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Well that is a DIFFERENT take on it, hope the rest goes well like the first chapter.
Not bad, not bad at all. Keep it up and you'll have one hell of a story.
like and fave keep up the good work, I like how you portrayed them in this I also like how it was Octavia who came onto vinyl instead of the other way around, and now I am curious as to when this so called tape will come up and if Octy will find out about vinyl's other job if she doesn't know already.
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Thanks for the comments.
I have heard of, but never read the Mafia Octavia tumblr, but I always liked the idea. I like OctaScratch, but wanted to do something different from the usual fare. Hence, this.
Oh, and the tape will come up in chapter two.
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You should. That's what my account has been based off of. The artist ended it unfortunately.
4008840 So I've heard.
Anyway, what do you think of this?
4008913 haven't read it yet. It's on my "read it later" list. I'll read it now.
Like the intro, how it's all declarative and solid, like a back story. The actual story was cool, I definitely like it. I couldn't click the link at the end; I'm sitting in school right now.
4010469 The link is just my chosen title music.
And I'm glad you liked it.
4012603 Listening to it, it's pretty awesome.
th08.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/351/2/d/the_chicago_violin_by_ncmares-d6yd656.jpg
I want to make that my banner later in my life.
Hm... thinking about it, maybe ask someone to redo my current avatar. It looks too cartoony. Maybe I could do it myself... nah.
4012757 Beautiful.
That's actually going to be a common thing in the story. Octavia shooting things while looking badass.
Octavia X Tommy Gun, now that's the perfect ship
4078870 Hmmmmmmm.....
*Scribble*
Still not enough evidence to arrest her. I just love the legal system. I love this fic too.
4127029 What legal system?
Oh, and this fic loves you too.
Wow, this is a good start. I like the idea you wrote out, it's good. I'm curious at what happens next. Keep up the good work.
4189432 Thank you.
Interesting. I can't wait to see where this goes, but I can totally see Vinyl rescuing Octavia from a rival gang and the two of them teeming up to get rid of that gang.
4280895 Hmmmmm....
*Scribble*
It's good so far. There were a couple of errors I noticed, but nothing huge. Well done, guy!
4293576 Thank you.
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Don't thank me. You wrote it.
Left 4 Dead (1 or 2) was the game, the "Grabbin' pillz" line being the reference. No idea what the film one is or what it's from, though. Chapter was good. As I said, I'll proof-read it tomorrow.
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AH HA! The other Proof-Reader!
~OreoKookie
4301776 Any bug fixes, or am I really getting better at this?
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Yeah. I thought I was the third, but nobody else has shown up. Ah well... I'm sure it'll be grand.
4301875 No, you are third. There's only three of you.
Oh, I should add you to the description.
Damnit I forgot.
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But I thought I sent a PM to you, did you get it?
~OreoKookie
4302204 It seems not.
Well, that escalated quickly. :D
Well. That was fun
I'm currently correcting CH2.
Nothing really serious so far except error #8.
It's freakin' complicated!
I want to thank you for introducing me to 2CELLOS.
Oh, and the story is pretty entertaining too. Looking forward to more.
Uh oh, was vinyl ordered to hang around Octavia or did she just follow her and now she has a target on her back? Interesting twist.
Can't wait to see more.
4302708 Chandler's Law
4303104 I can only hope.
4303893 If you like 2Cellos, check out Apocalyptica. Cellos doing covers of Metalica (!)
4304315 You didn't get these story notes from me.
~Am_Z
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Don't lie, you gave the hug back, so I know you got it. Right?
~OreoKookie
oh fuck yeah.
If you don't read this while listening to the music you are missing out. its damn perfect. great chapter, we need more seriously this chapter solidified my interest in this story.
i-i need to draw the scene of them in-front of the elevator, expect it in anywhere from 2 days to a weeks time.
4307136 I'm glad you like it!
4307167 I will *penguin* the shit out of you when you finish. I eagerly await it!
4307199 its needed, I mean, I have never been so pumped up by reading a chapter, of anything
4307214 Really? Well then, you'll be glad to hear the trend of music to action sequence will continue.
Nice chapter, but Vinyl should get to use that last line in reference to her being a DJ when she can't hide her CIA side any longer.
4307706 Hmmmmmm......
*Scribble*
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needs to have the Vinyl Scratch come up afterwards
Disk Jockey/CIA Agent
4308105 Vinyl will get her own title card, but not for a while.
4308138 awesome, btw im totally digging the title cards. its very cult movie-esque
4308151 I got it from Borderlands and Burn Notice.
4012800 Back after reading ch.2. It's quite amazing! Like, I really, really like it and hope that you update this more and want to offer help if you need anything. Which I am now doing.
4308264 I could always use another proofreader, as well as someone to bounce ideas off of if you'd like.
4309112 I'm perfectly fine with both, preferably with the task of editing, though. However, I don't want to "steal" the job of one of your existing proofreaders. I may be a bit busy in the next few weeks, but feel free to PM me if needed.
4310710 The more eyes scouring my work, the more errors are caught.
Also, any good pictures of Mafia Octavia and Vinyl you might have would be great.