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Spike wakes up one day feeling like a winner. To test his newfound winning abilities, he challenges Rainbow Dash and Applejack to a simple little game of Truth or Dare. What ensues will change the lives of the three forever.

Author's note: Spike's a boss.

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Comments ( 121 )
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Thats... Interesting.

“Fine, but it’s truth for you next time.” He noted. “And I dare you to give me a kiss.”

Applespike incoming! lolz :rainbowlaugh:

God, I feel like Spike woke up thinking he was a pimple and thought he could get a kiss from at least three ponies in a day.

Nice story you got going here hope to see more of it.

The kissing dare.
Classic.

Well that was something...

I wonder how long Spike can exploit their competitive streak.

Well... interesting is a rather good way to describe my feelings towards this, though it does 'feel' dark somehow, which is strange considering the tags and premise.

Immediately interested because after all...Truth or Dare makes and/or breaks friendships:trollestia:

AJ and Rainbow are acting too predictable. Still a good story, though.

Oh yeah, and Spike is a boss.:moustache:

AL

Hahahaha niceee , i hope to read more applespike !!!

So, what did Twilight inject Spike with while he was asleep?

Because I can see Twilight doing almost anything as long as she gets to yell "FOR SCIENCE!" at some point.

Hum... Spike woke up horny today, huh?:pinkiehappy:

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And here we have the summary of the story's entire plot.

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He definitely is a boss.

This seems like an alright story to fav for now and follow, so long as it stays tasteful and who am I kidding, there's gonna be closet dares. *Rolls eyes* It was amusing enough to be interested in another chapter.

Makes me want to start on my Spike story:moustache:

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"Closet dares"? You thought.

Bah, Rainbow and Applejack are amateurs at Truth or Dare. Physical labor?
Please, Spike's got this. It's all about psychology. Mentalis über alles!

I see a bed being used and abused at the end of all this. Freaking love where this is going, I hope for more soon. :ajsmug:

Eh, what could possibly go wrong?

This is gunna be guuuudddddddddddd,
LETS GET DANGEROUS PEEPS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Spike you dirty dog
man I love stories with this type of Spike in them

spike you sly sonofagun, using your dirty tricks to get all the ladies :rainbowlaugh:

I like where this is going...

Well I can see whats going to happen here...:derpytongue2:

Looking pretty good so far. You got me hooked.

Spike is going to get himself killed at this rate .-.

damn u for leaving a cliff hanger!!!:flutterrage:

Damn you, give us MORE. :flutterrage: Other than that necessary rage, it's awesome and i'm watching it build.:twilightsmile::raritywink::scootangel::ajsmug::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:

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It's a fun trick, assuming they keep playing along. They're going to scream bloody murder about Spike's choices of truths and dares, but Spike timed it perfectly and chose his first target perfectly: it's not like Applejack can complain about self-serving dares after what she just did to Rainbow Dash. (I'm hoping Applejack actually does complain, just so Spike can point that out.)

spikes on my friends Ms. Peachbottom's status

Aww, You gave me a good laugh, author.

As long as it doesn't turn into clop, count me in. :pinkiehappy:

It's a tad early to give my full review, but I'll say this:

Minus a few excessive sentences and redundant dialogue tags, this was sharply written. The only problem I MUST say right now is the lack of backstory to Spike's all-too-sudden change. Maybe a few clues would've sufficed, I don't know.

Faving this for now. Let's see what you can do. :rainbowdetermined2:

Craine...

Now I want to continue readin things are getting good.Great job there.:pinkiehappy:

Awesome idea, poor execution. I really like the idea of Spike as a super-confident Barney Stinson type, but the comedy gets buried in Lavender Unicorn Syndrome and other style issues.

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Whatever floats your boat.

4158916 No, you were given a bit of helpful criticism and blew it back in his face. Your story is not perfect. It is far from. Next time, when someone tries to help, don't be a cock about.

It's not a good way to make friends.

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Never said my story was perfect. And I don't see how his comment counts as constructive criticism.

"Lavender Unicorn Syndrome and other style issues"...yeah, thanks for that.

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And a story can never reach perfection. A "perfect" story doesn't exist in everyone's eyes. Perception of any story comes down to complete subjectivity. Whether the reader enjoys it is his/her perogative. In this case, whatever floats his boat. And if you're so sensitive as to label me a "cock" for responding in such a manner, then you're definitely not a "friend" I'd ever like to have by my side.

Applejack detected an unrecognizable pressure that she hadn’t been met with before. It was a bit awkward…a funny feeling she couldn’t shake away.

That's not the only thing she'll be shakin' away..
:duck:

That was awesome fun!:pinkiehappy:

I like this Spike.:pinkiehappy: Working these mares in ways they have never been worked before. By the end of this story, Spike will have two hot mares keeping their eyes on him!:moustache::trollestia:

Yay, awkward situations!:yay:
Alright, I will fav this. Wanna know how this turns out...:ajsmug:

Dude! I will literally pay you to continue this! I've read over 500 stories on this site and I cannot say that I've been more excited to read a chapter than this story. Please continue! :moustache:+Swag=Boss!

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