• Member Since 12th Feb, 2014
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Steadfast Bulwark


Let me tell you a story. One that will make you question your sanity and make you terrified to close your eyes.

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hmmm not entirly sure what to make of this..the concept is interesting..ill have to watch and see what comes of this story of yours

Then it'll be interesting for the both of us as Im wracking my brain for ideas and seeing what falls out.

This is really good, will it be a king sombra x twlight romance?

4002269 In all honesty I have no idea, it may end up going that way but I've yet to decide if that's the course I want it to go. Its still up in the air.

I lost quite a bit of sleep getting chap 2 just so. Let me know how it came out.

I like where this is going. I can't wait for more!

came out awsome..im liking this kinda turn on sombra..being the good guy not evil..well at least i hope thats were this is going >.> the tyrant celestia thing always interests me to simply because its so easy to picture her as

4002735 For the love of everything do not ship them, it's very pointless in this scenario and it makes no sense at all.

4023880 That was rather the point. Dark Magic is typically deceitful but here I'm playing it off as being only honest to throw in a twist.
If you could tell me why you thought it didn't sound right that would help.

Or were you referring to how its worded?

4029108 That I can do. Any suggestions?

4029335 Nicely put, Ill try and work it in. Thank you kindly.

I like the story u have here.FAV!!!!!!!

Soooo.... When can we expect more? This is quite good.

4114890 In answer to that by the end of this week. My semester is finishing up and I can finally get back to writing. :raritystarry:

Whew Im back with a new chapter.... finally.:rainbowlaugh:

Give some wonderful feedback and Ill have the next one up (insert time frame here)

Oh my... I expected this to be one of those stories on permanent Hiatus, but I'm very glad it's not! I can't wait to see what happens next! Hopefullyit won't be another month :rainbowlaugh:

I'd like to see how everypony else reacts to this...

To all who fear the wait...
Dreadfully sorry about that, these last couple weeks have been :pinkiecrazy:

Weekly updates from here on out or at least weekish updates:rainbowderp:

need so much more
:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

4141241 Thats set to be explained in later chapters.

4155591 nah your on the same page as me:derpytongue2:

this...is...so...AWESOME...:pinkiecrazy:

Ok guys new chap up. Lemme know what you think.:rainbowkiss:

YES. ALL OF MY YES.
Why is it that Rainbow seems to care the most about Twilight? I sense TwiDash. :rainbowkiss:

Interesting story. I can't wait for the next chapter and find out who's truth was the actual truth.

4209831 Not necessarily. If you recall, Rainbow Dash is always the most worried about others in times of crisis due to her intense sense of Loyalty.

4210069 I can dream, can't I?

4210073 Never said you couldn't but that would make things a mess more interesting. :moustache:

4210080 Indeed it would. Rainbow would have to deal with personal feelings, and maybe be forced to decide between Twilight and Equestria.

4210089 ..... Can I quote you on that?

4209831 Or more of Loyalty? No man, or mare in this case, left behind? All your friends are safe but one? Nothing about how she acted seemed romantic, especially since she asked about Twilight AND Cadence. Not Shining Armor tho :facehoof:

4210124 Maybe they didn't notice, or didn't care enough about him to worry for his safety.

4210379 Yeah I opted to get it up then fix it later instead of fix first then put up. Thats why I greatly appreciate all of you!:twilightblush:

4210379 Ok I'm apparently really thick. Can you kindly point out these "not hard to miss errors" that I'm easily missing?

Hah Hah! :pinkiehappy: Ok guys give it a read now. Fixed several grammatical errors and fixed up the weird plot holes that I somehow dug myself. Let me know how many things I missed. I may even give out a cookie.:twilightsheepish:

Right, new chapter. Pushing these out faster. Let me know what you think.

Well that was unexpected. I though Sombra would have imitated Twi's voice, not bring her with him. I am glad this story updated. I can't wait for the next one.

Sombra has only one chance to do this right. Or Twilight will rip him limb from limb, then let him slowly revive just to do it again, and again, and again :pinkiecrazy: Don't fuck with Twilight 'Badass' Sparkle! :twilightangry2:

need moar if you can please, I have an itch that needs scratching when it comes to this story :trixieshiftright::twilightangry2:

Badass and somewhat evil Twi? I love it.

This is my favorite so far:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Wow.............................................................................................................

Poor Twilight........................ :( She had no other choice......

damn, that was brutal...

I wonder how Twi's friends will react to all this... still hoping for eventual TwiDash :pinkiehappy: but Twimbra is awesome too! Until you decide how to make everything else happen...

4322811 Pfft, hahaha. Don't kid yourself. Sombra is evil, remember? He lied about it all. He gave Twilight the wrong spell and she really did kill her brother, and tricked her to killing Cadence on purpose. All to break her more easily. And besides, Twilight always had a choice. She could have always Teleported all 3 of them outside of the city. They are planing to take on Celestia and Luna. If they can take them on, is Shining Armor and Cadence really going to be much of a problem? :facehoof:

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