It has been a month since Rainbow's "birth-iversary". But when a familiar face shows up, how does Pinkie react to this, when she has been depressed since he left?
Credit to BioSonic100 for letting me use this awesome title card! :D
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I personally like reading romance novels, like "A Twilight Dinner Date". (Go read it. Now. >:D) If you have any recommendations, please let me know. :)
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Aww
So little words, so many feels. Good job.
and the baby dragons say YAAAAAAA!!!!!
Happy Hearts and Hooves day.
Not bad :) I liked it. The end was a little bit rushed but I enjoyed the story. Keep up :D
3944621 Thank you!
3944701 Happy Hearts and Hooves Day to you too! :3
3944725 Thanks for the advice. I'll try to make it not as rushed next time.
And I'm glad you liked it!
You need to set the pace a bit better. It starts out well, but then the romance gets shoved down your throat.
3945067 I'm terribly sorry about doing that. I may rewrite it later on. And you are right. My pacing in this is way off. That I could work on in my later works. Thanks for the advice.
Cheesie Pie is best ship
3947590 Yes. Yes it is. :3
I'm becoming increasingly charmed by the Cheesie Pie ship myself, and this was a really cute tale!!
I admit the ending could have been paced a bit better, but the feels I got from this totally made up for it for me. I seriously shed a tear towards the end. It was absolutely beautiful!
3957213 Thank you for the kind words! I appreciate it!
3954127 Thank you!
This was a sweet story to read~
4075997 I'm glad you've enjoyed it!
So many feels!!!!!!!!!
I love this!
AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!
THE FEELS !!!!!!!!!!!
FEELS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!,IM LITTRALY CRYING...
The feels!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't take it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So cute!! One of my favorite CheesePie fanfics EVER
My heart could stop working and had been destroyed to pieces this would have still made me cry
I HAVE THE FEELS SO BAD RIGHT NOW this is my second favorite ship my first is ButtonBelle but that's besides the point
the feels level
....IT'S OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this story is AMAZE BALLS! just one tiny detail
i think you meant you know what
dem feels doh
I am crying.
The feels man. THE FEELS! Cheesepie truly is the most beautiful and amazing shipping in the entire history and world of my little pony.
Why does Pinkie have a horn in your picture? Jw
Daw!
I was reading this after the final season