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You KILLED THEM!!!
I will murder you Where ever you may be.
Kidding, still, an interesting story but the ending is left... with... a lack of basis for it to happen.
In other words, the ending was basically fluffing the blow... So to speak.
4006284 It's supposed to be a little mysterious. You can come to your own conclusion! (Even though I know personally what happens to them.) Teehee!
4006306
Of course you know but the story is MARKED COMPLETE
So in other words, anything goes now.
4006329 Yep!
Don't you just love cliffhangers?
The outfit in the photo made me think it would be a bit kinkier but it was good for what it was.
I do have to agree that the ending did leave unanswered questions.
4006353 Sorry. I just really liked the picture and wanted to use it
I like it enough to upvote it but I really wish there were more.
4006642 Can't blame you, it is a very nice pic.
That was intriguing. I hope there is an epilogue to what happens.
Dat cover art...
A disappointing ending, but rest was excellent.
Darn, I was hoping Celestia was going to rut the pregnant looking Luna silly.
So... because Rainbow was consumed, they felt the need to have an orgy. Also, wasn't Celestia scared about the results of this? Seems off for her to just join in the orgy without a purpose.
Also, that kind of ending should not be used on such a story. It fits when the characters have gone through a large journey, bonding through fierce trials, and fucking each other does not count as a fierce trial.
It feels a bit hollow, it could use some expanding and explaining.
'Just trust me and my sister' is too little to go on. How will stuffing them in Luna promote unity...
And I'd like a more conclusive ending.. Although it seems to be the Alicorn Place.
And maybe a bit more Celestia action.. taking 'her' elements back?
can you do an epilogue that way it doesn't seem that weird...maybe they all have bits of each other in them now?
Can I please have another?
Pretty please?
I found some things you may want to edit.
First, it should probably be "My sister and I" for grammatical reasons. And Second, that should be "way".
And that should be "kicking"
4069318 Fixed! Thank you kindly sir
i r confused about just about everything.....
So, did they get like, reborn as one mare or something.
Weirdest thing I've ever read, perhaps some sort of epilogue will help...
4120289 Ambiguity my friend.
4122705 By royal decree of Princess Luna you are required make a follow-up story to this master piece - from Royal Steward.
4181914 Hm... You make a valid point.
4215569 The world may never know.
4215867 Tootsie Pop! The world may never know...
Is there a sequel on the way
4324541 I am wanting to do a sequel to this, however I have one already in writing that I am not disclosing information about until it is released. Only that my friends Patric, Nate, and I are working on together. Patience my friend
I have plenty of Patience but Patience can only be held in it's cage for so long until it breaks free then leaves then all there is left is impatience and it can contral eney one and I mean eney one we all have time and time can wait I can wait but not eney one can wait
4325617 Okie dokie lokie!
Interesting indeed hmmm
There should be a disclaimer of 'Please don't hate me'
4006347 NO I DO NOT LOVE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!! But I do love this... I just wish I knew what happened to them.
4600799 If you knew what happens, there would be no wonder or mystery
4600827 And I hate mysteries. Win win.
'dear my faithful student'
wat
so what happen now
wah
I was all excited to read this but then... well the first person narrative was unexpected, but I can dig it. But the whole thing just felt so rushed and not very sexy. The ponies simply being 'sucked inside' Luna from Twilights point of view isn't very erotic. And that ending left me feeling confused.
i.imgur.com/m8hiuRp.png
can the mane 6 be reborn?
can you make a sequel of unity?.
Even though it's a bit weird. I still like it a bit. And I was wondering was it neccesary Luna to "unify" them by sucking them all in through her crotch. Because I'm sure the only reason it was made to be like that was simply becauae you wanted it to be like that. And did Luna have to asoreb the mane six? Couldn't she just asoreb the elements themselves nt the bears?
Even though it's a bit weird. I still like it a bit. And I was wondering was it neccesary Luna to "unify" them by sucking them all in through her crotch. Because I'm sure the only reason it was made to be like that was simply becauae you wanted it to be like that. And did Luna have to asoreb the mane six? Couldn't she just asoreb the elements themselves nt the bears?
5456536 I just did it as a commission for riku.
This fic reminds me of one that I tried to write a while back.
After the Season 2 premiere I half-wrote a one-shot about a bad ending following the girls' defeat of Discord: that Celestia and Luna where both slowly dying after he had ripped control of the sun and moon from them, and that an Alicorn is literally composed of pegassus, unicorn and earth pony.
Sequel please.
Dude Jackson the Timberwolf here I agree with the others who want a sequel it seems interesting and cliffhager one shots suck
Im trying to find the picture you used as the image for the story, is that the full image or is the rest cropped out?
6141131 used my RCA Laptab-thingy
*'s " 'press-and-hold' , 'search-by-image' 'google-images' search-tool" and found this for u https://derpiboo.ru/16599
*IT'S A TABLET WITH A CASE WHERE YOU SNAP THE TABLET INTO THE inside OF THE LID TO TURN IT INTO A "SORT-OF" LAPTOP!!!
P.S. HAS KEYBOARD DOESN'T HAVE MOUSEPAD
this is the result
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