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It looks like Spike is trying to change things to make himself better but he really need for himself, not just for others. If a person keeps sacrificing for others than he will quickly find himself nothing left to sacrifice. We finally here Spike's ancestor and he either got the short end of the stick and ended up with an asshole or this dragon believes in tough love. Though I wonder just what he did to Spike that night? I wonder just what Dusk asked Frost and why it has them so on edge, maybe some dark ritual involving those with dragon blood?
The story gets more lovable ever chapter, though I wish Spike would get some sort of a protective feeling towards something, though the Ghost Heart bugs me, the fact that he has little to no protective emotion towards his stuff bugs me more. It feels, un-dragon-like to say the smallest bit. Great chapter though, also, I would like to hear what's stopping you from posting chapters more offten.
Very curious,
~OreoKookie
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Oh nothing really, school, friends, general laziness, blah, and blah. It's mainly been because of me being lazy and screwing around with friends and stuff.
4257986 calling now Spike is the element of sacrifce
Dusck is going to show them dragon weed
4260844 Thats my guess as well.
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Been having fun then? Good, happy authors are better authors. Cheers!
~OreoKookie
I noticed much more grammatical errors this chapters than others. Did your editor quit?