I am a Begginer Of writing FanFics But I will get better Later,But right now,Ill only Right the stuff That Comes to my Mind,Later on,Ill ask You people To suggest Me some stories,MyBio!
Oh great. Im stuck in a place called equestria. I like it here, but It seems to, colorful, fun, for me. Me, Im just a soldier, But not and ordinary one. But that doesn't matter. I just try to do my Job. Not like its my fault I try to help.
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I rewrote this story about, 5 times, but I changed so many things in it. So many things, so this isn't called as Re- submitting an old story is it?:
cool. Wonder why everyone is so obviously hating on your effort?
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What?
I can tell you one thing.
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Alot of random and unnecesary capitalization.
You also missed few spots that needed to be capped.
Oh no! she thought. The horrors of shifting person! You pull open your keyboard to write a comment to the author about the fact that he's shifting between first and third person in his description, which means to change between "I" and "he/she", but it could be worse! He could be shifting to second person as well! I might as well tell you that second person is "you". A common hallmark of bad fanfic is to shift person at random, as if the author started writing a story in one person and then decided to change to the other. But what can she do? Only the author has the power to edit the person being used in a fanfic! So I decided that the only thing I could do was to write a comment that randomly shifts person, so the author can see how annoying it is! Now you feel satisfied because you've done what you can do to defeat your nemesis shifting person, so she saved the comment and went on her merry way.
Fuck... I added ellipses.... D:
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There's a difference between hatred and honest dislike, and you'd do well to learn it before you end up making one of those 'y duz everywun heyterz meh!?' rant blogs.
This is a bit like trying to judge a cake made entirely out of shit. A for effort, but at the end of the day, it's still a turd, and you can make a way better cake if you know what the hell you're doing. That is why people are downvoting this.
4100462 Okay, just trying to be sympathetic to the guy I mean sheesh!
It's not as though he's some A grade writer and I don't pretend that he is.
He made an effort and frankly even if that effort didn't turn out that great he still deserves to be told to keep on trying. Constructive criticism is much more helpful in both my personal opinion and about, Oh i dunno, most of the Professionals in this line of thinking. So good day to your negativity and frankly instead of waiting for your insult of 'your just some stupid, idiot, retard, fag, shithead whatever comes to your pessimistic mind. I have three doctorates in physics chemistry and psychiatry. Admittedly all done under aliases but still better than anything you have to show for your existence so frankly come down to Australia and I'll watch your head get ripped from your shoulders.
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Are you serious? Internet tough guy much? And obviously, such a professional would know the correct place to put a capital letter, for example, and would be able to go five seconds without sounding like that Navy Seal copypasta. A consumnate professional wouldn't have to resort to threats of physical force to make a point, and would be able to make an argument that could stand by itself. Three PhDs by the age of thirteen? I'm sorry, let me laugh even harder. A professional with multiple PhDs probably wouldn't refer to a good writer in the field as 'A-grade', further suggesting that the age on your profile is the correct one. Basically, you're a kid whose voice probably hasn't broken yet, and you're making death threats to someone online who you don't even know. Absolutely fucking pathetic. You realise making death threats against someone is actually a criminal offence in many developed nations, right?
As for your friend, he deserves to have constructive criticism, yes, but effort in and of itself does not a good story make, and you shouldn't lie to him and say that his derivative, formulaic HiE is special because effort is somehow magical. 'constructive' does not mean 'asspats'. Lots of people try damn hard to write stories, and not all of them somehow magically make something good from that effort. That's life, sadly, and your demeanour smacks of 'privileged white dude', as if you've never really had to try much for anything, so when you do put effort in you get lots of praise and it's treated as magical. Again, with the obviously teenage thought patterns. Really, he'd have been better off reading three general guides to fiction writing (learning where to put capital letters, like you!), rather than rewriting it an additional three times. Or by reading some of the stuff that gets posted on here, because a story with this exact storyline flies by at the very least daily, and they usually bomb horribly.
Aesthetic disapproval of a story =/= hatred of the author.
