Every year, Equestria holds the Olympics. This year, Cloudsdale, Manehatten, Los Pegasus, Baltimare, The Crystal Empire, Ponyville, Appleloosa, and Filly Delphia are participating. Las Pegasus is hosting the games, and everypony is excited. The ponies most excited though, are Celestia and Luna. When they were fillies, the two sisters always held their own Olympics with just them. They set up many events in the Royal Gardens, and whoever won most events won the gold medal. Celestia is happy to have her sister back, and she can't wait to have fun. But all does not go as planned. Tensions flare and Celestia and Luna turn this into more than just a game. Who will earn gold? And who will come out on top?
This was just a spur of the moment type thing, and I'm just writing it for fun.
-Derpy 2
I decided to look at your stories again, and I found this one, and I have to say, this was a nice read. Only one thing that slapped my grammar nazi side hard.
I'm pretty sure you mean "course" not "coarse". I point this out because anyone who knows the definition of these two knows that they are not the same.
I got anxious while reading this, not because of the fanfic, but because of what was going on at the moment. I'm listening to an hour long album mix, while reading this, while an update on my MacBook needs to be installed. I really needed to update because I can't stand it when there's an update that I didn't install.
My attention was drawn by the DBZ Celestia and Luna.
4214211 Thanks! I'll change that now. Must have slipped past me while editing....
As long as you don't take this story too seriously, it's fun reading. It also has a very interesting idea regarding why ageing spells are so difficult. I love that, when I'm reading a simple bit of silly fluff and there's a brilliant idea I've never thought about before. On the downside, I really can't believe a pony would ever be called Ham, and the Royal Sister's dragon has appeared out of nowhere. All in all, though, likeable silliness. So it gets a like.