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marineproductions100


My name is Cameron. I am a musician, a writer, a singer, and a member of the band Bless Our Demise. My stories are mainly sad because I believe in expressing my emotions through stories...and songs.

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Scootaloo sits by herself in the clubhouse, alone. She feels different. Not the good kind of different. She decides that she wants to put in an end to it, but somepony will help her.

Rated Teen for safety.

I do not own any rights for the image. I'm just borrowing it. If you know who made it, please send me a link to give him/her the credit he/she deserves.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 26 )

Too real, man. And nobody who hasn't been there can understand.

Oh my gawsh! That freaked me out so bad, you should label that as gore! (If you already haven't) I thought It was good. But it gave me a good scare.:pinkiegasp: Oh and please make scootaloo act and think like this:scootangel: instead of this:pinkiesad2:

Poor Scoot :fluttercry: I'll never forgive those two! :flutterrage:

If this were real, I will murder them and burn them.

noooo scoots nooooo!!

Hi Cameron, after reading this and keeping faith 1+2 you have just earned my following.
Quick question, will you be continuing this? May seem stupid asking but you wrote in the blurb:

She decides that she wants to put in an end to it, but somepony will help her.

Also this story is marked as incomplete. And Scootaloo has only just blacked out, her neck is not broken, so she may not be dead is Sweetie Belle or Apple Bloom act quickly enough and untie the rope or did they enter a long time after Scootaloo passed and is dead?
So will there be another chapter? And is this considered to be keep faith 3 or it its own little spin-off?
Sorry for asking a lot of questions and keep up the good work! :scootangel:

4779449 Hello SomeGUyOnTheInternetz. To answer your questions: I will continue this story. This story is its own little spin-off and thank you for the follow. :twilightsmile: And your support.

4822829 I got a good idea for a sequel. Yeah, sure.

A fairly short, but bittersweet story. I could really feel the emotion through the writing. I haven't followed you for long but can guess from this and your blogs that you have come close to making the choice that Scootaloo made but thankfully didn't as no one should be forced into making it. Although I am sad she died in this story, not copping out by saving her made the story more hard hitting and really pushes the point of it across to reader.
Keep up the great work!

Now excuse as I go away to release liquid pride :applecry::pinkiesad2::fluttercry:

Comment posted by marineproductions100 deleted Aug 10th, 2014

4825113 Thank you. It seems you've guessed that. Which you are right. Thank you for reading.

Yeah, for those who think that people should go easy on Daimind Tiara and Silver Spoon just because they're kids, no offense but, KISS THE PURPLEST PART OF MY ASS :flutterrage:

This was really touching.
I kind of want to see a chapter with DT and Silver, though.
...?

yes, sequel. must have sequel.:fluttercry:

Another chapter showing how SS and DT react would be nice 8)

Why would a book teach you how to hang yourself

MORE MORE MORE PPPPPPPPLLLLLLZZZZZZZZ

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