a man is mysteriously transported to Equestria, not even knowing his name he begins to befriend the local ponies, who kindly try to help him piece together his mysterious past, however, some ponies know more about his past than they originally let on, and Equestria turns from a magical paradise into a web of deceit and treachery.
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Seriously, this made my visual cortex ask what the fuck was going on out there.
Looks good next chapter!
4033009 i updated the story and revised it, take a second look if ur willing
4037159 YOU DID IT !!probably shouldn't have left caps on
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thanks man! /)
4038333 no prob bro /)
Thanks dude stil good!
4056304 xD the next part goes up today