I'm a Catholic whore, currently enjoying congress out of wedlock with my black Jewish boyfriend who works at a military abortion clinic. Hail Satan, and have a lovely afternoon.
(Coauthored with totallynotabrony)
Equestria's fastest pegasus joins the United States Air Force, and, through her triumphs and tragedies, learns what it means to be loyal.
Cover art by Scratch42. Awesome job, buddy!
My thanks go out to totallynotabrony, who provided the spectacular third chapter.
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Seems good so far.
i love it so far
There has been a lot of Rainbow/Air force fics lately. Personally I think its a good idea for great stories. Keep up the good work.
Tracking like a guided missile. So gloriously meta.
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Really? Links please!
I did one with RD and Naval Aviation. Fancy a read?
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Not sure if this will work, never put a link in a comment before, still relatively new here, but this is one i just got done reading earlier today and has just been updated Blue Angel. There was another like this one though, ill find it eventually and let you know and sure, ill give yours a read too.
You get my vote, nice writing.
Semper fidelis means always faithful. And then it just happens that there's another fic literally two spaces above this fic on the front page that's titled Forever Faithful.
CONSPIRACY
Awesome. I want to see what will happen next.
Interesting. It's a nice idea, and well executed. One thing I don't quite understand is why the U.S.and Tajikistan are at war. Last I checked, we were in good standing with each other. I'm sure you'll explain tho.
Looking forward to what happens next!
interesting story.....
oh and by the way.....
NO ONE LIKES YOU< RICK SANTORUM
Well, that was interesting.
Ya, not quite what I expected from the first encounter
CLUTTERED COMMS
GAAAAAAAAAAH
Usually its a bit more professional than that. Panic is a pilots worst enemy, and Screaming makes it worse.
If you do, that's between you and the backseater if you have one.
But otherwise pretty good so far!
I hope you got something more. Air to air combat is exsiting yes but you need to have something more then F-16 fighters vs MiG to call this a story. How could RD have walked thorth the whole air traing with out any hands? And how was she able to be the squat-leader?
The plot you are using now is vage and confusing for the readers. How was the ponies able to come to the human world is an good exsaple. Try in the next chapter to filled in the plot more. We need information, and you have the info we needed. To say this: we aren't you. We can't think like you.
How, where, when is the most used questions in this story.
Thanks. And if you need to be filled in about the things. Plzz contact me.
AndMos
539032 Talk about confusing. Learn to spell properly and maybe I'll listen to you.
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I found it simple to follow, to be honest. Or at least, easier than your grammar
539156I hope you got something more. Air to air combat exists yes but you need to have something more than F-16 fighter’s vs. MiG to call this a story. How could RD have walked through the whole air train without any hands? In addition, how was she able to be the squat-leader?
The plot you are using now is vague and confusing for the readers. How the ponies were able to come to the human world is an good example. Try in the next chapter to fill in the plot more. We need information, and you have the info we needed. To say this: we are not you. We cannot think like you.
How, where, when is the most used questions in this story.
Thanks. In addition, if you need to be filled in about the things. Plzz contact me.
Andmos.
Happy?
539215 my grammar is that bad. I know
What shitty planes were the U.S. flying!? I mean, MIGs owning American pilots like that is VERY unlikely! Unless they were using shitty, outdated planes, the U.S. should've have AT LEAST been able to wipe out half that enemy squadron before they fell apart. The U.S. Air Force has the best trained pilots and the most advance fighter jets in the world.
Point is, they wouldn't have gone down that easy, or they would at least have put up a better fight than that gagglef**k!
Still, I like this and continue!
Silver out!
Was kind of hoping it would turn out that Rainbow would have to survive in the forest until rescue.
Still turned out great though.
hmmm... wondering where this is gonna go. It's really quite boring at the moment, and doesn't seem to be really building any plot to it (it really sounds more like you just set up a background to start a story in Equestria... and that's it)
Sometimes a good story isn't over, it just ends. This story focuses around a specific moment in Dash's life. It raises a lot of questions and that is ok, because if done well it let's the viewers mind wander and explore the story on their own. This story pulled that off decently but I agree a little more background would work wonders. Personally I would have added a bit more to the fighting to make Dash seem like a more competent flyer.
As for how she flew I just added, in my mind, the hooks that totalynotabrony used as a story mechanic.
A good perspective on the soldier looking for home. I appreciate your work good sir.
MOAR!
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