Rainbow Dash knew she was doomed. Completely and utterly doomed. She was trapped, in multiple ways. Her sense of honor kept her from simply giving up to avoid the issue, and the two mares literally held her down.
Any moment now, Trixie was going to find out her secret. And knowing Trixie, that meant her life was basically over, because she would never let it rest. Rainbow Dash could not really see anything Trixie was doing, only having a good view of the mares back and mane, which made it even worse as she did not know when it was coming.
Looking back over her shoulder, Rainbow Dash shot the best glare she could manage at Fluttershy. “I will get you for thi—iiii!” She squealed and kicked reflexively as Trixie ran a hoof along her sole. Oh no, oh no, oh no!
“Rainbow Dash, you are ticklish? Hah, this is too good!”
Trixie laughed and gave another soft stroke with the toe of her hoof, sending shudders through out Rainbow Dash’s whole body. Involuntarily, she cried out again and did her best to squirm away, resulting in another impotent kick since the devilish unicorn was sitting on her legs, ensuring she could not defend herself.
“Scratch that, Trixie was wrong. you are REALLY ticklish.”
The glee in Trixie’s voice was downright frightening, but what was even worse was the slow careful experimenting that followed. No matter how much she tried to fight her reflexes, every minor touch made her flinch and struggle, and in turn make Trixie giggle.
Rainbow Dash squirmed. “D-darn it, Trixie! Quit messing with my hooves!”
“Never!” Trixie looked back over her shoulder, then tickled along the edge of the hoof, making Rainbow Dash spasm and howl with laughter uncontrollably.
During a brief lull, Rainbow Dash felt Fluttershy stroking her mane comfortingly. “Oh, uhm, don’t worry, Rainbow Dash, time already started, there’s only ten seconds left.”
“What!?” Trixie cried out alarmed and turned her attention back to the vulnerable hooves, within a split second Rainbow Dash arched curled up and fought against Fluttershy while she gasped for breath in between laughing fits.
Fighting to get away from the torture, Rainbow Dash tried hard to break free and buck Trixie off her. Unfortunately she was so weakened by the constant giggles that she was not really a threat to anypony, no matter how much she would have wanted to be, and Fluttershy was able to hold her.
Fluttershy quietly counted the seconds while she hugged Rainbow Dash tightly, keeping her from launching herself off the couch. “ten, nine, eight.”
Laughing for the longest ten seconds of her entire life, where she laughed, screamed, howled and strained against the two ponies with so much might that her limbs, lungs and jaw hurt, Rainbow Dash’s only chance was to try to keep count during them. “T-t, haha, t-thaahat’s ten s-seconds! S-stop!” The tickling finally came to a halt, and Rainbow Dash went limp on the couch panting for breath. “H-hah, see, y-you can’t beat, hah, me…”
Weezing, Rainbow Dash grinned pleased with herself. She’d done it, it was the absolute worst experience she had in recent memory, but she had withstood it. It was a good thing Trixie had spent most of the time just teasing her, as bad as that had been, it was nothing compared to those last ten seconds.
Above her, Rainbow Dash saw Fluttershy come into view, her long mane curtained Rainbow Dash’s own face. “Uhm, I’m sorry, I miscounted… Actually there were forty seconds left.”
Rainbow Dash’s eyes went wide. She only said that to make Trixie get serious!
“Half way there, hang in there Rainbow Dash, y-you can do it.” She whispered, then gave a nod to Trixie. Rainbow Dash only caught Trixie’s grin for a moment before she turned her back to her again, and everything began again.
Another whole forty seconds, she had to endure that whole thing again for four times as long. Rainbow Dash started to hyperventilate at just the thought, there was no way. “W-wait! Nevermind, I gi—iii!” Her plea was entirely ignored.
“Forty, thirty-nine, thirty-eight,” Fluttershy counted down while Rainbow Dash could feel Trixie take the hint and go to town on her hooves again, tickling her soles, scraping along the rim of her hooves, and cackling evilly all throughout.
Where Rainbow Dash’s first ten seconds had been spend trying to outlast the barrage, this time she only tried to do one thing, in between roaring with laughter and gasping for air, surrender and stop the madness. Trixie held through to her word however and dutifully ignored her every attempt at giving up.
Finally, long since after Rainbow Dash had lost all semblance of sanity, the tickling stopped, and she collapsed on the couch exhausted and heaving. Her heart felt as though it was trying to drill through her ribs and escape.
“I, hah, hate, hah, you both!” She barely forced out. Staring up at the ceiling, she tried to gather enough focus to figure out how to get back at the pair. For the time being she enjoyed the comfort of Fluttershy’s hold while she recovered.
Fluttershy leaned into view again, her face turned serious. “Maybe next time you’ll think twice about being so late during a thunderstorm, without letting us know.” She pulled her embrace a little tighter, crossing her forelegs over Rainbow Dash’s chest.
