Bio? What is this....... bio? Not much to go around on my end over here. Average guy, average Brony. What more can one say? I do seem to have a knack for making stories really really fast
Joining the Guard has always been a dream for two young Colts fresh out of training and that dream has been accomplished ten fold as they arrive at the Capital city of Canterlot. To be seen in the ranks of the steadfast and strong Royal Guard makes them all the more eager, until they actually get there. Between their sardonic Sergeant, a nervous Lieutenant, and a Lunar Guard Captain, life in the Guard is, well, they're in it for the long run.
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Great start, truly excellent! Tracking, and hoping to see more of your work!
Near the bottom it says "come one" where i think its meant to say "come on" but its been great so far and thats all i can complain about
374222 thanks! Fixed
You're welcome
Love it
okay, fixed up some issues in the first chapters in which i couldn't tell what pony was what(AKA mixing up species with Crescent there). man I thought I proofread this a long time ago!
Just another grammar mistake I think, Near the start you put foreword instead of forward. But it's coming along brilliantly
402747 Actually, and ironically, I sent that part of the chapter through a grammer check by accident instead of the spell check.....
It's all good other than a typo or two
408311"Meh, I don;t care right now. I wont be going anywhere anytime soon on both ends of the spectrum at this rate. I like it here." he said
I think that should be a don't. Hope I helped
408945 thank you!
408960No problem if I find anything I will tell you. If you are not online do you want me to PM you the things that I find?
408982 sure why not. The spell checker can't find everything, and I do not trust that stupid grammer check I use.
Huh what a
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424574 ???
424591 Kinda funny in it's own way, she gets angry and goes around attacking after failing for awhile. Is good can't wait to see more.
just a couple typo's near the top - All he had to do know was wait until he heard a voice from behind, "See! Look at this golden flower her!" and if i'm going to be reeeeeeeally picky, near the top you put wont instead of won't. But me being fussy aside, I do love how it's coming along
429826 always can count on someone to find them
Just helping where I can
430063 its always appreciated
I feel like you're teasing me with the small chapters and updates every day or two
451899 what, me!? No! I would never!
As long as you continue to do so, I'd hate for this to go unfinished. Not enough good stories about the Guard
How could you?
I still can't believe you did that. Not cool.
456870 what? Killed my OC Pony? AKA, the one I based off me? All part of the plot here
Still, that guy was the best one there. I didn't feel much for the others but that guy was damn funny!
456879 I kinda got that vibe from him
Plot line or not, that's a grudge I'm going to hold. I already miss him...
I'm expecting a funeral at least. Is that too much to ask? I'm mourning here!
456914 he'll get his last respects. not to worry
Thank you
456931 nice to know someone cares for the pony
Zombie-ism?
DUN DUN DUUUUN
457335 nope. Mind control!
Aha! That's still creepy either way...
You crafty dog you...
461328 as I said, all part of the plot
I can't express my happiness at this. It brings back all the goodness
I used to be a guard like you....
....well played, Shadow, well played.
lol
461797
Good heroes don't die; they just reload.
up to 300 views in one day, most ever, down 2 on the favorites. How the?
They just couldn't hold the awesome the new chapters brought
462714 now thats an answer!
Awesome! Just try re-reading the first paragraph, I'm not sure it's quite right
466614 yeah I see it. I origionally had it shorter and went back and re-wrote some of it and I must of missed that part.
It's ok, I'm looking forward to the rest!