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One day Twilight sparkle caught on fire, then she was catched in a pokeball.
Title change? Click more info to see why.
TAGS:
Pokemon (chapter all)
My Little Pony (chapter all)
Toontown (chapter 2)
TF2 (chapter 3)
Donkey Konga (chapter 4)
Super Smash Bros. Brawl (chapter 5)
Flappy Bird (chapter 6)
Nyan Cat (chapter 7)
Pittsburgh, PA (chapter 8)
Doctor Who (chapter 9)
The Last of US (chapter 10)
Pong (chapter 11)
Minecraft (chapter 12)
Brock (chapter 13)
Mario (chapter 14)
The Brony Community (Chapter 15)
Twokinds (Chapter 16)
A CLUSTERF*CK OF BONUS CONTENT! Because I haven't done anything for a month.
Hops through Time and Space (chapter 17)
*CLASSIFIED INFO* (chapter 18)
ENTER TRAINER BLEENY AND APPLEJACK! (chapter 19)
Pikmin (chapter 20)
Dungeons and Dragons (chapter 21)
Deadly Danger Dungeon (chapter 22)
Gotta Captcha 'Em All (chapter 23)
Jasmin (chapter 24)

The title change goes along with the plot of chapter 15. Once that is out, and you read the story, you will understand why I changed it.

Chapters (42)
Comments ( 196 )
TGM

...I think I just lost some brain cells.

It's so cancerous, it's hilarious!

You really rustled a bunch of people's jimmies, I bet.

Name should probably be "Twilight is caught inside a Pokeball" instead of catched... Don't mind the random stranger in the comments... Wait isn't every commentator a stranger? I think I may be rambling into the void again.

You know you're in for fail when the author screws up the title of the story. :ajbemused:

3951991 Probably, I may take that into account. Do you like the story?

3951991 Also, not every comment is a stranger, I know some of the people in some comments.

Oh gawd david you are a monster. :pinkiehappy:

3952631 Why thank you, glad you like it :pinkiehappy:

This story gave me cancer.

3954579 This story gave me plastic.

3952137 How do you know I screwed up the title?

3959213
Because "catched" is never the past-tense of "caught", love. "Catched" isn't even a word.

i bet there will be a lot of raging in chapter 6

3959213

One day Twilight sparkle caught on fire, then she was catched in a pokeball.

3960467 yes? What are you saying? You just copy and pasted the description?

3960440 You may be correct.

3960475

Twilight is Catched in a Pokeball

You should have used caught.
Twilight is Caught in a Pokeball.

3960531 btw that comment was about 50 trollestia faces and one flutterrage

50:trollestia:1:flutterrage:

Awww no man... what have my brain cells stumbled upon this time...?

Will continue to read.

3962698
I swear, if I had five cents for every time someone cites Merriam-Webster as proof that their (mis)use of a word is "correct" even though no other bloody dictionary lists it as such...

That Merriam-Webster entry gives "catched" as a "dialectal" form. That means it's not standard English. M-W likes to list non-standard forms as an aid to people who are looking up archaic or non-standard uses -- Mark Twain, for example, used "catched" in the dialect of his Tom Sawyer and Huckleberry Finn characters, along with a lot of other grammatically-incorrect forms, because that was the way his semi-literate and uneducated characters from the 1800s talked. That doesn't mean it's an acceptable usage in standard, modern speech or writing, and I can guarantee you that no halfway-competent English teacher will let you get away with writing "catched" outside of an uneducated character's dialect.

3966554 So what I am getting from this is that my title is correct, but no one talked like it since the uneducated in the 1800s. I am still right in their mind. Just go ask them.

3966391 Why thank you. I try to update commenly, and will at least twice a week, but mostly on weekends. Also, Mario is great :)




3967405

"I want to write a complete chapter, that these uses place. "

pop = soda
gumband = rubber band
crick = creek

"let us all bow down before our lord ans saviour, Arceus."

...6 translations later, SDL gives us:

"So that leaves spread themselves each previously our gentleman a rescuer, Arceus. "

This is best ever.

3973149 Why thank you :twilightblush: I have no idea why 40 people would give it a thumbs down.

3973149 Also, hope you enjoy the other chapters, because I will be updating constantly, at least twice a week, mostly on weekends.

3973172 Because people are too hung up on the title? Because it makes no sense? All the reasons I love this story.

3973194 :pinkiehappy: SOMEONE WHO SEES LOGIC IN THIS STORY! Or the lack of logic, either way, I hope you enjoy the story. :derpytongue2:

3973145 Original text:

"Welcome back to twilight the bulbasaur and pokemon trainer red adventures"

...35 translations later, Bing gives us:

"Welcome to the mystery of the network axis Bulbasaur"

3966391 I think my brain cells have died.

3977753 Thank you, glad you liked the story.

I have witnessed my first interesting FAIL!! :ajbemused::derpyderp2::flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::rainbowhuh::raritydespair::twilightangry2::facehoof:

3978174 What do you mean? You don't like my story? :fluttercry:

Even if you were failing on purpose to be funny, this was horrible. Writing a bad story intentionally should not leave the reader thinking you're stupid. Read Final Draft's "Generic Story" trilogy. It's an intentional bad story, but it is done so that the reader is aware of that. Very few people who read it didn't get that Final Draft was joking.

3984552 How do you sleep at night? Going around calling people like me stupid. I HAVE FEELINGS TOO! YOU JUST CALLED MY STORY HORRIBLE! THERE ARE PEOPLE THAT LIKE THIS STORY! DON'T HATE ME BECAUSE I'M BEUTYFUL AND FAT! :fluttercry:

3984552 I do thank you for giving me 3 great stories though, I will read them later.

3978474
No one with an IQ over 80 likes your story.

3990056 I like this story and my IQ was 100 and somthing the last time I was tested (which was like 8 years ago) So, yeah, you're just being insulting.

3992699
Yes, I am being insulting.
It is widely considered to be a great way to express disdain, which you would already know if you were actually telling the truth about your own intelligence.:ajbemused:

3992832 Yes, because the best way to argue with people is CLEARLY to insult them. The reason I like this story is BECAUSE it's so bad. I :facehoof: at half of what's written. But instead of insulting the author, I praised him. Because that is the nice thing to do. You, people like you are the reason I don't read comments anymore.

3993989
"Because that is the nice thing to do"

You're absolutely right. Let's encourage people do to dumb things on purpose because we want to be "nice", in fact, why don't you send a fan letter to Miley Cyrus, Justin Bieber and whoever wrote the Twilight books telling them that you really love their work, and they should just keep being awesome.

3994688 Wow. Butthurt much? :twilightblush: In all seriousness, I agree, this fic is horrible. But it amuses me. I look at this and go "Haha, this is stupid and poorly written." And then, instead of doing what everyone else in the comments are doing, I thank the author for making me chuckle. The difference between this and things like Bieber and the Twilight books is that the author of this understands that this isn't the best, and doesn't go around saying "Look at my amazing thing that is better that everything else!" You missed the point of my last previous comments; This is I like this story, I don't think it is good.

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