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Ditzy has lost her job at the shipping company, and the only thing she has to show for it is a golden ticket to the Gala.
She is dared by the Unicorns there to ask White Knight on a date; she does so, and is immediately rejected.
Crying alone, in the bushes, hidden from the party; what will happen when White Knight comes to sweep her off her feet? Can it be real? Could a prince ever truly love a wall-eyed Pegasus? Or is it all some sick kind of game?
Romance and drama abound!
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Hmm. Cute so far. : )
I always wondered what happened to Dizty at the gala.
Good day.
As of right now, I approve.
“I merely mean to state that natural disadvantages of one whose eyesight is impaired, including hoof-eye coordination and lack of reliable depth perception, would lead anypony with said disadvantages to seem ‘clumsy’ to others,” he explained bluntly.
......
Umm, wow.
Ok, Good start! Tracking!
Well written and interesting Ditzy romance you've got going. Insta track.
Dizty gona baged her self a real winner.
Gracious! If I was Ditzy and heard my "Savior" suddenly be called "Prince" I'd fall right over in shock!
I am pleased.
Now, good day.
...Wait wait wait. So basically Derpy/Ditzy's cutie marks are actually a depiction of atoms or subatomic particles?
I've got to say, I definitely haven't heard that take on it before.
Still cute stuff. : D
Looks like Ditzy's night turned out better than she hoped
ALL HAIL PRINCESS DITZY!!!
This is adorable in every way possible and I'm not ashamed t admit that.
I can't help but smile while reading this, its a reall 'aaawwwwww'y' story
The White Knight is quite the sir
They say that genius borders on insanity, while dityz aint insane she does think 'outside the box'
White Knight is indeed a gentlestallions. We need more like him.
And Ditzy thought up the concept of atoms...That's our Ditzy.
A typo:
"I broke something really expensive, and they didn’t believe it was my fault"
wasn't my fault.
Other then that , interesting story
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Thats how i feel every time i read White Knights lines.
dude, i love it! Ditzy is pretty much everyones favourite, and this is just brillient!
389466 she might is actually a genius but she cannot voice it right.
Also, update this! :P
This is utterly adorable. Possibly even dawwww-able. And I do like the idea that Ditzy's cutie mark is related to molecular science, that's a new one.
First it is nopony not nobody ,and secend somepony not somebody what is a body any way
Well I am rather intrigued by this story and disappointed that it has not seen a single update thus far. I need more dear Brony. Good luck.
Adieu~
Dis gun be Gooooooooood!!!
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, and she had it before anypony else in history, and the teasing was due to jealousy. (It was a nice inversion of the CMC's problem) Then she found her old saviour by the beach and finally learned about her cutie mark's origin. I looked for it on here but it didn't seem to be here and I don't remember the name. 
Tell me about it! Actually I think it's more exciting that Derpy has such a completely ambiguous cutie mark. It allows writers to come up with ideas such as these! Or I have no idea where but I once saw one explain she was so scatterbrained that she didn't remember being saved by a seapony once in her infancy before she could fly
also: CONTINUECONTINUECONTINUECONTINUE!!!!!
WHAT IS THE AUTHOR DOING!?!?!?!
Anonymous Pegasus now that you finished Transcend you MUST return to this, even if it doesn't have the same impact it and is kind of a stereotypical love story is such a nice change of pace from the derpyhate pileup!
White Knight was one of the Prince’s of the royal family, and she hadn’t even known?! She had asked him on a date! And now, here she was, in what was obviously his royal castle, of all things, on his guest bed!
also there should be no apostrophe in this one.
564936 I wrote a 45,000 word Chrysalis fiction that was featured?
I'm writing the second part of it, too. I haven't forgotten this story, though!
You don't remember? Well, okay, maybe you didn't see it because you were too busy writing but it was totally there.
LoL I JUST found this. Mostly onyl because I've now finished all the chrysalis fics so far and am going back over my favourite authors works. :lol:
It WAS out of action for 2 weeks prior though so that's why I was like "O GOD WHY" just as I saw it was getting to the good part.
"WHAT HAPPENED?!?! WRITER'S BLOCK? WHY STOP NOW?!? AAAAUGH!!!"
don't mind me, I did the same thing when Fox canceled.....er.....Actually I can think of like 15 shows they did that to me on
Damn you Fox!
The first one always hurts the most though... Space: Above and Beyond, I'll always remember the potential you had.
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725445 yeah, your picture link? Didn't work.
725457 Well shit
725489 Well was it a good picture, or a bad picture?
"Shit's so fancy I need a second Monocle"
So good, I guess?
I love this story so much D'aaawww
And there needs to be another update so i can see where this is going cuz i got a feeling we are going to find out where dinky came from 
Wow, he is like Fancy Pants times 10.
Wow, This is really good.
Love it...
btw Cover image's manestile is wrong
Very good Sir
Very good Indeed
(fancy Voice)
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This is beautiful, and I am really enjoying the happiness of Derpy. When will ther.e be more? I am really enjoying it
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2081591 Sorry to break it to you, but it's cancelled.
I will rewrite this entirely in future, make it better and more understandable, and most importantly: complete!
2081640 I hope that day comes soon, because the idea, from what I read, was very beautiful and enjoyable. Good luck with the re-write when you get to it, and I hope to get a chance to read it.
2081640
Prince for Derpy, Right on! I hope you're still considering the idea.
There's something wrong about that Derpy but i don't know that it is.
Cancelled.....NO!!