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Regret, pain, sadness.
The princess spent each day harboring these feelings, torturing and agonizing. For a thousand years, the princess was dead inside. Every day, every wretched day, she woke up, hoping it was all a dream, that her sweet, beloved sister would be nagging her to get up and play with her. Every hour, every minute, of those thousand years was a harrowing curse.
The princess knew, she knew in her heart, that it was not her sister that she had sent away. She told herself that she had not banished her sister. Whatever it was that terrorized Equestria was not the sister she loved anymore. It who had vowed to shroud the land in eternal darkness, it who felt no love, compassion, care, it who brought the potential destruction of the ponies of Equestria; this could never had been her caring, warm sister.
The princess was so obsessed in her glory and shone as the sun, blindly. She cast a shadow long, and the shadow fell dark upon her younger sister. Years passed, and soon did the princess turn from her light to gaze down on her sister, cowering in pain and darkness. The princess realized with a dread that neither citizens of her land nor she had given the sister the love she deserved.
This is the tale of the events that transpired.

Cover art by Zedrin on DeviantArt

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I think it would probably be better if you replaced the cartoons with a book/storybook and the video games with something else. You know, to fit the time period and all.

Otherwise it was good.

It was nice but it didn't really make me sad.

Lullay moon princess, goodnight sister mine.
Rest now in moonlight's embrace
Bare up my lullaby winds of the earth
Through clouds and through sky and through space~
Cary the piece and the coolness of night
And cary my sorrows in kind

Luna, your loved so much more than you know
May troubles be far from you mind
And forgive me for being so blind~
~~~Lullaby for a princess

Luna sighed and shut the book! throwing it back towards the shelf.

Please tell me the exclamation point is a mistake. Please. It doesn't flow otherwise.

4503979 Fate has been a creul and order unkind.
How can I have sent you away?
The blame was my own, the punishment yours,
The harmony's silent today.

But into that stillness I'll bring you a song.
And I will your company keep.
'Till your tired eyes
And my lullabies
Have cared you softly to sleep...

4536371 Oh, sorry... That must've been a type blunder :twilightblush:

I didn't cry but don't take that personally because I don't really have any emotions, but that's a damn fine story you have there. :twilightsmile:
Solar Empire :heart:

4605464 Ahah, thanks!!

4613571 Hell yeah. But, I don't think it can write anymore :twilightsheepish:

4605464 LUNA NOBLIS PROVENDENT! DOWN WITH THE SUN TYRANT! LONG LIVE THE MOON RISER AND THE NIGHT!

4613577 Re-read and found one more mistake.

"No there's not! It's almost seven in the morning, and it's the first day of daylight saving!"
At this, Celestia immediately shot up from her slumber, wide awake. Her eyes shot to her bedside clock.Seven fifty-two.

:rainbowhuh: I'm very confused right now...

4742445 Sol cura est de Nobis. Catapultam Luna in asino.
Non potes vincere. Praeterea, ad hoc bellum nihil usquam est.

4742470 Oh, gosh. I'm gonna fix that right now. Thank you for catching mistake.

4742822 Sol ingreditur solus. Nihil est. Secuti tribuni lunae. Nos pugna vincere finalis, mox pulchritudine sol aeterna memoria. Ita quidem res habet, et semper erit.

Did anyone else think, "Roll credits!" when it said, "Goodnight, sister mine."?

6296963 Actually I thought about Lullaby for a Princess

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