oh boy, watch out for the down votes.

Dayum, Nonagon. You have my respect. Publishing something like this takes guts.

But I guess some people are still willing to ignore the stellar writing in order to express their hate. Just know that you did a good job, and you certainly shouldn't feel bad for writing this. It was genuinely as high quality as I would expect from you.

EqG-native Twilight? You have my attention, sir.

My only complaint about this story is that it's marked "complete."

Please write more. It's such a juicy idea to go into why there's no native Twilight. It also makes me wonder what Sunset Shimmer did to her native counterpart to keep her out of the picture.

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Edge. Of. My. Fucking. Seat.

This was a good story, but I was left very confused by the ending.

er could you Try to make another chapter to Give us some more closure.

Wait, the guy who wrote Death Note: Equestria is writing a FlashLight shipfic?

That's awesome. This ship needs more good writers backing it.

Nice to see a story about the Human world Twilight and the repercussions of her pony counterparts actions.

The sex scene was was incredible.

I loved it all and can't wait to see what happens next I can't wait for the sequel .And Twilight you got some 'splainin to do .

Is there graphic sex in this story?

I have one question about the story, what happened about the Indescribable "Incident" that happened to twilight and how did it involve her brother and them? I would gladly appreciate it if someone were to explain the whole incident for me.

4105798 yep.

Thus why it says: Mature and Sex at the bottom of the page, beneath the chapters.

Finally, a clop between Twily and the Waifu Thief, I've been looking one of these since forevah

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I know all these comments are almost a year old but just in case y'all didn't notice there are sequels, oh so deliciously brilliant sequels now.

This is wonderfully sad and adorable. I love it