Fluttercord isnt canon yet....but it will...soon
Discord has strong feelings for fluttershy. The princesses know. Discord is a pony and cant change back. Yup Discord is a pony. He stays with fluttershy While the Rulers of equestria find for a cure. Discord does something he truly regrets which leaves Fluttershy in a horrible state
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i failed so badly
1. Im sorry that you have to listen to that horrible horrible song.
2. This looks interesting and I dont see any grammar or spelling mistakes. So far so good.
I
your story
1. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
2.I'm also sorry you have to listen to that terrible terrible terrible song.
One of the best stories I've ever read.
Its awesome so stop doubting yourself
I like it
Good story, could use a teeny bit of work, but overall it's well written and there aren't many issues.
"Fabulous!"
"Rarity, why are you here?"
"No reason!"
*Rarity has disconnected*
I think it's pretty good! Some grammar and spelling could be fixed but still!
I like it. Just don't forget to use commas and apostrophes.
you are doing well for your first fanfic.
I like it :D And don't worry about the criticism. Your fanfic is sweet and I'd really like to see it continue soon
Really good! you should check your grammar a bit but overall is ok for the first time!
Thx you guys!!
Sorry about the mistakes.
Ill try to fix them ASAP
is Fluttershy's 'dark side' going to hunting the animals again? - (s1 ep 26)
this chapter.........sucks
Interesting so far. Spelling and grammar have been said. You're missing some capitalson names and titles (ie. Princess.) There are also a few spots where you switch between past and present tense. A very common issue for new writers. Try to stick with past tense.
Also, I would give this a read through, it will help.
*Giggle*
This chapter does not suck. Not much more I can say. I do look forward to the next chapters.
If you would like some help with proof-reading/editing, send me a PM and I am sure we can figure something out. I am willing to help you fix up your story and learn.
The last 2 chapters were better but the story sure is having a nice turn! But i think you should slow down a bit...if you take more time writing the story is gonna look better! The story is good and you have talent but maybe take more time to improve the grammar. Just an advice.
Hehehe
...errr thanks for the advise
4156645 errr whats a PM? im not really good at this kind of stuff
4160806
A PM is a private message.
wow my fanfic exceeded 300 views thanks a lot guys!!!
4161479 its alright i found someone already but thanks for your help anyway!
4161646
Dang.
Well good luck then. If you need someone, feel free to ask.
pless contain you it is great
4235484
yay thx
Your characterisation of Discord so far is pretty accurate and your story is engaging! As Dartrunner said, there are a few very minor mistakes but they don't detract from the story in any way! I'm keen to read the rest of this!
I'm really enjoying this! I've only just joined this website and yours is the first fic I have read! You should be more confident you characters are really engaging!
These chapters get better and better
I feel that dialogue is one of your strong points, as you seem to have a good grasp on the characteristics of each pony. The way they all interact is fairly natural, it doesn't seem forced, so well done on that :)
This chapter is probably one of your best so far! Your description here is strong. Considering this is your first fic I really think you're doing a good job. I've been writing for a few years but I never had the guts to post anything until recently, so I really have to hand it to you! I really enjoy this story!
4394234 thank you so so much. I cant wait to read your stories. Betting its x1000 times better that mine and thank you so much for these compliments. I needed it. I was so close to giving up...
4092031 Whoops sorry. Im not a great writer like you
4395659 No problem
I wouldn't have said them unless I meant them! My stories are nothing special anyway XD I wanted to upload the first two chapters of my pony fic on this website but I was just under the word limit 
4399711 aww dont worry. You can definitely do it! I belive in you!!!
4403179 Aww thank you
I try at least haha
I love it!
Keep up the updates, I believes in you!
These few chapters are exactly like "My Heart is Your Throne", with a few line changes. Like it does not sound like it inspired you, but rather you copied and pasted it into a word document then deleted a few lines and decided to call it your own work :\ but since your description says Discord will do something he regrets I am intrigued to see your own original writing. Especially if it included how Celestia got that feather. That seems like it could be a hilarious twist
4444148 really? I didnt know...seriously i didnt know...IM SO VERY SORRY!!!!! But i believe sorry has no cure soooo...Delete the story?
I feel bad for copying his/her work...I think ill delete the story and start on a new one...
Really good! a few mistakes here and there but i dont mind compare to the great work youre putting to the story!!
I actually really like your stories they can be serious, romantic, tragic, sad, funny and be all of them at the same time
!!!!!!
>>fluttershys_life_story
no dont delete it!!!
Nucham is just being the pancake pooper he is
4478904 OMC thank you soooo much!! I needed that
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no prob flutters!
Hey I'm reading my heart is your throne and haha discord has a cruuuusssshhhh on fluttershy
4498254 ikr! It just makes you go D'awwwwwww!!!
Prediction time! It's totally not going to work because fluttershy already has a massive crush on discord and she's just totally gonna be weirded out by the weird alicorn who keeps following her around and is gonna sneak away to find discord.
Sry my computers having the black screen of death. I dont know what to do about it so Im gonna get some help from my friends so i cant post anything for a while. Sry
good work. I like it. My first one isn't as good as yours.