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3979110 Here you are
But anyway, love the Disgaea series, can't wait to see where this goes
Please, good sir. Can I have some moar?
That ending? Totally called it.
no! pinkie!
i hate you
Whoops I just realized that I didn't really specifically say that Celestia saved both DJ Pon-3 and Pinkie from the Zetta Beam. Sorry about that and I made sure to throw in a quick edit just to kind of put that point across.
3988454 Hooray, pink sugar and hype pone live once moar!!
Awesome story man! Keep it up!
SHE FORGOT SOMETHING?!??!?
shes not all knowing now is she BITCHES!
I do not think Celestia would have said "Shit" and the whole "other sun" thing felt odd. There are also several mistakes I will point out later. Please, get an editor.
Ta ta for now~!
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Yeah I do realize that Celestia cussing does seem quite out of character for her but I figured it would help produce a sense that she is already being stressed past her usual regal self. The sun part was also a little bit of perverse humor from my side so sorry if it did leave ya feeling rather odd. Also the whole editor thing is a WIP since I do need to find some one who is willing to go back to previous chapters to help clean them up while also being around when I am usually on to do a quick run through on a new chapter. I really want to try to do one new chapter each day or every other day. So right now finding an editor is number two on my list while getting a new chapter out each day or every other day is sitting at número uno.
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Quality over Quantity.
You don't have to put out one chapter per day.
The cussing? Horse apples would have fit more. Or "Me Damn it..."
The other sun part... The odd feeling is from how you handled the scene. Some more reactions while it happens. Confused look from Luna, blush from Celestia, that kind of stuff.
Other other sun? What could that....Oh, OH!
please tell what celesta
has to say of his meeting
Well, it's nice to see SOMEONE (that I've read) has finally given a reason for being brought to Equestria besides a ROB handing out magical artifacts for shits n' giggles.
Though, I'd think Dylan would be rather vindictive about things. Tear me from my existence without asking? I'd use those powers given to me to beat you upside the head.
so as this reads now, Zetta was placed in Eques to help shape and keep the world balanced but tia and Luna decided it was theirs to rule (or at least tia) and proceded with the usual line that religion always comes up with to justify their actions, in other words: "Existance was OUR(S) to rule and he was our servant but he got to big a head and rebeled against our glorious self so he had to be cast from our glorious presance and ever since has wanted to over throw us and claim all our creation as his own!" or some such BUL^*(&^ line. There are so FEW creation stories that do NOT read as a military coup that I can't think of one
nice story looking forward to more
4332148 put more glorius words there please
If Im correct, isnt that a very fancy way of saying Chaos, and if it is, then you, my friend, should elaborate more on her character.
Love it
Damn...
wait "...As much as it would hurt poor Faust's feelings, I feel it is better to let them live..."?
Faust would want them dead?
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No, he was merely stating that it would have hurt Faust's feelings if he were to 'rid the world' of both Luna and Celestia but he would have much rather them live in Equis where he ruled over the pony-folk. Sorry if it was a little bit confusing.
Meh. Unique still rocks.