Everyone thinks they're the hero of their own story. Yet nobody wonders just what its like when you swear you're doing the right thing, that everything you're working for is because you have to do it, yet youre seen as the villain for doing so
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1 Gilda
Negative 1 for the ponies who pissed her off
Why is half the chapter in bold?
Who would make fun of halfy? She's the kind of person you'd just want to sit down and talk to for hours. I'd have to say that sucker punch was well deserved.
Very nice! Good to see an update again. Was the bold font intentional?
Hehehe, Chrysalis, never change.
Errrr, is two-thirds of the chapter supposed to be in bold font?
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Oh fu-!
Yay. Good chapter. Exciting to see them on the move.
I agree with Jeremy's actions this chapter. Especially that right hook. Insult me, assault me, fine. Insult my friends or assault them however...
Oh that was an awesome chapter!
Chrysalis doesn't fuck around.
I also would have given him a nice right hook.
or upercut.
They messed with halfy? The sheer utter gall of those ruffians! They deserved said ass kicking that was deliverd upon them!
Yeah they were lucky Gilda didn't gut them
Though I am unclear what purpose going to Canterlot serves. Why not escape the country?
This begs a question. If Gilda could so easily intimidate these two stallions, and new that Halfy was being bullied, why didn't she simply step in herself, and prevent well most of this chapter from happening?
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Didn't want to take on uneven odds when she could gather her backup first, maybe. Even if you have greater strength or skill, 2-on-1 is still a risk. May as well stack the deck in your favor before you get to cracking skulls. Especially if your "trap cards", so to speak, are an ancient demigoddess of the dark and the queen of a race of shapeshifters.
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With a chainsaw.
5625785 It's called hiding in plain sight. Nobody thinks to look for fugitives in the same city where they broke out of prison from. Even in the event that someone did happen to recognize them, there would still be doubt, since it goes against logic and reason, and in a crowd, that moment of hesitation, they could easily get lost in and lose whoever sighted one of them.
Ahhhhhh. So nice to see another update by ya.
Was beginning to think you died...
But your ALIVE!
Anyway, another good chapter, can't wait until the...
Confrontation...
Great work for delaying the romance for this long.
But I want to see some lovey dovey stuff! I haven't seen an opening as of yet for that kind of progression in their relationship though.
Probably only happends when Nightmare or Chrysalis gets hurt.
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Aagg-damn! I tried to press the read later button, but my phone decided to register it as my pressing the like button. Now the site wont let me remove the like by re-pressing the button! D:
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Should I feel hurt or laugh?
5693211 dunno
I haven't started reading the story yet.
Two words:
Go Jeremy!
5622641 Total assholes, that's who.
Very nice chapter. And yeah, they probably figured Chryssie would've killed someone.
Gilda is so awesome in this.