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I Still feel like Spike is such a coward. I'm not trying to say anything about your writing but in my opinion Spike should be more powerful than most of these people, just saying.
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A coward wouldn't dream of doing half the things Spike has up until this point. Friend, power and strength doesn't mean someone is brave. And typically power and strength without any sense of integrity or honor just leads to tyrannical ideals that of war-mongers and the like. I can understand why you feel like this, but frankly, I believe that Spike's - everyone's - progression has been coming smoothly. Besides, think about it, if Spike was stronger than everyone, what would be the point of continuing on the story? Not to say I'm nerfing Spike just to get the shake of the story, but that's just how a smooth development goes. I have to make sure everything stays balanced on both the good side of the scale and the negative. I'm not just telling this to you specifically, but to anyone else that have feelings of Spike being 'below the bar' as it were. There are reasons for this, some many of us can relate to. Hope this clear stuff up, to you and to the other readers of the story. Can't thank ya'll enough for sticking around this long.
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You don't have to thank us this story is awesome and thanks for the explanation I'm just getting tired of feeling like everyone is pushing Spike down.
Moreover the cock blocking with Spike and Cyclone is still getting annoying, (though we might be finally getting a legitimate reason for that which would relive much of the frustration.) Also, if you are trying to keep Spike's development balanced, you should have been continuing it in a way we could see, because Quill's progression to the point she is now was both explosively fast, and more pronounced to the point of making spike seem like an under-developed character.
Well great chapter but I just wish you would at least update one a week but I cant change that so keep up the good work
Demur signing off
Have I ever mentioned how much I love your writing style? It's so full of suspense and tension sometimes that it's almost painful and I want to skip ahead, but every sentence has so much that you can't skip anything. It's like wishing you could read the whole thing really fast so you knew what happened, but at the same time wanting to go slow and savor the new chapter.
~The Rift Walker
my reaction from the cliffhanger
https://youtu.be/qer6Nhhl_Go?t=17s
I've figured it out!!!! Cyclone is (Censored by )