Flash and Twilight broke up?! How, when, where?! Will they get back together? These questions are answered in Part Three of Twilight's Love Story... but as you read on, you may find that even bigger mysteries await...
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I love that Story!!!!!!!!!!!
I have no words that adequately describe this story. Was fun to read though.
If this is one of those tragic love stories where everyone dies in the end when the Rapture hits it will be a great story.
Well this is going to turn out to be ugly.
Of course Pinkie breaks the fourth wall.
That was a funny chapter. I loved how you had pinkie break the fourth wall. Yours is the third story to have done that. I can't wait for the next chapter. Best of luck.
I'm interested in knowing what's going to happen next.
Maybe Flash might propose to Twilight.
Him and I think the.... same...way. Dear Celestia, me and Flash are related. 
WHAT? You don't think? Oh my gosh?.............
4460627 HA! Bet you didn't see that coming! It was actually pretty hard to chose though. Sunset Shimmer or Trixie for the daughter...
, I really went back and forward on it but believe Sunset Shimmer makes it more interesting. "
(Some time earlier in the week)
"Aright Pinkie, heads or tails."
"Heads!"
"Ok, it's... Tails! So were going with Sunset Shimmer."
"Ah man!"
(Reality)
Im kidding,
4460657 You're right. Sunset is more interesting. As far though as I recall she is still in the mirror. I don't know how she will return, if she returns in your story. Then again. Thirty moons is 2 and a half years. She could return during that time.
4460681 well also remember that we never found out if they destroyed the mirror or not
or... What happen to the other Flash
4460698 Also remember we don't know what happened to the other Twilight. Was she there but at a different school or did Twilight enter into her body? That would be interesting if human Flash came through the mirror; if the body theory was proven correct, and possessed Pony Flash for a bit. Then again, I have no idea.
4460734 well remember, human pinkie said she saw either Twilight or another one in the city. So does that mean the Canterlot High is somewhere else like a small town near a city? But that posession thing sounds like a good idea... Wait, that cant be right. We saw twilight completely go through the portal and a the few second when pinkie tried to follow her, but was blocked by the closing of the portal,
4460752 Here is two good stories that show that theory a bit:
Mirror Mirror
Parallel Equestria Girls
I first one is part of a series though just to warn you.
It is interesting, because that process was vague, people have developed some crazy theories about that mirror. It is a good thing though. It allows our minds to view different ways a story could go. I guess in the next book twilight must travel through the mirror, or Sunset returns. I can't wait for the next chapter, or book. Your choice.
4460783 sort for late response. Went and read first chapter of Mirror Mirror, but couldn't finish it all. It's really good. Anyways, spoiler alert, but chapter fifteen won't carry on until another story... Sorry
4460783 got to finish this one first. Everybrony/Pegasisters is probably mad at throwing the whole point of the story off with the whole Solar Eclipse thing, It's suppose to be about Twilight and Flash!
4461065 I know the point is Flash and Twilight. We will have to wait. Besides, if this leads to a quest where Flash and Twilight spend quality time together, I see no problem with the Solar Eclipse section of the story.
4461122 I guess your right... Anyways, I got work on Pony's Creed, so I guess I'll see ya later.
4461169 Good luck
You brought HIM in. Man. Well lets see how the fight happens in this story.
4469134 I was wondering how people were going to react to that... Best episode ever, I just whatced for the first time today.
4469143 I prefer magical Mystery Cure, then a canterlot wedding. Good luck with Tirek. He is an interesting character.
4469179 another reason why I had to throw him in was because I needed some chronological factor in the story, saying around what time all this happened.
4469192 Also you have to explain why there was a library still in Ponyville.
4469230 TThat to I guess
Wait what
>> Sagebrony07 agreed
Nice twist. I didn't think you would asssasin's creed into this universe. Great job though. Good luck with the next chapter. Thanks for the update.
4718834 Yeah, I've been planning this since Chapter 2.
4719389 Of this part or of Part one of this series? IF you want to you could even branch out into this realm with solving the secrets of the assasin's and Telmares's to find Twilight and Shinnings Biological father.
4719399 Part Two actually, pay close attention to it and some will have some hints of it, but some aren't as obvious as the others.
4719399 and... are you reading my mind?
4719404 No. I just had Pinkie steal your notes and have me read them.
Thanks Pinkie.
4719399 (SPOILER... IF YOU CAN FIGURE IT OUT) Just know ALL Assassins are born with their cutie marks... that's why they are so vulnerable as foals.
4719409 No fair... Pinkie would never betray me like that... Pinkamena is back
4719414 That's interesting. So then Shinning was born with a Mark. WAIT A MINUETE THEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pinkie pass me page 43
Here it is!
Sorry Derpy you made Sagey pass out.
If I'm right then..........
..............................
...................................
Sweet Celestia..........
4719423 Wondered why Rainbow Dash, Lighting, Derpy, and Edward were in the pervious chapter? that's why
4719431 No more giving hints okay. I think that wouldn't do well for the next chapter or Part of your story. Good luck.
4719439 alright
Nice ending. I liked how you added Flash into the whole battle with Tirek situation. Good luck with part 4. I can't wait to read it. Take sometime off, but don't keep us waiting too long for the final or next to final part. Nice job adding in some coltfriends for the other elements.
4883430
you read my mind
when will next sequla come
ther better be anew seq8ual soon
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4896804
Just thought I'd let you two know that there's already a next part: Love For All
thanks
