In a world filled with random people who cosplay, comes a tale that doesn't even happen in their world!
Oh crap... did I just break suspension of belief? Dang it!
To sum it up, this is crazy ludicrous, over-exaggerated, balls to the wall fun, PARODY GURREN LAGANN STYLE!
Oh, and its filled with symbolism.
But not really...
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Hi
At first I was all like
But then I read it and was like 
so have a stach 
All of my yes, you may have it.
not bad. definitely works as a parody for all the "con sent to equestria" stories that have been popping up lately. also it needs another look at for grammar and the like. i suggest getting an editor some time.
4045125 Hehe, Thanks, I tried my best to make it entertaining, and I'm super happy to hear you like it!
4045216 Thank you, I will take all your yes and use it to help write chapter 2!
4045307 Thank you. I tried to edit it on my own as best I could, but I write on a tablet, so errors do pop up and I can fail to notice them. If you could help, or maybe could send me to someone who can, or even viceversa I would be grateful.
Thanks for the positive feedback guys!
~AnimatedGamer
4044880 Why are you here Tal? I didn't even know you had an account on this site. Hello then I guess.
and to top it off, we're going to get a good laugh out of it
4045432 Yup, and boy will her ass be sore when Simon's all... over... it...
Dang it... I'm making more dick jokes...
~AnimatedGamer
Fun...
I hate technophobe Celestia. I hope she learns her lesson. Hard.
She really needs to think of the consequences of her actions.
Tracked so much.
Here's a thing.
Many people assume that just because they've been waiting so long for a certain character to appears in Equestria, in one way or another, that the fic is good.
I am one of the people that has doubts when going into something like that and manages to keep clear head to give good criticism, without instant down-voting. Hell, I don't even Down-vote.
Jokes feel forced, the thing about shit exploding? It feels forced the way you add that on.
How did Nia and Viral appear there? Why is it nearly 11 thousand years?! It is a bit too much.
Constant time-skips in the way you do them are confusing, I barely have any idea what is going on.
It feels like a random/trollfic/parody, and it is not that good. I hope you will find an editor, talk stuff over with them and then make it all better.
Good luck, commander. We will be watching.
4046426 Thanks!
4047562 Oh she will, she will, and she will also lose half her country.
... oh, did I say something? *Whistling Intensifies*
4048090 I thank you for the kind criticism, fair Sir.
Yes, I agree with that, just because you've waited for something doesn't make it good, but I intend to beef up, as it were, the quality as soon as I can.
This is/was a really more of a test, so that's why some of the jokes might feel forced, but again, like I said, now that I know there is even a slight chance I have at making it here on fimfiction I will be working on going through things a little bit more.
I am going to go over how they got there in the next chapter, from their POV in a flashback.
Its been nearly that long because it takes a while to get rid of history when your entire planet has had some form of contact with tech like what the crew gave them, which while its not exactly as advanced as the tech in the second half of the show, its still much farther than before. So again, in a different way; Celestia and Luna wanted to keep the ponies, and therefore the whole planet, from developing along the same lines as the first time, so they began to destroy history, manipulating every other species until it was all gone. That takes time when your new to it, which they are at that point, and it also explains how Celestia managed to get Nightmare Moon to be a foals story within a a thousand years, as well as hiding away Luna's past, and Sombra, and Discord's various tales.
Sorry about the timeskips, but once I get to the point where they have established themselves in the ponies eyes, it will stop going back and forth like that. Actually I hope to cover enough in the next chapter so that I can do a sort of 'flashback' Arc and go over history of what they did before they got sealed away.
It more or less is NOT suppose to be the GL guys, at least not in a full sense, its suppose to be a more comedic spin (hehe) on the GL characters. And now that they have woken from the stone, they are going to be affected and eventually reflect a NEAR Team Dai-Gurren.
So it could be clasified as a parody, but I wouldn't call it a troll-fic, because that denotes that I wrote all this just to piss people off and stir up shit... And I will try and find an editor, but like I keep saying to EVERYONE who brings up me needing one, I don't have one, and I don't know where to look, or who to find to ask! So please, if you would be so kind, tell me where I can find someone willing to help. I would be very grateful! Like a lot!!
Thanks, I will try to fix it up/make it better, for everyone. And for myself! SO that I might one day be a better writer!
Plus spoilers for everyone: I am going to try and drag in ALL of team Dai-Gurren. At least all the side characters that had names/were important in one way or another.
~AnimatedGamer
4048206
Then how about... THIS group?
Proofreader Group
Also... Well, It's just that you could have made the chapter 1 clearer, or have it separated better. You don't have to make sudden 20 minutes ago flashbacks or such, you can actually portray it in a linear way.
4048377 Thanks, when I have the time I will try and find someone. Again, thank you so much, an editor will hopefully improve the quality a lot.
I suppose I'll go back in when I'm self editing and fix it so its more linear if it really affected it that much to the point where you were confused.
~AnimatedGamer
I am interested in reading more of this!
4048898 Thanks, now that I'm back home, more will hopefully arrive soon.
~AnimatedGamer
Too many people going to cons.
