Yes, Virginia, there are such things as angels. And there's one pony in particular, a carefree, prideful unicorn mare who just happens to be one.
There's only one problem: She's a little too prideful and carefree for Heaven's liking, so they've booted her to the colorful world of Epona. Her only chance at returning to that realm of gold-paved streets and beautiful music is to protect Ponyville from the armies of the devil.
It'd be a lot easier for her if she hadn't decided one day to become a famous musician. So one day, a fellow angel descends and hits her over the head with an ultimatum: Defeat the Taraxippus that's been haunting Ponyville for months or you won't ever return to heaven.
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It may say complete but I'm considering writing more if I can come up with good ideas. Heck, if any reader wants to write a story about angel!Lyra's misadventures I'd be happy to post it as a chapter and credit them. But I doubt that'll happen.
Angel Lyra.
Never thought of that before. I'm totally writing Angel Scoots at some point.
Quoting Ned Flanders: "Looks like Heaven is easier to get into than Arizona State"
And why does Lyra want to have boobs in Equestria?
O...kaaayyyyyyy.
Just a few things to mention;
Yes, there was comedy, action and Lyra's silliness which is procrastination in here but personally the more uncomfortable thing in this story was how you portrayed the angels talking to Lyra.
For one, you did not have to cap their entire sentences. Yes, you did want to point out that they were calling her name but you should have ended it right there and then, not continue to have them 'shout' at Lyra.
Another minor detail was near the end where Lyra went back to being boo- I mean human. Surprised no ponies were well, surprised at her transformation though since that was probably how you intended to close the story, never you mind much about it then.
Still surprised that Lyra didn't get sent to purgotory for being so prideful. Meh, oh well. I give this story a 3.5/5
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That dialogue was actually in small caps originally but fimfic doesn't appear to have agreed with that and turned it into all caps.
Yep. You had way too much fun writing this one. I can tell.
I came here expecting a comedy, and I got one. You pretty much captured the general notion (and hilarity) of procrastination, and it did get a snicker out of me. Also, the archangels (you can't call him Mike). The combat scene with Fred (less annoying than the other Fred), while over-the-top, it felt kind of lacking due to how little description we get. Maybe it's because when I picture angel combat I think Bayonetta. Mreh. As stated previously, the ending with Lyra turning into a... human... angel? Let's go with that. I guess there was no time for reaction from the others, but, uh... mreh.
Well anyway, I came here for a comedy, and I got it. So all good for me.
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T-thanks Black Jesuz