right away.
4195843 I'll try to have it as soon as possible, which is, hopefully, within the next three days.
4196006 yeah, sure, thanks a lot.
This is by far the best case cenerio I have seen for humans going into ponyville. Keep up the good work. -buster
4196956 thanks!!
I need to do SOMETHING with my life, so I'll go through grammar and whatnot (Do you have Google Docs/Wanna move to PMs?)
He shot as the wolf pounced again at him.
Faved to remind myself to look at this when I have time.
This is an idea ive wanted to do FOR A LONG TIME
We need more American stories in the World War group
Have a pair of songs form back then... for entertainment
Officer Davis? How about a rank: lieutenant?
4251622 yessss!!! Thank you!! I don't have google docs, but I was thinking about beginning to use it. Yeah, it would be better via PM's
4251652 thanks! I'll see to that as soon as I can.
Can you tell me what the guns are called because i need a visual image of the gun.
4272535 of course!
Davis~
Rifle- M1 Garand
Pistol- Colt Model 1903 Pocket Hammerless
Louis~
Rifle- Gewehr 41
Pistol- Mauser HSc
I'm going to make a blogpost soon also giving some background of each weapon and also will soon place some references inside the story.
Hey man I read it and I liked it, also I wanted to give you some facts about their load outs. A germen privet at the time were given the Kar98kurtz which is a bolt action rifle with a five round internal magazine, and some were lucky enough to have a pistol. If they had one it would mostly be the wether P38. Also most American officers were given the Thomson sub-machine gun and the M1911. Just trying to help.
4313469 okay, thanks a lot! I made a little research, but I've never been too good for those details of guns... I will check on that, thanks a lot!!!!
4314059 sure thing if you need to know anything about firearms in WWII then ask me.
4314191 can you send me a PM about those you told me? I want to know as much in order to know how to write some things that involve the weapons.
4314810 ok sure thing.
4319193 Thanks!