Celestia finds herself sharing company and her booze stash with Luna's crazed split-personality, Nightmare-Moon. However, as the night wears on, she finds she may actually be able to tolerate the dark alicorn. Maybe even like her.
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I really liked it it give me something really funny/interesting to read good job
3334259 Thanks!
Thank you for submitting to the contest!
(misspelling in the title there, champ)
3334300
Aaaaaaaaand, it's fixed.
It's pretty good,well done
And thanks for submitting it early, it will really help
3334360 I try.
3334377
I'll get the admins to read it tomorrow, though we probably won't make any final decisions until we have other fics to compare it to
3334382 Right-o, can't wait to hear what they say and read some other fics.
Good stuff. Of course, my favorite line was
I'm going to have to use that.
3334639 Glad you liked it.
And if you use that line, it'll be a shout out to me...
....Sorry, inner narcissist popped up.
This is one of the funniest bucking stories I've ever read!
Great job man.
3334784 And a thank you to you as well.
Might I ask your favorite line?
3334795 Probably this one
I have to say I laughed. Love drunk ponies. They make terrible decisions.
3335462 Fav terrible decision?
3335488
Usually vandalism or some sort of mischief that gets them arrested and in the press. The whole waking up with somepony in bed has been done to death.
3335515 True, but they knew where they were.
Oh, and glad you enjoyed.
Uh. Um. Okayyyy....
Interesting and clever idea, not really handled that great. The premise and about 75% of this could actually make for a really awesome story! but 'so bogged down by lack of elucidation for convenience's sake.
5/10
3336688 I had to freaking look up 'elucidation'.
And thank you for your opinion.
why is this not featured?
3337262 I'm not sure, I think it needs more up votes.
Go tell all your friends to up vote and we'll see if that works!
Needs moar upvotes.
I was amused, and I found "a marching band conducting a bombing raid whilst playing covers of the Beatles" to be fantastic imagery.
Could use a quick once-over from a proofreader, though.
I LOVE IT
3339456
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Favorite Line
Oh beautiful shipping.
That was awesome
3343121 Thank you.
Which line did you find most awesome?
That'd be the one that made me choke on my coke
3343173 It's not a good day until I nearly kill someone with my writing.
3343255 It was a fun story.
splashed in canterlot river.
Canterlot, A city built on a mountain has a river running through it? Oh well. Good story though.
3343841 What do you mean?
3343862
Well, I feel like an idiot. I commented on the wrong story somehow. This is still a great story.
3343995 Oh... Okay
.
Also, have to ask what your favorite line was.
So, what was your favorite line?
3344032
“We made passionate love.” Celestia said without an once of shame.
Nightmare-Moon went from black-as-night to redder-than-a-rose in ten seconds flat.
“Tia!” she cried, embarrassed.
Not really a single line, but this was my favorite moment of this.
3344068 I'll tale it.
I also just noticed your profile pic and I must say I love it.
3344129
I know right! People say it suits me!
Yes. All my yes. ... ALL of it.
3344443 Thank you!
Which Line got all your YES! in particular?
3344509
I thought I mentioned it, you know, ALL OF THEM.
3344509 "“We made passionate love.” Celestia said without an once of shame."
this one for me
Wow, this is a good read. And that is all i have to say. (I can't any other way to put it.)
3347439 Thank you.
Mind informing me which line was your favorite?
This was glorious. It would be hilarious if they did have a thing in the show. Discord's sides would be in orbit if they did.
Personal favorite part was the bit about Twilight not finishing writing her story because she needed to save Ponyville. Celestia demands the next chapter of her favorite fanfic to be written now!
Of all the hilarity in this fic, that made me laugh the hardest
3336688>>3334259>>3334300>>3334360>>3336023>>3336046 LOL, I forgot to ask you 'What's your Favorite Line?
'
So, What's your Favorite Line?