4103424 Okay vague assessment of that says that I should probably have a look at the writing that you're insulting. Now as for your insult of 'Basically you are a kid who's voice hasn't even broken yet and is making death threats to someone online who he doesn't even know.' Well I made the retaliation for that in the last comment/ reply. Also if you have ever used an iPad you would know that capital letters is often caused by something known as auto correct, yes I probably should have edited before posting that but hey look who reread my comment three times trying to find something to use against me. 'Professional'. Can I just ask what you mean by that? I have three doctorates in physics, psychiatry and chemistry. Have I at any point declared a job?
Also as for the death threat, it was my understanding that that was 'the norm' for a half decent internet argument over something irrelevant to what we ended up fighting over. My sincerest apologies if it seemed like that was a legitimate death threat and shook you to your core, traumatising you for life. But anything else? Get over yourself.
Also if resorting to a half serious physical threat is bad, then what does it make someone who reverts to swearing and exclamation marks to emphasise an argument that the follow up line already does? Seems as though that was just backlash anger.
Did I strike a nerve?
I am seriously contemplating even replying to the 'Privileged white dude as if you have never had to try for anything.' You sir are sounding more and more like someone who has had to deal with a difficult youth/ childhood and as a result lash out as people who you view as similar to your tormentors when you were young.
So to conclude.
We have both offended each other and responded with more offence. You are probably a nice person face to face that recognises that arguing over the internet is pointless as emotions are difficult to get across with black text on a white background.
So I would like to offer my full formal apologies for any offence I have caused you in my little rants and hope we can just leave this as a stupid little mis understanding on the side of our busy lives.
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Uh... huh. Just going to point out that you were the one to begin talking about professionals in your first reply, and then tried to wow me with credentials you claim to have, as if that actually means anything here, when talking about pastel coloured ponies. I note that none of your credentials (which you felt the need to post here, because E-peen) deal with literary analysis, by the way. I could claim to be someone I'm not, just like you could claim to be a thirteen year old, like your profile suggests.
And yes, you do come across as very privileged. It's a thing, on here, and you'd know exactly what I'm talking about if you were the psychiatrist you claim to be. You'd probably also know the difference between a 'profession', as in a job, and being 'professional'. As for internet arguments, actually both just make you shitty at arguing. Death threats are the absolute nadir of a good argument, with the possible exception of comment deletion, and you'd probably do best to try not to ape 'good' internet arguments, because it just makes you look like a tool, tbh. Not saying you are a tool, just that it comes across that way. And please try to actually respond to points people make in the future, yes? Because you never did say why effort alone could make a story worth reading, in the absence of originality, literacy, and common sense. I'm genuinely curious to know, because philosophies interest me. You seemed very disgruntled with what you dubbed to be 'negative thinking', for example, which does make sense, given your apparent ideas about effort.
Maybe I'm just constructing a strawman here, but your original comment was about people hating on this kid's 'effort', when really it's more a case that giving him asspats and telling him it's great would utterly degrade the upvote/downvote system even more than it already has been. It would be an insult to authors who write genuinely inspiring works on here. So it gets downvotes, because people don't really think the story is very good, and that makes sense, given the guy is ten. No malice, generally, just 'eh, it could be better', and tbh, he shouldn't even be on here. Y'know, unless you're both lying about your ages. I guess I responded to you because I'm just so tired of seeing comments like yours on bad stories, and I'm honestly not sure if it's just because people have really low standards, or have some sort of effort-based magical thinking going on.
Either way, was nice talking to you. You know, except for the part where you went completely psycho. Kind regards,
Lord Sunder
4104442 Have I told you lately that I love you? Because I do.
Also, if dude isn't actually thirteen, you'd think he'd realize how creepy it is to claim to be and then talk to ten year olds.
4104442 Yeah sorry about that.
See you when next we happen to end up commenting on the same story. Kind regards Fear the Dark
PS: Try these stories; Mort takes a holiday (by AnonymousMaterials), The patchwork (by mblsht) and Succession (by Helrael).