Rainbow Dash blinked and stroked her forelegs along Fluttershy’s. “T-that’s what this is all about?”
Trixie, who had apparently turned herself around as she was now seated facing her, leaned over as well. “Well, maybe not what it’s all about.” Trixie grinned while she brushed her mane out of her face, she actually looked pretty tired from torturing Rainbow Dash, sitting comfortably on her legs still. “Trixie believes it should be obvious who is on top here, isn’t it?”
With a huff, Rainbow Dash sat up, reluctantly pulling herself free from Fluttershy, and pushed Trixie off of her. A satisfyingly easy task now that all her previous restrictions were lifted. “Don’t get ahead of yourself, Trixie, the game is far from over!”
“Alright! Trixie’s turn at last. Rainbow Dash, truth or dare?”
“Doesn’t anypony else get a dare? Geez! Fine, I pick dare, but you can’t give the same dare twice so don’t even think about it.” Rainbow Dash crossed her hooves over her chest with a grumble.
Trixie laughed and shook her head. “What would be the fun in that? Trixie has a better idea for you, miss ‘I am not cooking’. Trixie dares you to make snacks for all of us and bring them back here.” Pointing one hoof toward the kitchen, Trixie made a shooing motion with her other hoof.
Rainbow Dash rolled her eyes, but moved towards the kitchen. “I should have known better than to let you have any kind of power. We’re right back to room service again, huh? Just you wait.”
Fluttershy giggled and shook her head. “Are you going to be okay, Rainbow Dash? Uhm, how about I make some more hot chocolate while we wait?”
“Sounds good, Fluttershy, that will be a nice silver lining to this cloud.” She grinned while pondering. Okay, let’s see how they like hot sauce laced snacks!
As if reading her mind, Trixie called after Rainbow Dash. “Hey, they better be good! And remember to clean the kitchen when you are done!”
Looking over her shoulder and smirked. “Stop that darn it, as if I, the honorable Rainbow Dash, would ever have any plans to ruin the snacks or leave the kitchen a mess. Heck I barely intend to use it, I’ll leave it spotless, heh.” She pushed open the kitchen door, then gasped in utter disbelief as she laid eyes on the chaos within. “What in Equestria happened in here! Trixie!”
Trixie’s laughter told her all she needed to know.
Since the next turn belonged to Rainbow Dash herself, the game came to a brief halt while she got to work. Even if Trixie was a low down dirty cheat, Rainbow Dash carried out the dare as instructed, just with plenty of complaining while she did so.
Meanwhile, Trixie lazed on the couch, and Fluttershy made preparations of her own.
Being tickled sucks. Its all fun when you tickle the ticklish, but when fists go flying, thats a wrap. I pull punches for no one.
DARE HER TO WHAT?!!
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We don't know!
Guess?
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Indeed, it sounds like it's fun cause the other is laughing. It is not really that funny.
4548147 Indeed. Its painful. Besides, no one wants to see a good pair of pants get soiled, that's just weird, embarrassing, or both.
3 chapters in a row?
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Can wait for more.
Dem cliffhangers doe.
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Awesome pic.
I am the worst.
But at least they don't hang for long.
This is going to take forever and get annoying quickly if you keep cutting out during this truth or dare game. Please, either make a longer chapter or have the scene be short enough that it only lasts a couple of chapters. An occasional cliffhanger builds suspense, constant cliffhangers builds annoyance until a person stops reading and either doesn't come back or wait for the nice little complete tag. Just the reaction I've had to a few other fics that have done that.
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I certainly respect that some people might prefer 5k chapters without any cliffhanger.
Personally, i just prefer to read short chapters, so that is reflected in how i write.
I try to make sure something interesting happens on its own in each chapter, the cliffhangers just kind of end up that way because the full scene has not concluded in the short chapter.
I try to mitigate the annoyance a bit by having quick updates, but if that does not do it so for someone, perhaps they could for instance check once a month and read right through the chapters without waiting on the cliffhangers.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
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So far it hasn't been a problem in your story for me. I think it's just bothering me because of the way it's cutting off in the middle of this truth or dare scene.
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Ah, I understand.
Yes the truth or dare scenes length was misjudged a bit.
I am going to see if I can do it more smoothly. like for instance: perhaps i should have cut the scene on RD discovering the mess, and used the rest for the next chapter.
Really? Alright, I see how you roll...
I'm more used to reading short stories so this many chapters would normally be agonizing for me. I have really bad ADHD so stories rarely hold my attention for very long. However, I'm hooked on this story, I couldn't read anything else until I ran out of chapters on this one! I've read every chapter up to this point in a few days, which probably isn't too much for most people but for someone like me, who has the attention span of a hamster, it's a lot! So take that as a complement!
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Rejoice! Upon reflection, I am removing that particular cliffhanger.