Why can't it just be a party, where they find their artifacts AFTER they get to Equestria, like mine?
It just continues to bore me, it does...
4060659 This is a con one, yes, but its brother story... well... its a costume rave party hosted by a national Anime Organization.... the character involved is naturally a knock off Anti Spiral...
....Fun....
And the other ones I am working on vary between this con and parties, and even an Alternate Universe...
~AnimatedGamer
4062170
Oh, well then... keep up the good work.
4063222 Thanks! Its awesome that someone who started this awesome-sauce of LOHAV stories commented on my little story here. And if I may, will you stick around for more? It would be nice to hear the opinion of someone like you!
Anyways, thanks again, I will try my best with fixing this, and writing more.
~AnimatedGamer
4063446
Of course. I look forward to more.
4063536 Thanks, I look forward to your opinion of the CHAPTER 1 REVISION!!!
~AnimatedGamer
4064146
Ahhh, much better.
I hope that the next chapter is as funny as this one.
4064548 4048377 Revision is up! Enjoy!
~AnimatedGamer
Let me reiterate what I said in the previous version of this chapter.
I hate technophobe Celestia, and I can't wait to see the part where she learns her lesson.
Good job with the edits. It's much smoother now.
4083111 XD Don't worry, she'll get whats comin to her! As well as a FACE FULL OF I TOLD YOU SO/ BITCH PLEASE!!!
Interesting, might hop on the band wagon at some point as well.
4084430 Sweet, what property you thinking about in particular if any?
~AnimatedGamer
4084743 Property?
4085246 As in franchise, so like Gurren Lagann, and Dark Souls are two different properties.
~AnimatedGamer
4085431 Kill la kill, or Attack on Titan/Shingeki no Kyojin, or D-Greyman, or Bleach, wait I think that's already been done, Or that princess chick from Frozen.
4085436 Ahh, I don't know if you saw the three in one reference I added in early in to the chapter, but if I ever get writers block for this and my other stuff, gonna do an abridged Xover LoHAV story.
~AnimatedGamer
4086683 And what would that reference be? To the abridged attack on titan and hellsing ultimate series?
4088822 Its a reference to the Team Four Star Hellsing Abridged, SAO abridged, and BOTH versions of the Attack On Titan abridged. Think of the most horrendous thing you can.
Then multiply it by cancer.
~AnimatedGamer
4089094 What's SAO abridged?
4089987 Sword Art Online Abridged, by SomethingWittyEntertainment, otherwise known as SWE.
They seem to be relative new to abridging (I've never heard of them outside of SAO Abridged), but their quality is pretty high.
Here's a link for you. Have the greatest of fun!
~AnimatedGamer
4248167 Thank you! I try!
Honestly, my editor says I write like some famous abridger, who wont be named until chapter two, which is on its final lap before I send it in to be edited. Hopeful ETA: sometime during the weekend.
XD I know who cardgamesftw is, as well as teamfourstar. Didn't you get the Attack On Titan Abridged or Hellsing Ultimate Abridged reference lol?
Anyways, thanks for the positive feedback!
Till next chapter!
~AnimatedGamer
4251970 I'm glad you did then!
It may also be a hint at an unlikely but possible 'thing' that may or may not happen one day...
After this is done, most likely that is!
~AnimatedGamer, Probably Raising Hope Way To Much!
4251730
I need to get out of here... Its the smell
is it dead?
*pokes with stick*
4536005 No, sorry if it seems that way, but I've lost chapter two like three time now...
I'm back at the 8k word mark, and I'm near the end again, so soon.
It probably doesn't help that I'm working a job, I have my studies year round, and I'm working with a group of other writers on a collab.
Sorry again about the wait on stuff but life finally decided to pick up when I wanted to do something fun (T.T)
~AnimatedGamer
4062170 will we be seeing super tengen toppa gurren lagann http://gurrenlagann.wikia.com/wiki/Super_Tengen_Toppa_Gurren_Lagann
4569136 Later on towards the end of the story, yes. But will you be ready for more than that?!
4569977 But of course I am the Valeyard!
4570549 Good, good... Now I just need to finish this chapter. I hate writers block... everything just looks so wrong...
THE DREAMS OF THOSE WHO HAVE FALLEN, THE HOPES OF THOSE THAT WILL FOLLOW THESE TWO SETS OF DREAMS WEAVE TOGETHER INTO A DOUBLE HELIX DRILLING A PATH TOWARDS TOMORROW.
4632014 Great quote choice lol
Tis true though.
~AnimatedGamer
4632157 I loved that quote myself.
4632707 Yeah, its a great one.
I'm gonna use it later on when the crew goes after the new Lord Genome. Of course by later on, I mean way earlier. CONFUSING ISN'T IT?!
4633486 heck The original Teggen Toppa Gurren Laggen was confusing.....but awesome....Die Anti Spiral Die
4636356 This one might end up that way too, considering you can expect everyone to be at least twice as powerful as they were in the show. I'm not saying anything, but Lord Genome's fight aint gonna be pretty lol.
Still need to finish the chapter, but I have serious writers block right now, and it friggin sucks.