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My name is Cameron. I am a musician, a writer, a singer, and a member of the band Bless Our Demise. My stories are mainly sad because I believe in expressing my emotions through stories...and songs.

Comments ( 36 )

Short, succinct, and to the point - and surprisingly moving. Very well done. :pinkiehappy:

Short and sweet. I liked this.

Well done!

(Also: Noticed a typo: "Next month to be precised." should be "Next month, to be precise.")

Man; this story just injects feels directly into your veins in eighty seconds or less

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Simply excellent work. Have a like.

No. Immortality is not a curse. :facehoof:
Immortality is blessing. :trollestia:

4015000 Nope, losing EVERYONE you care for, never being able to die, and this hell on earth happens to you everyday? It is a curse, not a blessing.

4015476
Well I don't think so. :twilightsmile: Endless life is... perfection.

4014521 Thank you. :twilightsmile:
4014561 Thanks for spotting that for me.
4014817 Thank you. :twilightsmile:

Nice words at the end :pinkiesad2:
I really love this story, just noticed a few missing words:

...get a good sniff of the beautiful day

...back up at the sign and sighed.

Haven't spoken in a while hope you're okay :twilightsmile:

4020415 I'm goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood. :derpytongue2:

I have one question... How did they all die? There is a massive list of characters we know and love here and i would have liked to know how so many of them are gone and yet sweetie bell is still there meaning that unless sweetie belle is an old mare it couldn't have been from old age.

4021801 "Yeah, how did they die?" Taythen asked.

"Will you just shut up!" Cameron replied.

"Why don't you, you horse humping thunder cunt!" Taythen snapped.

"I'll kill you, one of these days. You'll see."

"Psst. Yeah right."

Cameron looked down at the question and gave it some good thought. He placed his hand underneath his chin and started to rub the little stubs that were growing in from last weeks shave. All of a sudden, Cameron's face started to grow this wicked grin.

"I don't like the look on your face." Taythen said with fear in his voice.

Cameron started to type on his computer. But only three words popped up on the screen: make it up.

4022024 Ok!! The death style Danny Phantom movie fast food restaurant explosion has been chosen, have a nice day with your choice in crazy death form.

i generally don't read these type of stories, but i gave this a chance.
i liked it.
even know they said twilight isn't immortal.

4039945 "Wait. What?" Cameron said in confusion.

Taythen walked up to the computer and read the comment. "Wait. What?"

"But....alicorns are immortal....right?" Cameron asked looking up at Taythen.

"Don't ask me. You're the my little pony expert, remember?"

"Shut up."

Okay all seriousness. What do you mean? I thought alicorns are immortal.:rainbowhuh:

4040530
not twilight, they said she wont out live her friends.
Not even cadence is full alicorn

4040545 Where'd they say this at? I must know.

4040572
it was one of Megan's tweets, don't know where it went.

That was beautiful my dear pony...just beautiful, though it brings back tear stained memories, i am happy to have been able to read it good pony. :ajsleepy:

4044030 Such beautiful words. Thank you.

I can see this as a Animation (Like an SFM)

Comment posted by Pixel Berry deleted Jul 9th, 2014

4667271 Yeah! I saw a video related to this subject here

4667483 Huh? I did not know that existed.

4667746 yeah he's a good animator!

4673609 I can tell. He did a good job.

4674042 yeah. This Fic reminded me of that short video.

"You want to be like THIS?!: Forgotten and Alone.
Old and Infirm you may be, I would trade a thousand of my frozen years..for your WORST DAY."

4739362 Oh. You made that up. Nice quote, man.

4740737 Actually, no. I borrowed it from an episode of Batman: The Animated Series

It was originally said by Mr. Freeze, whose mutagenic made him practically immortal.
BUT, without his wife Nora, he considered his immortality to be more of a Curse, than a gift.

He made that clear to an elderly industrialist who wished to have his immortality.


It seemed like the thing to say in this situation.

4743312 I remember watching that episode awhile back. Yes, you made the right call. Totally appropriate.

My feels are aching... This was such a sad and, short and to the point story. :pinkiesad2:

Pretty good. The feels...

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