Don't think this means there won't be more.
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Whoa, that's saying something!
Thank you for the compliment!
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Yes you are right, it must have gotten mixed up.
By the time you read this I think you will be home and done with all that stuff soo...
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A welcome home party in your honor!
4550039 Well then.....
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Mind nothing actually changed, I just stopped the chapter a little sooner.
The rest of it will just function as the start of the next chapter.
I've done the same thing on chapter 4 - 5. So I guess with the current trend you can expect me to do it once every 60 chapters.
By the way. How is your story coming along? I've been dying to see how it goes with Trixie's confrontation.
4550172 It's going good mate o3o Chapter 5 currently in progress. I have some pretty good plans for it!
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Unfortunately I'm not home yet, my parents are taking the opportunity to visit some family before we head home so I won't be home until Tuesday night. I shall re-read your post when I get home, and then have a mlp/engineering marathon to celebrate. (I'm sure an emoticon would be appropriate but that isn't really my thing).
Just realized I never told you what I thought about the last couple of chapters. It still surprisses me how ignorant earth ponies and unicorns about Pegasi wings. The game of truth or dare isn't going to end well for anyone, so that should be interesting.
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Heh, true.
I imagine ponies don't get a lot of sex-ed classes.
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Even then I'm not sure that would be covered in sex ed. I'd expect unicorns to have done idea given that horns seem be to erogenous zones as well.
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Mhm, you could be right, erogenous zones might not be part of sex ed. (Except the big ones)
It might be easier for unicorns to relate to the idea of wings being sensitive if their horns are, but I don't think its necessarily something they'd assume in advance. Of course it would probably differ per individual as to what assumptions they make.
Mhm, it might actually be funny to see a scene where a pegasus reasons the horn must be sensitive like the wing and tries to stimulate it, only to be given a deadpanned. "What are you doing? That's my horn, it doesn't feel a thing."
Our even better, have it be offensive. The Pegasus tries something with the horn and gets slapped away. The unicorn gets pissed and leaves, resulting in confused Pegasus. The inverse works good as well.
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Actually with live skin and fur growing over the horn. It'd make logical sense that it has nerve endings going through it, especially with the delicate and complex manipulations of magical force that flow through the horn itself. And if it's a true horn, then it'd be something like this:
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And since the horn needs sensitivity to electromagnetic / arcane forces, to sense / cast/ channel magic properly. Then the natural static electricity a living being generates on their body and the natural flow of pony magic their bodies radiate might be enough to sexually stimulate them. After all we see it sensitive enough that flicking a horn while casting is a painful experience.
As for not knowing, it'd probably fall under schools and the tribes in their schools. EP towns having more Earth Ponies are more likely to be ignorant of horns and wings. Pegasi horns and Earth Ponies, ect. But I personally like a bit of horn play. It's too bad I cant link my blog on horngasms and WBs.
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Heh, Agreed. We were just messing around with some ideas to subvert common tropes and have a laugh about it.
That's an excellent reason for it to be sensitive. I was totally going to go with the sensitivity anyway, but it's useful to have some reasons to back it up.
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Your muffins were quite satisfactory. I even bookmarked the image.
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Yes I have found that being fed pancakes of friendship by a Trixie is quite a shoe in to getting what she wants ... especially McGriddle Style pancackes. If you've never had a McDonalds McGriddle try one. It is beyond delicious. It has this syrup flavor cooked into it, and they are super fluffy. If Trixie could ever do that every mare would want what she's hidin under her tail ... and then some.
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Yoish! Horngasms are my favorite bit of psuedo-science to discuss among other MLP things. But yeah my original blog was several long, but good enough to back it up with science. I could try copy and pasting it to a PM and letting you read it if you wanted to.
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Sadly, pancakes are made entirely differently in my country. They are still awesome of course, and we have entire restaurants dedicated to them, but they aren't the stacked up puffy kind.
Yes I'd love to read your, erm, 'research' on the matter. Either a link to the blog or copy&paste the whole thing, whichever is more convient.
And now I understand why Fluttershy had no problem helping humiliating Rainbow Dash in The Mysterious Mare Do Well because 'she brags too much.' She and Trixie were real bitches in this.
Corrections;
'Her hearth felt as though' should be 'Her heart felt as though'
and
remove the 'it' in 'Even if it Trixie was a low down dirty cheat'
Keeping it short: If you enjoy tickling people, then you enjoy hurting people. That means you're a sadist.
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I've heard of 'tickle torture' before. I didn't realize it was literal.
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https://brokenworldnews.com/2014/09/15/cia-chief-denies-agency-uses-tickle-torture/
Yep. Apparently, tickle torture, Indian Rug Burns, Noogies, and even Wet Willys, were used as forms of torture / interrogation techniques in the CIA that are now banned by the Geneva Convention.