Rarity wakes up one morning to a parcel bearing a gift and a letter from her estranged Godfather, inviting her and her friends to come visit him at his mansion. Rarity, thinking a trip not involving some sort of crisis would be welcome, decides to accept and she and her friends travel to the mountain estate of Lakeside.
This began as writing practice for myself but it sounded interesting enough to post here. Not quite sure where its going but that makes it all the more fun.
Rated 'T' for minor language
Chapters (9)
Nice beginning, quick but not rushed feeling. You used the wrong their once, but otherwise everything looked good. I'm definitely curious how this continues.
If carriage rides are anything like long train rides or bus rides I agree. I drive a car with a stiffened racing suspension every day and she's more comfortable than the buses and trains I've been on.
Quite a lot of mystery going around, still too soon to get a good read on Constance and Scyphos but they seem odd but good beings. This is off to a strong start I think.
Last update was far too long ago. More to come.