My Element is Honesty. My Sin is Envy.
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oh boy, watch out for the down votes.
Dayum, Nonagon. You have my respect. Publishing something like this takes guts.
But I guess some people are still willing to ignore the stellar writing in order to express their hate. Just know that you did a good job, and you certainly shouldn't feel bad for writing this. It was genuinely as high quality as I would expect from you.
EqG-native Twilight? You have my attention, sir.
My only complaint about this story is that it's marked "complete."
Please write more. It's such a juicy idea to go into why there's no native Twilight. It also makes me wonder what Sunset Shimmer did to her native counterpart to keep her out of the picture.
See. This is what happens when your mother knocks on the shower door, while you're on the threshhold of a marvelous orgasm from masturbating to thoughts of your crush, and denies you your orgasm.
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Edge. Of. My. Fucking. Seat.
Is McCarthy the new Faust?
This was a good story, but I was left very confused by the ending.
er could you Try to make another chapter to Give us some more closure.
Wait, the guy who wrote Death Note: Equestria is writing a FlashLight shipfic?
That's awesome. This ship needs more good writers backing it.
That closing line was golden.
This is the first Flash x Twilight sex scene in their human counter parts. I like it.
Nice to see a story about the Human world Twilight and the repercussions of her pony counterparts actions.
The sex scene was was incredible.
Oh this is good can't wait to see what happens next.
I loved it all that was awesome I can't wait to see what happens next.
I loved it but most of it is making me sad I feel bad for this Twilight she missed out in all the awesomeness of her life with her friends and Flash.I hope that either they speak to each other Twilight to Twilight and there memory's become one so when either one .
I loved it all and can't wait to see what happens next I can't wait for the sequel .And Twilight you got some 'splainin to do .
Is there graphic sex in this story?
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Well McCarthy DID write Equestria Girls AND started something new inside the fandom...
I have one question about the story, what happened about the Indescribable "Incident" that happened to twilight and how did it involve her brother and them? I would gladly appreciate it if someone were to explain the whole incident for me.
Hm.I thought the ENTIRE Brony fandom hated Flash Sentry.Guess I was wrong.Good job.
4105798 yep.
Thus why it says: Mature and Sex at the bottom of the page, beneath the chapters.
Huh, so is this an AU where Sunset Shimmer broke the mirror?
Snort. I'd bet a 6 year old could spot one of those on a bad day.
Irony.
This... chapter gave me the weirdest bonner ever... huh... Im going to the hospital for a sec, so um, bye.
*ZOOOOOM*
Finally, a clop between Twily and the Waifu Thief, I've been looking one of these since forevah
pretty...!!!
Since I don't know what else to do with my life right now I decided to re-read the entire series, maybe then that terrible emptiness inside me goes away.
Anyway lo and behold in the first chapter already I found myself a plothole:
She doesn't know about Shining's whereabouts yet. Then again, maybe she's just being an unreliable narrator and lying to the audience like she does about her masturbation habits, in which case you can disregard this comment.
bit*
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I know all these comments are almost a year old but just in case y'all didn't notice there are sequels, oh so deliciously brilliant sequels now.
5401221 Oh yeah, the first story is full of inconsistencies compared to the rest. I hadn't decided what had happened to Shining Armour at this point. But let's go with your version.
I sense some saucy high-school drama brewing up
This is wonderfully sad and adorable. I love it
What DID happen to Shining? Also... this chapter was enjoyable.